This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Mini-saga
 

First Place

Dear Parents

By

Katie Bad Grrl <KatieBadGrrl@aol.com>
 

I regret to inform you that our student discipline problems continue. As you know, corporal punishments have become ineffective since the after-school BDSM club started. We are hesitant to assign lines due to the risk of carpal tunnel syndrome.

Henceforth all infractions will be dealt with through arbitration.

Thank you.

The End

© Copyright Summer, 2002

Reviews

Anne  <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
A lot can be said for so short a story. A delightfully humorous piece that made me chuckle. Extra curricular programs have changed a lot in my day. An ironic little twist, corporal discipline not having an affect any more. Gee, I wonder why?

Abrat4you  <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
It is very clever and original...the format set up grabbed the imagination... I loved it...imagine actually punishing someone with a thing they love... NOW that could never happen!!!...

Needy Wench  <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Dear Ms. BadGirl:

Your story brings a smile to my face. The tone of your letter strikes just the right note between comedy and haplessness, just like many other institutional letters we all deal with. My only quibble is that it is not about spanking per se, as it is mentioned only in passing. You may have to stay after class. Sincerely, your judge.

Kate  <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
This is hysterical.  I love the second to last line.  Very punchy little mini-saga.  The only scary part is that aside from the fact that BDSM hasn't become an accepted, tolerated sexual deviation yet, this sort of letter isn't too far off from reality.