This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Period
Rejuve stories take place in the universe created by lurking dragon. In this universe criminals, elderly people, sick people, people involved in accident, or people who just want to be younger, are rejuved to childhood.
For criminals it is a very painful sentence of punishment. After being rejuved to childhood they are assigned spanko parents, who have the job of punishing the little criminals often and severely.
Four Years
By
Four years was a lot of time to repent your mistakes, but that was how long Erik had regretted his crimes. Now that it was finally over the eleven year old could look back and be sure he had truly learned his lesson. He was just grateful that he now wore the silver 'C' of Completas; it had taken him a long time to repay his debt to society, but it was finally done.
Erik wasn't the kind of person you'd expect to become a Penitatas. As a Kindern he'd been quiet, well behaved; even as a young adult he'd never been in any kind of trouble. Then he made a mistake. It wasn't serious, but it led to another and another until finally he found himself in court.
He might have been all right then, but he'd developed an attitude that had not impressed the judge. With sentencing at the judge's discretion, he would learn to regret that every day of his life for the next four years.
His rejuvenation into the form of a seven-year-old boy came suddenly and without pain. One minute he was an adult, the next ... he wasn't. He stood there, confused and disoriented; it was a common side effect. Both emotionally and physically, being Rejuved was a huge transition.
"Erik! I'm so happy to meet you honey," a blonde woman said.
He turned, startled to find that she had entered through a door behind him, with a smiling man in tow. He opened his mouth to speak, but no words offered themselves.
"Look honey, isn't he adorable?" she gushed to her husband.
"Yup, he's a fine young lad," he agreed. "Just one thing wrong with him, he needs a welcome to the family spanking."
Erik, unsure of what to make of the pair, started backing up against the wall. "L.l.leave me alone," he pleaded. He knew what naughty Penitatas children got, and he didn't want it!
"Don't be silly son, you're ours now!" the man said, chuckling at the young boy's fright. "All ours to love...and spank!" he reached out and dragged the protesting child to the nearest chair, "And speaking of spanking...."
Erik yelped as he found himself tipped upside down and dumped over the man's hard knee. "Noooo," he begged.
It was pointless; the large hand began to descend, and continued to do so until the boy had long passed the point of hysterics. As if that wasn't enough, it was soon his mother's turn. And for the next four years his life was much the same.
He slammed the photo album closed, his parting gift from his Penny Parents. It was filled with pictures of his first days as a Rejuve, and his more momentous spankings and punishment days. They had loved him well, but he was glad to say goodbye to them. He kept the book though, as a reminder of what he'd lived through and a warning to himself not to make any more mistakes!
The End
© Copyright Kessily, 04 June 2003
Reviews
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
I think that this captured what the Rejuve series is all about in a short story (at least how I understand it). Beginning, middle, end. Very good. Nicely written, easy to follow. I think those who follow this series will be impressed.
Jessie
I have to admit that I haven't read a great many rejuve stories, but I've read enough to understand the basic premise. I wondered how an author would manage a rejuve story in under 500 words. The flashback was a clever idea. The story manages to convey sufficient details and still tell a complete tale. Good handling of a difficult task.
Wild Thing <entirely_real(at)yahoo(dot)com>
The concept is interesting, but the execution leaves something to be desired. The actual content of the story, beyond the premise itself, is unremarkable. So is the quality of the writing.