This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
The Estate Agent
By
Alex Birch <alexbirch@blueyonder.co.uk>
'It's well appointed, spacious with plenty of room and light' Annabel purred as she gestured around the room, hoping her voice was still well modulated and not deteriorating into a shrill whine of desperation. She was in her final week of probation in the estate agency and, although tall and beautiful, her dark hair and eyes turning many a head, it hadn't been enough to sell anything.
The middle aged couple currently viewing were the tenth that day and on six of those appointments, Annabel thought she'd been so close to a sale but it had drifted away. The house would have sold itself last week but since then interest rates on mortgages had risen and it was an uphill struggle.
Annabel loved the job and was terrified she would lose it. Hopefully, trying not to appear desperate, she smiled at the couple who were in earnest discussion and waited for a decision.
The man shrugged his shoulders and smiled 'Its very nice, my dear, just what we had in mind but the price is just a little beyond..' He saw Annabel's face drop and squeezed her arm. 'Look..' he said '..I'm sure we're not far apart but the wife wants to go shopping so if you and I sit down for a few minutes, then maybe_____'
Annabel smiled eagerly as the man kissed his wife goodbye and then sat down next to the eager young woman.
Expecting a bargaining offer, Annabel was stunned when the man looked her straight in the eye and said 'You know, my dear, you have the most shapely bottom. I really would like to spank it!'
Her first reaction was outrage and it must have showed in her eyes but just as fast she realised what this might mean. '..and you might make a positive decision if.' she asked quietly and , when he nodded and patted his knee, she placed herself over his lap shaking like a leaf.
'Hey..' she yelled as she felt her long black skirt being lifted way up until her silk panties and suspenders were on display and she was blushing with embarrassment.
'No room for half measures!!' he grinned and Annabel gasped as she felt his thin fingers in the waistband of her panties, pulling them right down to her knees. She knew everything was on show as he began to spank her and her face was red with shame but soon the heat in her bottom began to generate other feelings too and she sighed and moaned as the hand smacked away.
'Stand up' he said eventually and she obeyed, pulling up her pants swiftly, ashamed to look him in the face.
'I wont be buying the house, young lady...' he said '...but only because I own the agency and I wanted to check out my newest recruit!'
Annabel was in tears. 'Does this mean the sack ?' she cried and he grinned.
'Of course not, my dear!! Anyone who is prepared to go that far to sell my property is just what I'm looking for!'
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Frank <sswitcher(at)yahoo(dot)com>
A rather topical story, the U.K. property market being currently at least as overheated as young Annabel's bottom. The genre - an employer abusing his position of power, to get his evil way with a junior employee - is a time-honoured one, but it's very nicely executed. I particularly liked the bosses direct and simple line "you have the most shapely bottom. I really would like to spank it." What, after all, could be more natural than that? Kudos, also, for managing to include the extremely un-sexy theme of mortgage interest rates within a spanking story. Lastly, I do note that some of the U.K. terminology may be confusing to U.S. readers. This is not by any means a criticism, but in particular, I fear that the phrase «Does this mean the sack?» is open to a rather significant misinterpretation by U.S. readers who are not well-versed in British slang.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This story includes an element of... misuse of power that kind of squicks me. And in this context, kind of makes me hot. Very well put together, with an effective little twist at the end.
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
Wonderful surprise ending! I like the way that this story strikes a balance between a common fantasy (boss spanking beautiful recruit) and an unusual setting. Very enjoyable.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
A well worked story that ends in the usual way - with a plot twist and spanking.