This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'V'enial Sin
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Virginity
Venus-velocity
Verisimilitude
Vaporous vibes
Vintage vines
Vampire-verve
Viper veils
Viscous-vice
Velvet vacuum
Vixen vessels
Volcanic
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
I have liked this system of poetry in all you past efforts, but this one didn't catch me quite as much...I still however think this is a very clever means of telling a story.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This is an interesting free verse poem that uses many one word lines. It is well written yet I don't find the connection to spanking... It might take a few readings ...
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
I enjoyed the visual effects of this one particularly well. There was something about the couplets, with all the Vs that was very pleasing to me. Very. <G>
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
Some interesting juxtapositions here, and certainly one of the more explicit alphabet poems. «Velvet vacuum» is certainly a striking and erotic image. The poem as a whole is more mixed, and lacks the sense of cohesiveness of the earlier poems in this sequence.