This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry A parody of I Feel the Earth Move by Carole King.
I feel her butt squirm
By
Don A. Landhill <DLandhill@aol.com>
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I feel her butt squirm over my lap
Oh Lady, when I see your ass
I feel her butt squirm over my lap
Oh darling, don't you fear me
I feel her butt squirm over my lap
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The End
© Copyright by DAL June, 2002
Reviews
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
This parody is very, very, very catchy. I have been walking around singing the first two lines in my head ever since it appeared in my inbox a week ago. I liked this verse in particular:
| Oh darling, don't you fear me
Even when I sternly call your name I know that your emotions are something you need help to tame I'm here to help you, lady |
It nicely captures What We Do. It strikes me that this would be a difficult song to parody, so it is quite a feat that you have managed it so thoroughly!
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
It's like singing along with my favorite song, it just seems to fit nicely together. Now if I get this song stuck in my head, there going to be hell to pay. But, this parody was cute, and I liked it.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I'm not really well-acquainted with the original here. Showing my age perhaps. (Ha!) This has a nice flow to it, though, and I'm sure Ms King would be, well, um, honoured.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
An excellent song parody. The lyrics and phrasing of the original song are very well matched, and the imagery is very effective.