This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Not my kink A very odd thing happened when I sat down to write this. This flowed out of me, like a tantrum. Then I sat back, and reread it, and laughed. This is SO not my kink.
Hot Sexy Story
By
Zprymantis <zprymantis@smilingwithteeth.com>
"You little whore, you filthy bitch! No good slut! You put too much sugar in my coffee again!"
Marjorie blushed and fumbled with the coffee pot, precariously balanced on her high heels. Her full breasts heaved as she started to cry. "I'm sorry Mr Hardcock, I won't do it again, please don't be mad at me."
As she sat the fresh coffee mug down in front of him, Mr Hardcock stroked his hardness through his pants.
"How about a little head baby, that would put me in a better mood."
"Oh, Mr Hardcock, no please. It's too big and makes me gag!"
"Fuck this shit. I'll just get me another stupid bitch to be my secretary. Now suck it, or walk. No stupid cunt is gonna hold onto me by the short hairs."
Marjorie got down on her knees and started to unbuckle his pants. Her face said no, but the eager way she gobbled him down said yes.
Mr Hardcock grabbed her hair and started thrusting her head up and down. As he started to cum, Marjorie gagged and swallowed, but a bit dribbled out.
"Can't you do anything right? Whore." a hard slap across Marjorie's face left a print, and her hand flew up and tears of submission leaked off the tip of her nose.
"It's spanking time, OH yeah"
Mr Hardcock loved to spank, he had a fetish - um, yeah. Oh baby.
"Strip, I want it all off, every bit. Naked is how I want you, it's the only way to spank."
Marjorie wiped the cum from her lips and lifted her tight red dress over her head, shook her long hair, and stood almost nude, in nothing but a G-string and panty hose.
"Those too," Mr Hardcock pointed.
Marjorie slid down her panty hose, along with her thong, which she flung at him like a sling shot. This prompted Mr Hardcock to remove all his clothes as well.
"Now, let me think, should I wrap you up in saran wrap and spank your ass, or just spank those bodacious ta tas?"
"Oh, you are such a pervert Mr Hardcock!" Marjorie giggled.
Mr Hardcock sneered and flung Marjorie to the floor of his office, sat on top of her and started spanking her butt like bongos.
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The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
It's interesting to know what Z's kink is not. She does a good job of underlining the usual defects of the stories that authors don't bother thinking out. The final paragraph is both eloquent and evocative, shining with real passion.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
An unusual story, but fun nonetheless. It has a kind of cartoon quality to it, with colourful larger-than-life characters speaking outrageous dialogue. Almost a parody of certain types of fantasy and very amusing.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
As this is also not my kink, I don't know how well the title Hot Sexy Story applies. Throughout, I could feel you poking fun at the conventions of that genre of story. We're both familiar with it, and you called them to mind particularly well. I was most amused by the business man's name. <G>
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
This may have raised a laugh with the author, but I'm afraid it didn't for me. I felt it tried to say too much in the space that was allowed. A little more build-up and character would have made it work much better.
I also felt that everything after the word bongos could have been taken out without affecting the tale at all.