This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult This one took about 35 minutes... hoping it flows!
Legend of Mad and Bad
By
Marta knew she was "in for it" the moment she saw Bob's fuming face snarling over the clenched newspaper. His fingers clutching and crumpling the pages sparked her BAD taunting nature. "Everything okay?"
"Doesn't everything LOOK okay?" MAD Bob asked unpleasantly.
Mara Acting Dumb, shrugged noncommittedly.
Bob Archly Dismissing her foolish response, rose slowly, menacingly.
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Being Actively Deliberate, Bob grabbed Mara, dumping her unceremoniously across an upturned leg, Making Aching Distress of the plump, round target underhand.
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Mara, BAD wench that she is, Mustered Accusing Declarations Bob, MAD fed up man, Blistered Ass Decidedly
Ahhh, the games people play!
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2002
Reviews
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A cute story, with a clever idea. Can't say much more without spoiling it, so you'll just have to read it for yourself.
Jodi <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
An interactive story. This story is funny. it is also cleverly written using a unique literary device. The story seems to flow. There is some nice characterization here. Great last line. Good writing...
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This story combines classic spanko elements with a mad, bad, very cute and imaginative plot device. The style kind of reminds me of certain children's books, but of course the content is something else again. <g> The last few lines are especially good.
Alex Birch <alexbirch(at)blueyonder(dot)co(dot)uk>
Well I'm not too clear which category this is supposed to fit into with its MAD and BAD variations but it seems to fall between two stools for me. The variations on the two acronyms constantly repeated neither make the tale particularly funny or particularly readable as a story. All in all pretty average...or have I missed some subtle category I wasnt aware of