This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
After reading CK's comment to
Sibling Lesson
I got an idea so here is another F/m tale. Need I mention that that story should be read first for maximum enjoyment, however, in keeping with the SSC rules, this is a stand-alone story.
Sibling Lesson -- 2
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
It had not been planned in advance but their parents suddenly had to be away for the night. Fifteen year old Rex was home alone. Sue, his arrogant eighteen year old sister still in high school, was coming in with her date when the clock struck midnight on a school night.
The young couple heading for the living room stopped when Rex roared as he came down the steps: "You're very late, young lady; your friend had better leave..." he paused for effect "...now." He did his very best to sound older than his years -- like an older, rather than younger, brother.
Sue's friend took one look at Rex, who was wearing only shorts and lots of muscles, and said a hasty goodbye knowing discretion was the better part of valor.
"It's two hours passed your curfew, young lady." he snarled.
He grabbed her by the wrist and lead her into the diningroom. Sitting down he pulled the protesting girl over his lap and clamped her in place. He was so much stronger than she was that it was like she was a mere child under the control of their father. He lifted her skirt up and pulled down her panties exposing her lovely smooth bottom. He delivered a hard SPANK to each check. The shock caused her to go silent as his hand prints formed.
He spanked her long and hard. He spanked her like their father had spanked him when he was just a boy of twelve (before he switched to the strap). It was her first spanking since she started high school and much harder than she had ever been spanked before but Rex did not know that. She yelled and twisted but Rex was totally in control. When he was satisfied, he carried her to bed. She bawled for more than an hour before dropping off to sleep.
As she came downstairs, she heard him saying: "Everything is OK mother. I've had breakfast and have to go now. Sis is running late and can't talk. Don't worry mom we'll be OK; take care of granny. Bye." and hung up the phone.
"Dad will kill you for what you did, Rex. And don't think I won't tell." Sue threatened.
Rex laughed hardily. "I don't think so, Sue. Dad would spank you every night for a week and stop your allowance. Mom would be so disappointed that you were so irresponsible when they trusted you. You better hurry or you'll be late for school. And I'm sure you don't want to sit through a detention today."
Sue had breakfast standing up.
The family dynamics changed after that and she was never asked to watch Rex again. Sue thought it was because Rex was implicitly blackmailing her. What she never learnt until after college was that their parents had called at 10:30 that fateful night. Rex had to call them back to report that she was home and soundly spanked after he put her to bed.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 06 June 2003
Reviews
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
I've not read Sibling Lesson, and in keeping with the rules of it being a stand alone, I did not go looking for the story to read it first.
Perhaps I missed something, but this is not a F/m tale, it is a m/F tale, since 15 year old Rex spanks 18 year old Sue. This does change the idea of what is expected to happen. But it does become fairly obvious quickly that the younger sibling will be holding the older sibling accountable for her behavior. I did let out a chuckle when the boyfriend beat a hasty retreat. There was not much in the way of character development, and I am guessing if I read the first story, I would understand some of the dynamics a bit better. The ending helped some. All in all, it was a decent story.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Although I enjoyed the description of Sue's spanking and the role reversal of a younger sibling taking care of an older one, this didn't seem like a complete, stand-alone story to me. The last paragraph raises a question, too: Sue and Ken's parents never asked Sue to watch Ken because Ken was blackmailing Sue? It's hard to explain everything within a 500-word limit, but that was especially unclear.
<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
An interesting story line with good potential for further development. I did find a 15 year old boy spanking his adult 18 year old sister a bit of a stretch of the imagination. Perhaps he might be a year or two older than she. Also, might consider putting a little more tension into it, as the
sister realizes she is about to be spanked. Suggest more action and dialogue to build the tension. Nor is it likely she'd go over his knee without a great deal of struggle and protest (more than what is shown in the story). Has all the elements of a short story going for it: conflict, characterization, plot, dialogue and resolution (change) within one or more of the characters.