This short story is an entry in the 2002 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
A Girl You Keep In A Cage
By
Mara Maharakshasa <MaraMahaRakshasa@aol.com>
Brad has been a collector all the time I've known him. He has several classic sports cars, and he buys every new gadget that comes along. He's in the innovation industry, so I guess they're tax deductible.
So, one day I'm invited over for a barbecue. I bring along Marcia, one of my former graduate students, who has developed a strong attachment to me. She's a sweet little brunette, only shoulder-high to me, and like so many girls of her age group, quite bisexual. I guess I'm her introduction to the 'dick side.'
After Brad fires up and fixes us some drinks, he invites: "Come and see my latest." He asks Marcia: "I hope you're not prudish or easily shocked. Not many of Roy's girlfriends are, I've noticed." She shakes her head, and trails behind us. We enter his huge playroom, and I hear a gasp from Marcia. She's quicker than me. Then I get it. There's a dark- haired girl, maybe Marcia's age, in a cage that's been built at the end wall. She's naked but for a thong bikini bottom.
"Brad?" I say, sipping my beer nervously.
"Sheana," he says grandly. "A Gorean from the A&M."
"She's here voluntarily?" I ask.
"Why, of course! Hey, Sheana, say 'hello.'"
"Greetings, Master. And to his guests, too," she says, walking up to grip the bars.
"What do you think?" Brad asks anxiously.
"Um, very nice," I say.
"She's a great gadget. Signed a one-year contract to be my slave."
"Oh?"
We listen, dumbfounded, as he explains: "She wants to be a sex toy, be dominated and punished. See?" He points to some welts on her thighs. "Drop the panties, honey, and turn around."
As she bares herself to us, unconcerned, he says: "Very high-tech, too. See? I have several cameras watching her. I can monitor her anywhere, via IP address. Call up her image on a remote, make her use her dildo, do whatever I say. She's very obedient."
We're both staring, as Brad says: "Oh, I got that old Ferrari I was talking about, come and look..." And walks away.
In the car on the way back, as soon as the door closes, I say:
"Well, what did you make of that!?"
"Shawna?" Marcia asks, innocently.
"What else! Can you imagine doing that? I mean, would you?"
"No!" she replies shortly. "Not the high tech stuff, anyway. Too impersonal."
We're on the highway now. "So, are you saying you would like to be treated like that?"
"Maybe not the cage, no."
"Meaning?"
She smiles. "My last girlfriend, Anita?" _ that's the one
I'd stolen her from _ "She had me wearing a collar, you know?"
"S&M stuff?"
"What else?"
"So, you like being dominated?"
"Love it," she grins. "Why, do you?"
Well, she sure enjoys her sex rough, I already know.
"So, we'll stop and buy Marcia's collar, shall we?"
"Mmmm, I'd like that," she purrs.
"And a riding crop?"
"Oh, better still."
She's unzipping her jeans, eyes hooded with desire.
The End
© Copyright by Mara Maharakshasa, Summer, 2002. Do not retransmit, store (except for personal use) or publish without permission.
Reviews
Abrat4you <abrat4you(at)aol(dot)com>
I could not follow this story...I had no idea of gender, with out reading it over and over...I kept loosing track of what was being said...and why.
MollyB <mollyb(at)newsguy(dot)com>
I knew there was a reason I don't go to barbeques. At first I thought Brad couldn't be for real. But none of these characters are very believable. And where's the spanking? There aren't even any warmed buns at this barbeque.
RCG <rcg1574(at)yahoo(dot)com>
This story both lives and dies on the strength/weakness of it's characterization. Both Marcia and Brad seem to be strong but flawed characters. That Roy and Shawna are both undeveloped makes them intriguing, but overall this seems a weakness in the story. The dialogue is also somewhat difficult to follow.
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
This story reads as if the characters are specifically meant to come across as shallow and dull, so it's very hard to identify with them in any way. Every single person in this author's world has the same voice, the same desires, the same lusts. After reading a few, there's nothing much left to discover. We know exactly how it'll end up.