This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
DJ
By
Back and hip pains woke Derek.
His previous three months flooded back: capture, trial, conviction. Derek's fourth for mugging seniors subjecting him to society's harshest penalty.
The teen approached the cell's mirror needing visual proof of his punishment.
An elderly woman stared back.
Derek screamed. It was true.
He'd been dejuved.
The End
© Copyright Mija, 19 June 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
To make this mini-saga complete, I feel the only word missing is one that would reference Derek's bottom. «Back and hip pains» just didn't do it for me. I enjoyed the shock value of DJ very much. Well done.
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This story makes fun of the conventions of the genre in a sharp, hilarious way; but far from being simply funny, it also has undeniable inner logic in the way that consequences are appropriate to the actions. In a such a short story this deserves high praise. Well done.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
That was pretty hilarious. Very nice take on the rejuve world (of which I know very little). But this was original and funny. A plus in my book.
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