This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Adult
 

A Tanning at the Beach

By

Joe Whatever <joewhatever845@hotmail.com>

My wife and I had been relaxing on the beach when the Deputy put up the rope line in front of us.

I knew women were ignoring the anti-bikini ordinance, and I knew that Mrs. Crone of the Church Council had suggested "publicly paddling the bare fannies of the shameless, brazen strumpets!"

But nothing prepared me for the sight of the police paddling the bare bottoms of dozens of beautiful young woman just a few feet in front of me!  In a further act of gratuitous humiliation, the womens bikini tops were used to tie their hands behind their backs

When the woman kicked and squirmed, the male spectators enjoyed quite a show...

"My goodness!" my wife exclaimed. "Isnt that TOMMY wearing a "Temporary Deputy" badge?"

Tommy delivered our groceries, and my wife relished teasing the bashful 19 year old.

But now my wife watched in horror as Tommy carefully peeling down the bikini bottom of a stunning blonde several years his senior.

"Thats Marsha Johnson!" my wife exclaimed. "Shes works at my Law firm!" "I cant believe Tommy is actually SPANKING her!" "How HUMILATING!"

"It looks like Mrs. Crone is settling some scores today", I observed. "Its a good thing you didnt wear a bikini!"

I was a joke, but my lovely wifes jaw literally dropped as she glared at me in stunned disbelief.

"You know Mrs. Crone hates you", I explained, "and Im sure shed enjoy turning you over to Tommy!"

"Im sure Tommy wouldnt mind either", I observed archly as Tommys hand 'accidentally' slipped between Marshas legs in an bogus attempt to 'reposition' her.

My wife looked like a bunny trapped in the headlights, so I changed the subject. "I bet theyll close the bikini shop by the entrance...

"They do sell bikinis here, dont they..." my wife said thoughtfully.

My wife stared intently as Marsha squirmed and wiggled and pleaded her way through her painful and shameful paddling. Mrs. Crone vengefully directed Tommy to spank her on her thighs and even "between the cheeks". Marsha kicked her legs wildly, and Tommys leering, laughing fraternity brothers heckled the blushing womans exposure unmercifully.

I barely noticed as my wife discretely slipped away...

I was watching an 18 year old High School dropout vigorously paddle his School Principal when I suddenly heard my wifes voice:

"Please, Tommy, not my BOTTOMS, too!" my wife pleaded desperately. "Not in front of your friends!"

I knew my wife hadnt been wearing a bikini. But as I moved closer I noticed my wife was holding a crumpled sales receipt from the bikini shop in her fist.

I moved closer. The price tag was still dangling from the pink bikini top that bound her wrists...

As Mrs. Crone gave Tommy the order to "pull that disgusting little hussys underpants DOWN", I detected the faintest trace of a smile on my blushing wifes face...

The End

© Copyright Summer, 2002

Reviews

Needy Wench  <needywench(at)hotmail(dot)com>
I love stories like this, totally illustrating the "stop, don't.... don't stop!" mentality that grips spankos everywhere at sometime. I don't want it, but ahhh yes, I certainly do! The detail about the price tag hanging from the suit was just the thing to bring this one to life.
 

Jodi  <ladiejj(at)webtv(dot)net>
This is a great story. Very original. It was funny and made me laugh. The spanking descriptions were very hot.. especially the hand tying. this story is filled with details and spanking... Well written...Ljj

Kate  <ecattiva(at)aol(dot)com>
Heheheh, this was a fun story.  I like the apt naming of "Mrs. Crone".  This seems like a story that could be fleshed out into a series to great effect.  Perhaps "temporary deputies" could be conveniently positioned at the malls in front of Victoria's Secrets and the like...?

Anne  <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
This was very nicely written, even if it didn't have any surprises here.  His wife is just as fascinated by the beach spankings as she is taken with the temporary deputy in charge. She can thank her lucky stars there was a bikini shop near by!