This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Not my kink
A Boy's Best Friend
By
Kent Stoneking <kentls01@pacifier.com>
"Norman!"
No answer.
"Norman!"
Still no reply.
"NORMAN!"
"Yes, Mother?"
"Get in here, now!"
"Coming, Mother."
"Now, Norman, I know all about your peeking in on that young woman in the shower."
"But, Mother --"
"Don't you 'but Mother' me! You're a _very_ naughty boy, Norman, and you know what happens to naughty boys in this house!"
"Please, Mother, no!"
"Oh, yes, Norman: the paddle!"
"Mother, I'm too old for that!"
"You're never too old for a good dose of Mother's paddle, especially as naughty as you've been. Now stop arguing and pull down your pants. Your underpants, too. That's it, right down to your ankles. Now bend down over the bed and hold still while I give that naughty bottom of yours the paddling it deserves!"
WHACK! "OWWWW!"
"It hurts, doesn't it, boy?"
WHACK! "OWWWWW!"
"I said, doesn't it, boy?"
WHACK! "OWWW! YESSSS! It hurts, Mother, it hurts!"
"Good." WHACK! "A paddling isn't effective unless it hurts." WHACK! "Now, listen to me, Norman." WHACK! "You're not to be spying" WHACK! "on young ladies" WHACK! "while they're in" WHACK! "the shower." WHACK! "Do you understand me?" WHACK!
"Yes, Mother, yes! I understand you!"
"That's naughty," WHACK! "nasty," WHACK! "filthy behavior. It isn't something" WHACK! "good boys" WHACK! "do. I didn't raise you" WHACK! "to be" WHACK! "such a filthy creature!" WHACK! "We'll have" WHACK! "no more" WHACK! "of that." WHACK! "Do you" WHACK! "hear me," WHACK! "boy?"
"I hear you, Mother!"
"Do you" WHACK! "promise to" WHACK! "never engage" WHACK! "in such" WHACK! "filthy behavior" WHACK! "again?"
"Yes, Mother, I promise!"
"You'd better" WHACK! "mind your word," WHACK! "boy." WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! "Okay, I guess that's enough. Get up and get dressed, then go on down to the office. It's nearly time to open up. And don't forget that Cabin One still needs a new shower curtain."
The young man, ruefully rubbing his backside, walked slowly down the hill from the house to the office. He switched on the illuminated sign by the side of the deserted highway: BATES MOTEL. He wondered, briefly, if anyone would stop in that night; then he headed for the supply room, to get a new shower curtain for Cabin One.
The End
Explanation: this is not my kink for two reasons:
1) There's a male on the receiving end, and
2) It involves self-spanking
If any of you don't understand the references in the above story, rent the movie Psycho -- but be sure and get the original 1960 version directed by Alfred Hitchcock, not the 1998 remake or any of the sequels.
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
I enjoyed the twisty and twisted ending. It came as a wonderful surprise. Thank you for sending this along.
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
Not my kink, either. Movies, I mean. Masturbation and self-spanking are just fine. But I'm dense enough not to have recognized the reference without the author's aside.
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
This one took me several reads before I worked it out. It was probably too clever - and a few more words would have helped.
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
This story in it's self is ok. The problem lies in the category it was put in. Writers just don't seem to write as well when they are not writing something they enjoy. So maybe this story was a test to see if the writer could come up with a good story.
Unfortunately, for this reader, I think it could have been better.