This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Slam Dunk
By
Courtney <Courtenesca@aol.com>
Raven paced the path; dust clinging to her bare legs. She was in trouble. BIG trouble. Big wouldn't even cover it...
The picnic was going full tilt. Bikers'n babes came from three states for the annual Bar-B-Q. Cycles were proudly parked in a field; chrome shining like reflecting stars.
This year Raven helped organize. They had a bloodmobile, games of chance, tarot readers, rides for the kids... And food enough for an army.
It was her idea for the Dunking Booth. Admission fees going to assist needy families. ...And Raven's suggestion for Snake to be the Star Dunkee.
Boy, she shoulda' quit while she was ahead. But everyone loved the idea: surly, sultry Snake being the prize target! What self respecting cycle crony wouldn't crave the chance to send Mister Biker Dude into the water?
Snake was laconic at best when Raven admitted she'd offered him to be the goat. Shrugging, he smiled at his lady, said he'd go along.
Till he saw the guys'n gals lined up, achin' to knock him into the water.
Snake wasn't into being made a fool of... But he wouldn't back down, it bein' for charity and all. He stripped to surfer baggies, sat on the dunking seat, daring all comers.
Raven was all smiles till she saw the side bets being made: who was gonna topple Snake first, how many tries would it take? The line for the dunking booth grew; harassing catcalls to Snake were raucous'n rowdy...
The first balls fired at the bulls-eye: not one hit. Raven breathed easier. But the next three contestants aimed true--and Snake was dunked heavily each time. Laughter roared, but he sputtered back to his perch. He laughed, issuing good-natured warnings to his friends.
But Raven backed into the cover of trees, not wanting to watch; not wanting to see his eyes. "It was all in fun, Snake. For charity...!" Raven'd worked herself into a fever of guilt.
"Hiding out while I got my pride dunked?" Snake was suddenly behind her, dripping wet, with a towel draped around his neck. Shaking his shoulder length hair, drops flew drenching her. Snake's hands planted on his bare hips: 'speak now, woman, or forever hold your peace.'
"It's over, huh?" she croaked.
"Nah. I bet Smokey he couldn't hit me in 3 throws. I won--he's getting his ass dunked now." Snake chuckled darkly. "You couldn't watch? Guilty?" The towel snapped, capturing her, Raven plastered to the wet length of him.
"Snake, don't be mad..." her lower lip trembled.
He grinned. "I ain't mad, girl. You did it to raise money--at my expense." His eyes narrowed. "But I don't like you running away. THAT's not the Raven I know." Snake kissed her hard. "C'mon, we gotta get back..."
He sat on a picnic bench, blushing Raven ruthlessly flying over his lap. Her shorts and panties shucked down. Snake's wet palm spanked bare girl-rump.
"Hey! How many smacks before Raven's butt turns beet-red?" The betting began.
For charity, ya know.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
You've captured just the right tone with this one Courtney - tough guy who's really a softy. He's painted as mean, but not too. She's painted as submissive, but not too. I like the use of slang language, it makes the whole thing come alive. What a lovely summer afternoon!
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
A fun (and funny) read, Courtney! Great detail and a nice blend of sexiness and bratiness.
Dyke Grrl <dyke.grrl(at)verizon(dot)net>
I like the tone and the pacing of this story. The dialect is strong enough to give a sense of characterization, but not so much that it's distracting from the story. I also like the exchange--she gets her boyfriend dunked, and the payment is getting spanked; the playfulness of the story is really wonderful.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This one starts perfectly - the slight hint of menace which precedes the description of *why* there's menace lets the reader wonder and build anticipation. And that skill is maintained throughout - the nuances in characterisation, both Raven and Snake, are beautifully effective - both revealed to be strong and sensitive in their own ways. And there's some gorgeous writing here: 'chrome shining like reflecting stars', and 'Raven plastered to the wet length of him' in particular are lovely.