This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult Author's note: This is slightly related to the Take Off Your Thong song parody
Baby Doll Pajamas
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
Georgia arrives early, before the club fills and the best seats are taken. She's a weekend regular. She hands her raincoat to the check girl, accepting her compliments with a curtsy. She's wearing pink 'baby doll' pajamas in translucent lace: beneath the top her nipples protrude, and her panties are tight enough to reveal the dark delta of her bush. She wears short white socks, and high-heeled pink satin shoes.
A corner seat at the bar is free, giving her a view of whatever's happening. She's well displayed ? delicious candy with her short dyed blonde hair ? and able to watch new arrivals as they survey the scene, trying to find a place. She orders champagne, and begins flirting with a woman who appears next to her, primly outfitted in a business suit.
This is Georgia's ideal. One of the lipstick lesbians, cruising for a date, shy and nervous about her sexuality, feeling out of place. Each week brings more, out of their 'closets': book circles, evening classes, investment clubs, however they spend their time, denying themselves. There are several here.
She can rely on Jane the barmaid and her near-neighbor Gail to break the ice.
"What's your name, sugar?" she asks the lipsticker, who has a fortunate resemblance to Madonna, though she's not as old.
"Uh, Lauren," she replies, nervously.
"Out of town?"
"Schaumberg."
"Way up north in Alaska!" Georgia laughs. "You'll like it here. Lots of very open, friendly people. Don't be shy."
Gail intervenes: "You'll see what they mean about 'open,' soon enough. From her, I mean."
"Gail!" she scolds.
"Georgia is a local character," Jane offers. "I'm surprised she hasn't shown you her tattoos yet ..."
Lauren is timid, but clearly interested, after a few minutes of racy chatter.
Georgia says slyly: "Undo the bow. Don't just keep staring at my tits. Touch them."
Lauren hesitates then draws Georgia's top open with long-nailed fingers. She strokes experimentally.
"Do you want me?"
"I ... well ..."
"Don't be shy. Want to undress me? It's nothing unusual here."
"Do they really allow nudity ...?"
Georgia snorts. "You bet!"
"Oh."
"Take my panties off."
Lauren obeys.
"Wanna drag me over there, to that spanking stool? No one's using it yet. Before the rush? Come on, you'd love to whip my ass, admit it!"
Lust overcomes reluctance. As Lauren clumsily straps her down,
Georgia whispers: "Make it hard. And stroke my cunt, please?"
To her surprise, Lauren is a cruel spanker, caning her vigorously.
When she's satisfied, she releases Georgia, and accepts her hug and wet, longing kiss.
"Do you go both ways, baby?" Georgia pleads, grinding her hips against her. "I'd love to do you."
Lauren gasps. "Oh! I've never been naked in public!" "So? Start now! The Saint Andrew's Cross? It won't be free long."
There's a long silence.
"Okay," she shivers.
All eyes are on Lauren, as Georgia helps undress and secure her. Spanking 'virgins' are the floorshow.
"You're gorgeous. Can I hurt you?"
"Please!" Lauren groans. "Punish me!"
The End
© Copyright by Mara Maharakshasa, 2002. All rights are reserved by the author. Do not retransmit, store (except for personal use) or publish without permission.
Reviews
John <johnb(at)ssec(dot)wisc(dot)edu>
Very very nice. The reader as voyeur, watching the beginnings of 'hot Lesbian sex' (a male fantasy mainstay) tilted toward our favorite kink. All bases covered, consent, reluctance, lust. What? Oh yes. I forgot to say I liked it.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
There's barely a story here at all, and what there is is the author's same old formula. Do all the characters have to fall into cliched lust-crazed dialogue? Are there no other emotions in the world? The setting, as usual, has no real relevance to the characters or story, and is utterly disposable.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
Both characters are highly interesting. Although Lauren is somewhat timid about her sexuality in the end she delivers very well.
Kate <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
Sexy story, appealing setting, and I like how the dialogue is a mix of frank sexuality and a sort of tender connection between the two main characters.