This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
The following is a what going on here story. It is based on an image of a boy leaning over a music stand in what looks like a classroom that someone sent to me. The boy is wearing short shorts and knee socks. His sweater and shirt have pulled up exposing his back just above his shorts. He looks apprehensive and has long bangs. Unfortunately, I don't know about its copyright so I can not post it. By now it is surly obvious that this story is about school boy discipline.
Alfie -- Version 6
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Alfie, bent over the lectern watched intently as his roommates played rock-scissor-paper to decide who would get first crack at his butt. Since afternoon Friday they had been confined inside and for these sixty hours Alfie had been whining continuously.
His roommates suddenly rebelled, conferred and presented him with an ultimatum. If he so much said another word about the weather etc., he would be evicted from the room -- permanently. He was quiet for only an hour when he opened his mouth again. The three pounced on him and pushed him into the hall.
Alfie begged them for another chance as they blocked his return to the room. They stared at him silently for a long time. He continued to beg.
"You got a big mouth." said Travis.
"Slowgrove would cane you for it." said Ned. Slowgrove was the master best known for sharing his love of the cane.
In desperation, Alfie blurted out: "OK, cane me instead."
Travis, Ned and Damion looked at each other and then at the desperate Alfie. Three smiles appeared as they said: "Yeah."
Five minutes later they were in the study hall where Slowgrove kept one of his many canes. Alfie, having been ordered to wait over the lectern, watched as they slugged it out for several rounds.
"I'm first." yelled Damion as his 'rock' crushed Ned's 'match' and shattered Travis's 'scissor'. He picked up the cane and started practicing as Ned 'incinerated' Travis in the next round.
Alfie suddenly realized that bounds hadn't been set and he was at the mercy of his roommates but even to say a word, was not an option. The SWOSH as Damion practiced with the cane sent shivers through Alfie.
Damion took his position. Then Travis spoke in a commanding roar. "Drop them, Alfie. We're not going to thrash your shorts."
Already in a daze, Alfie stood up and pushed his pants to his ankles and resumed his position. He did not have to wait long for within just seconds Damion raised and lowered the cane.
He yelled as much in surprise as pain. "Good cut." said Ned. If he hadn't been the recipient Alfie would have agreed. Damion's other three were just as hard.
"Have fun" said Damion as he handed the cane to Ned.
"I will. I certainly will." said Ned practicing with the cane. He gave Alfie four brutal strokes that left him with tear filled eyes and a death grip on the stand so he would not start begging for mercy.
Travis was the strongest and Alfie tried to put his mind elsewhere. Travis made sure that he remained focused by putting one on his thighs, one in the crease and two diagonally over the first eight. Alfie was crying.
It was an hour before Alfie returned to him room and collapsed on his bed. Within the hour he started to whine about the pain in his butt.
"Sounds like he needs another lesson." said Ned. Alfie shut up instantly.
The End
© Copyright August 12, 2002
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
The writing was easy to follow...I liked the way the ending and the beginning were tied in...I also liked the reactions of all the boys, both the "victim" and the punishers...good story.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
Well thats what happens when you moan out of turn I suppose. A nicely related tale of the come uppance of a moaner. I was intrigued how the three boys got such easy access to the canes but I wont nit pick. I did think the characters seemed a little wooden and not too credible but the story was nice enough.
Margaret <wessyLA(at)aol(dot)com>
This captures the brutatility of childhood very succinctly. Thank you for sending it along.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
Very well put together. The characters are well-designed, and the suspense of the caning adds to the drama of the event itself. You don't go overboard, leaving it at just 12 of the best, which adds to the tightness of the plot. A nicely done short story, with just enough drama and humor to fill the size limits, with nothing lacking, and nothing over-done.