This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Post Warm-up Blues
By
Lurking Col <lurkingcol@hotmail.com>
It was the best of times. It was the worst of times.
Mark's sound warm-up had left a toasty warmth that tingled deeper than Ang's bottom. Spanking was so sexy Ang was tempted to flirt at her husband's next work party. If only the cold hairbrush weren't still to come.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
Very nice. I liked the way you told a long story in just a few words. Thank you for sending this along.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
Although this is entered as a mini-saga, the reader is advised to pay attention to the first and last lines, especially the last one <shiver>.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
This was a case where I wished the story was the begining of a longer tale. Nice, descriptive imagery, particularly that warm tingle. :) I hope this nice beginning turns into something longer!
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
That's it? I want part two! I love the first line, «Mark's sound warm-up had left a toasty warmth that tingled deeper than Ang's bottom.» It's so evocative but at the same time so restrained. Also, a cool use of the first/last line, even though this wasn't submitted to that category.