This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga Every US school story you'll ever read, in exactly 50 words!
School, Abbreviated - US Version
By
Natty <nattys@newsguy.com> and Abel <abel1234@hotmail.com>
Knocks, nervously.
"Enter".
Principal stands. "Disgraceful, young lady."
"Sorry, sir."
Fetches paddle.
Trembling.
"Bend over now."
Drops jeans. "Six - count."
Touches toes.
Whacks. THUD!
Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Mumbles. Squirms. Agonizing.
Tears flow as swats applied.
Bites lip.
"Last one hardest."
Replaces paddle.
Comforts.
Signs Parental Note.
"Close door behind you."
"Yes, Sir."
The End
© Copyright by Abel Jenkins and Natty S Summer, 2002
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
Very Good...got the job done in 50 words, exactly...and so did the principle!!!
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
These authors have certainly done their homework. They have the outline for this sub-genere down pretty pat. How many stories have you read, anyway? Uh uh. And what were you supposed to be doing for all that time?
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
After reading this story, the writers of the school genre may very well retire. Natty and Abel have done all the job for them. Maybe the authors could prove themselves wrong, and write a story that doesn't fit into their summing-up? I'm sure the audience would be most appreciative.
Simon <srb(at)imrryr(dot)demon(dot)co(dot)uk>
A wicked little parody of cliched US school tales. The essence of all these stories was expertly extracted and condensed into 50 words. A nice idea well executed.