This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Line
Things
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I've done a lot of bad things in my life. Things which I deserve to be punished for. Things which I deserve to be pulled strongly over a lap, forced to bend over a couch, a stool, a chair, a desk for. Things which I deserve to have my pants, my underwear pulled down for, to be made to bare my behind for. Things which I deserve to be spanked, strapped, paddled, switched and caned for. Oh God, not the cane. Things which I deserve to moan for, to cry for and to beg forgiveness for until I can't beg or cry or moan anymore. Things which I deserve to be forgiven for, hugged for, loved for. Things which I need to atone for. I've done a lot of bad things in my life, but they haven't caught up with me yet.
The End
© Copyright RCG, 19 June 2003
Reviews
Sassy Jo <sassy_jolene@hotmail.com>
Things is a unique writing. It isn't especially original but it is thorough and descriptive. I like the way the author pulled it all together with the ending line. That was a bit unexpected.
Brad <b_radleym@yahoo.com.au>
I liked the unity of the total composition. The way the writer's thoughts were grouped together and the way it was written to build up towards the end. It was complemented by a surprise ending -- the fact that the writer's faults have not caught up with him yet. Funny.
Mary <GEMLADI@aol.com>
This seemed more like a rant than a poem to me, I had a hard time following it until the end and I could put it all together in my head, I feel sorry for the person in the poem, as it makes you feel that way when reading it. But it does speak of someone's true feelings very well in raw way.