This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Catastrophizing, Interrupted
By
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New people. Terror. Wish I hadn't come.
He's behind me. Hand on my shoulder.
Trembling, I replied.... |
The End
© Copyright DJfrmPA, 08 June 2003
Reviews:
C_bear <teddybearbrat(at)cableone(dot)net>
This one is interesting if a bit short, I really can think I know what is happening. I picture a first time party goer, either to paddles, or a shadow lane party. The only thing that it leaves me wondering is: what did she reply?
Kessily <kessily(at)aol(dot)com>
This entry is wonderful at showing the terror that people new to the spanking world experience. I remember feeling similar at my first party. In just a few words the author manages to convey every conflicting emotion...lovely.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I feel that my reviews of the sagas go on longer than the entry. But this was a wonderful entry. Well written, captures the moment, captures the insecurity, captures what many of us feel. Small small amount of words that paints a huge picture for me.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Wow. This sounds like her first time encounter with the spanking or BDSM world. I love this story. I hope that she finds something that she likes and desires. Very nice job.