This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
The Chase
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"Get back here for your spanking!"
She bolts, trying to stay one step ahead. She gets to the bathroom, grasps the door, closing it, as............
"Now you're going to get it," he says, barging in.
"Damn, I gotta take up track," she laughes, as the wooden spoon imprints her butt.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
This was very cute and I enjoyed how every word counted and made the mini story move along. It's difficult to convey any plot at all in that few words, and you succeeded admirably. Thank you for submitting this.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
Review: This is a witty satire showing us the importance of keeping in shape. The character tells us that the chase is just as much fun as the consequence.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
The Chase provides a quick glimpse of a classic pre-spanking ritual. The direct, friendly tone makes it a good read, and the last line made me smile.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Cute playful mini saga.