This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
The following is a what going on here story. It is based on an image of a boy leaning over a music stand in what looks like a classroom that someone sent to me. The boy is wearing short shorts and knee socks. His sweater and shirt have pulled up exposing his back just above his shorts. He looks apprehensive and has long bangs. Unfortunately, I don't know about its copyright so I can not post it. By now it is surly obvious that this story is about school boy discipline.
Alfie -- Version 5
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
Alfie was worried as he leaned over the music stand with his butt in the air. He did not want to be here in this position at all. He could stand up, walk to the door less than three meters away and leave. Chris, Pat and Terry had been most clear that it was totally his decision and that he had thirty minutes to decide.
The choice was a tough one. Either he could agree to accept punishment from them or from the head. He had vivid memories of the last time he had been disciplined by the head and they were not pleasant. That and what happened to Thackeray less than two weeks ago for this same transgression had convinced him to take his chances with his fellow students.
He had been in position for about ten minutes when they walked in and smiled at him. They looked much bigger now that they were back in their uniforms particularly since he was bent over. They were actually bigger as they were sixth formers and he was only a first former.
Alfie watched as Pat opened the bag with the fencing foils, extracted a junior cane and walked over to him. As Pat tapped the target, Chris announced that he was to get two from each of them.
SWOSH! CRACK!!
Alfie bit his lip and gripped the pole tightly. It would not be good to show how much it hurt.
SWOSH! CRACK!!
The second one hurt as much.
Pat handed the cane to Chris. A lefty; the approach was on the other side. The cane was raised and
SWOSH! CRACK!! SWOSH! CRACK!!
in rapid secession. Chris hit hard and in new places. Alfie hurt but he continued to put on a brave face. It would never do to cry or yell.
Alfie was surprised that Terry was also a lefty.
SWOSH! CRACK!!
It was almost over. Terry then walked to his other side and delivered the last stroke.
SWOSH! CRACK!!
This was the hardest of them all. Fortunately it was over. He was pleased that he had not shown any weakness before them.
He shook hands with each of them (just like if they had been masters) and Terry even gave him a little smack on the cheek as he walked out of the room.
His mates were just around the next corner and wanted to know what had happened. He did his best to be macho and nonchalant as he mis-reported "six but not of the best" with a laugh.
In the bog, the red mark on his cheek was noticed. Alfie looked in the mirror and laughed. "Terry's lipstick" and dropped his shorts and pants so his classmates could examine the marks. Silently, he wondered how he could get another look at the girls showering without being caught.
The End
© Copyright August 1, 2002
Reviews
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
This was an excellent descriptive story of a well earned caning. Very clever how the punishers are unmasked at the end. Terry, Chris, and Pat are not at all what they appear to be. Young Alfie took his punishment bravely especially the seventh smack!
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A very plausible background story for a picture. I particularly liked the "choose-the-gender-you-prefer" spankers.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This fifth variation on the Alfie story brings a new twist to the classic schoolboy theme. I like the main character's hard-won stoicism, and the way Y. Lee sums up the story's background information in his introduction.
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
The boy's pride and fear are really well done- the line about the "six of the best" being not so best is a perfect example of spankee's bravado, and one every spankee should remember. The waiting for punishment part of the story is also a great read - one can just imagine being bent over a stand hoping that the people picked to punish are the right ones.