This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Consensus of Opinion to Public Applause
By
"Uncouth? A Clod?
IF I'd dragged your squalling, swearing, tripping, stumbling, digging heels up the steps to center stage. IF I'd flung up your dress, ripped down your drawers and blistered your bare ass with my BELT. You MIGHT have reason to complain.
Right, bloke?"
"Hmmmmm... Encore if you please."
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
This is a good giggle. The 50 word category tends to get a lot of poorly focused stuff to which the reader's unfortunate response is 'huh?' But this one keeps tight focus, and is nice.
Oh, by the way, I hope the title was intentional pomposity, because it is. "consensus of opinion" is redundant, since one simply can't have a consensus of anything else. Not to worry. I was publicly applauding, too.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Very actively written...you can almost feel the heat coming from the words. Well done.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Interesting but seemingly incomplete. This reads like 50 words cut out of a much more complex and complete story.
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
Not quite sure what this one is referring to, but it's well described, and it builds up nicely.