This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Finally
By
As my eyes flutter open I smile, wiggle my toes and touch the warm body next to me. Finally, in my bed is a man, I love.
I smell his skin and plant little kisses from his shoulder down, as he stirs. "Humm, good morning my sweet baby girl."
Finally, I'm someone's and they appreciate my loving attention.
Finally, I kiss down to his hard-on and lick, suck and nuzzle him into a cheshire girn.
"My greedy little girl, couldn't let me sleep till the alarm could you?"
"No, I couldn't! I'm naughty that way, slurp."
"Humm, naughty girls get bare bottom spankings, little girl."
"Uh huh," I hum around his cock and wiggle my tushie high.
His big hand lowers my lacy trimmed panties, then comes down hard on my bottom in spank after stinging spank, finally!
The End
© Copyright Peachesicu, 03 June 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Very nice job on this story. I like the way that you describe how she feels. It's fun to see her do something that she enjoys to get something that she wants.
I enjoyed the sensations and images shared here by the author. The description of the feelings upon waking are wonderful. I was surprised to find that she had her bottom close enough to his hands that he could lower her panties. I enjoyed seeing the lengths that she was willing to travel to gain/obtain her objective of a spanking.
Don Landhill <dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a good, solid, spanking scene. The spanking element is a bit light, but then how much can one do in under 200 words? The sense images were vivid, IMO. The "wake him up and get spanked" scene is a classic and still well worth doing more variations on they instead of he bugs me a bit, but that is a truly minor issue. Thanks and please keep writing.
Wild Thing <entirely_real(at)yahoo(dot)com>
There is nothing interesting or creative about the subject or the language. It doesn't really say anything. And there are grammatical errors.