This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Not my kink Father/daughter is not-my-kink. I have recently been writing some of these stories for a friend and thought I would enter this one in ssc2002.
Access Rights
By
Plierla Fesserla <rexkitchen89@hotmail.com>
'You want access rights? Hmm . . . OK. I'll agree to her staying with you the first weekend each month, on one condition; if she needs disciplining, I can send her over any Friday evening.'
He so wanted to retain contact with his daughter. But, he hated his ex's scheming.
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The following Friday, Sandie was across his lap; skirt folded back, his hand brushing lightly across the seat of her knickers. He patted her up thrust bum several times, and then his hand rested there. What a delightful bottom.
She barely moved her hips but, with his heightened sense of touch, it was inevitable that he would feel her warm, taught flesh slide beneath the thin cotton. His heart pounded; he was on the very edge of ripping them off her, spanking her long and hard, and then, when his hand could take no more he'd put her over the back of the sofa and . . .
Guilt engulfed him; suddenly he realised what a monster he'd almost become. He fought to push the evil thoughts from his mind. How could he hurt his darling daughter? He had never even slapped her when she was a young child. True, that was why she was here, but why should he give his ex the satisfaction?
Emotions flooded Sandie's brain too. She wanted to voice her desires but couldn't. She thought, 'Daddy that feels wonderful. Your hand, so large and strong, yet touching my behind so gently. What an exquisite contrast to the stinging spanks that must follow soon. Please daddy, don't spare me, smack it as hard as you can.'
She waited for what seemed like an eternity. I'll just have to tell him to do it. But, I can't. How could she, daddy's sweet, innocent, little girl.
He'd never done more than pat her bum before. Nevertheless, she hoped that this time his hand would smack down hard. She longed for him to pull down her panties and spank her so very hard, make it really sting. Why wasn't he doing it? After all, that was why she was there? If he would just start spanking her, she might then be able to tell him to use his belt. She knew he'd comfort her afterwards, she could melt into his arms and they would demonstrate the depth of the love they had for each other.
She realised that he was talking to her. His voice sounded different. Strangely, she couldn't make out his mood. What was it? Sad, grumpy, angry, disappointed maybe even frustrated, perhaps all of these.
What was he saying? Oh no! 'Get up. Go home. Tell your mother what she expects to hear.'
In desperation, she had to say something, 'daddy, she'll know you didn't . . . She'll know I haven't been . . .'
It was no good; he pushed her out the front door, slamming it behind her.
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When Sandie arrived back home moody, mummy could tell, she hadn't been spanked. She smiled smugly, congratulating herself; she knew them both so very well.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
There's something pleasingly debauched about this story: all of the characters are slightly unpleasant and scheming in their own way, and they seem to deserve each other. The old question of whether someone with a spanking kink can ever ethically spank their own child is addressed too, but with an unexpected and original twist. I'd like to see the story told from a single point-of-view, though. The leaping from inside the head of one character to another doesn't work as well as it might, and reduces the effect of what is an interesting plot.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
That ex-wife is a creepy person. That said, I particularly like how you turned from one character to the other, showing their inner thoughts, and allowing the story to develop through those. I also like the ambiguity about whether the ex was getting what she wanted out of the situation, or not.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
I would've never known that this wasn't the writer's kink if they hadn't said so in the opening notes. I enjoyed this story thoroughly from beginning to end. What a wicked, evil mother, manipulating her ex-husband and teenage daughter so thoroughly. I was left hoping that the daughter got the spanking she so desperately wanted and then the ex-wife got the one she so richly deserved.
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
This may not be the writer's kink, but he handles it with sympathy, and skill. How both father and daughter are tempted but neither crosses the line. A comment on what it means to be human, flawed but basically moral.
Nice twist, too. The mom is a real bitch, punishing them both by making them have to frustrate each other. Makes you hope there's such a thing as karma, and someday she gets it good.