This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Parody/Poetry
'B' Team
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
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Bitch.
Boundless. Bumptious.
Becoming.
Bawling.
Beginnings... Bequeath.
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
An original idea certainly, and with some effective use of language. I thought «Baroquely Beaten» was a fascinating image and choice of words, and the use of alliteration in some of the other lines works quite well.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Bafflingly Boring B-Grade Bumbling
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
After much contemplation, I find the only thing I can say with any honesty is that these letter poems did not work for me. Of the three under my purview, this 'B' Team poem is my favorite, though I confess that I have no idea what the title has to do with the poem. The «Brazenly Bored. Brat». section, and then the stanza that goes, «Bawling. Brilliantly Broken. / Backside Beaming...» are evocative and have the potential to paint a portrait in words of a delicious spanking scene, however the gratuitous profanity at the beginning and then lines like «Bottom Badlands» destroy that potential for this reader.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This one's b'yond me ;) but I am not the best reviewer for poems. I like the overall idea of the alphabet poems, tho.