This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Line
Sibling Lesson -- 1
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Rex was feeling very smug as he laid in his bed listening to his big, bossy sister complaining to their mom. She had been going at it for more than an hour repeating the same thing over and over to a patient mother. Normally, he hated hearing her but this time was very different.
It was several hours ago that things had come to a head. The eighteen year young lady had been left in charge of the fifteen year old youth. Years of sibling rivalry were behind the events. They had, once again, fought. Neither could tell about what it was about any more but that detail was trivial. What was important was the action that followed.
She had shouted and he had ignored her ranting. She had pushed and, having caught him off guard, was pleased that he fell over the end of the couch with his butt jutting up in the air. She yanked at his lose shorts and exposed his ass. Momentarily, she was surprised at how hairy it was as he was surprised at her actions.
She knew all about spankings; or so she thought. She had been spanked until she turned thirteen and he was still being spanked -- and crying too -- from their father's heavy handed discipline.
Now the moment she had dreamed of for a long time -- spanking her bratty kid brother. She raised her hand and brought it down hard and swift on his butt about a dozen times in less than a minute. Then it got to her. It was a searing, burning pain, like she imagined from hitting a solid steel wall; a red-hot, solid steel wall. Her jock brother, the wrestler, the iron-pumper with buns of steel was laughing as he got up and left her crying.
Now, a couple of hours latter with her hand stuck in a pail of ice water she was crying to their mother.
Rex was doing his best to keep quiet now certain that she would never, ever spank him with her hand. The searing burning hand. Yes, just like grandmother had been saying for years: "The burned hand teaches best."
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 04 June 2003
Reviews
Haron <Haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Nice story with an extremely satisfying twist. The characters are believable and alive, and since both of them get what they deserve in the end, this story makes a pleasant and satisfying read overall.
Mary <GemLadi(at)aol(dot)com>
I found this short story cute and it gave me a little chuckle, as I imagined it in my head. I have not read anything like this before on the NG, so it was original at least to me. All in all very well done.
Lori <Peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
This was my favorite line: «Her jock brother, the wrestler, the iron-pumper with buns of steel was laughing as he got up and left her crying.» The use of the "Last line," sure did explain how this boy's older sister learned her lesson never to try to hand spank her little brother again. The piece had a very different turn then most spanking stories on the SSS. Some of the sentences had word placements that didn't flow so well, but over all a good and different story.