This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
Short attention span
By
John Q Pubic <jqpubic@msn.com>
She held her naked boyfriend firmly over her knees as she deftly manipulated the abbreviated tawse, vigorously strapping his already well reddened bottom-cheeks. She then worked well down the back of both legs, stroking hard and steady as he squirmed, squealed and kicked.
While appreciating the progressive descent of the stinging strap, it felt to him that she was striping the very backs of his knees. Although fully immersed in the totality of the whipping she was administering, he still was able to wonder:
It's summer. Will marks show?
Later, much later, he walked into the den fully dressed and about to sit down beside her. "Wait, turn around here for a second." She said. He did so. She caressed his calves up to the hemline of his knee length shorts. "It doesn't show at all baby, I used your tan lines as guidelines."
His shorts covered the markings. Barely.
While she was whipping him, he wouldn't have protested the audaciousness of the scenario even had she violated that unmentioned boundary. He was all hers at that point and wouldn't have spoiled her demented fun for the world. But the world would never know.
She restriced herself to a well defined area. She had a short attention span.
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
Tami <tamishy(at)webtv(dot)net>
Sometimes I am a bit naive, but I missed the meaning in the last line. As for the rest of it, it's nice to be more important than the rest of the world. I sense a long mutual love portrayed here. High praises for the story, and best wishes for R/L.
Needy Wench <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
Hmmm...but, really...didn't she have a shorts attention span? Deftly done, a nice sense of action well-leavened with a bit of humor about the whole thing. There was certainly nothing short in your effort.
Mary Catherine <marycatherine(at)saintfrancis-sfg(dot)net>
A nice, well-written story with good visual descriptions. This is a nice twist on the classic tan lines tanning!
Steve <steve(at)circuslights(dot)com>
This one I liked, until I hit the very last line. The ending seemed contrived to me.