This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
Sibling Lesson – 3
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Thirteen year old Sue was delighted. Ten year old Ricky (who in a couple of years would be Rex) was most unhappy. Their mother had changed the dynamic of this rainy Saturday afternoon by announcing that she had to go shopping and that Sue would be in charge. Ricky and Sue were the typical siblings and were at the ages where they could not stand each other. But now they were trapped – together – and alone in the house.
Actually, they really did not truly disagree but both wanted to be contrary. It made no difference to either of them whether they watched channel 5 or 9. They had seen the shows but the game was to make the selection. Likewise with the window – opened or closed – did not matter as long as it was what the other wanted – NOT!
Tiring of this, Sue retreated to the kitchen table with her homework and snacks. Ricky followed to get his own soda. What happened was not clear but Sue's drink soon overflowed onto her carefully written assignment. She was incensed at the damaged but overjoyed at the opportunity it afforded. "You'll pay for this, young man" she snarled imitating her mother, "Just wait until father gets home and I tell him."
Ricky was immediately gushing forth with apologies and continued to mop up. "It really was an accident, Sue, honest. Please don't tell. Dad will spank me."
"You deserve it, naughty boy ... but I won't tell ... if ... if you get spanked by me."
Reluctantly after some negotiations, Ricky agreed. Sue took great pleasure in pulling down his jeans and briefs and heaving him over her lap. She was so very excited. She was going to spank the nasty brat. She raised her hand and brought in down with a loud SPANK!
"JUST WHAT ARE YOU DOING SUSANNA MONA DILLINGBERG?" yelled their mother practically dropping the groceries. "You know that you're forbidden to hit your brother." A long discussion followed which was terminated by: "Ricky, get me the spoon, please."
She did not have to explain that she meant the big wooden spoon that was never used for cooking but just for heating up naughty bottoms. Ricky moved slowly feeling that he lost – not only did he have to bare his bottom for his sister but now for his mother with her watching. And the spoon hurt (although not as much as dad's hand). Sue was smiling at this turn of events. What was a little lecture considering she got to spank him and was now about to see mom really do it.
She was not prepared when mom pulled her, not him, over the maternal lap. Her skirt was raised and panties yanked down (with the brat watching). The spoon struck repeatedly.
"You will not hit your brother, young lady."
She had a long time in the corner to contemplate the rule with her skirt pinned up and her panties about her ankles.
She never understood why Ricky never teased her about that spanking.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 21 June 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
The dialogue brings you right into the situation at hand. In addition, mom's perfect timing made the story very realistic. Characters emotions, her surprise and anxiety where greatly described. The author pulled the reader in so you could see the entire picture vividly.
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a rather common example of a sibling spanks story, though with a nice (if predictable) twist at the end. The story suffers somewhat due to the point of view switching back and forth from first person to third person.
I don't believe I have read either of the two sister stories mentioned in the preface; these stories must stand on their own two feet anyway. The strongest point for this tale is the plot mechanism used, it gives much opportunity for strong characterization and story lines, sitcom style. Unfortunately, this story seems to be a pilot episode that isn't likely to be picked up for the season.
Kessily
Hehehe...normally I would gloat that the mean older sister had really gotten it...except that I have the feeling her brother might actually have preferred it if they had been interrupted. At any rate he certainly got a nice view and I'm sure he enjoyed that! Good story...good dynamics!