This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Adult
18 Again
By
Joe Whatever <joewhatever845@hotmail.com>
"Thanks again for helping out with Patty!" Martha said.
"My pleasure", Mr. Patterson replied. "Maybe you should send Stephanie over next." "When I scolded her for jaywalking this morning, the little delinquent SASSED me!"
"Delinquent?" Stephanie thought. "Im 29!" "Is he crazy?"
Stephanie was angry and confused but remained silent until the old man left.
Stephanies sister Martha explained. When Patty misbehaved, Martha sent her daughter to Mr. Pattersons house for a spanking!
Stephanie had suspected that her 19-year-old niece was still spanked, but she was still confused. "What was that crack about sending ME over next?" Stephanie asked.
"He knows youre my little sister, but he doesnt realize youre a 29 year old M.D.", Martha chuckled. "Youre sitting on the floor barefoot, dressed in cutoff jeans and a half T-shirt reading Rolling Stone..."
Martha suddenly had a wicked thought. She knew Stephanie had spanking fantasies. Since her snotty sister insisted on dressing like a naughty teenager, why not treat her like one...
"You shouldnt sass your elders!" Martha said sharply.
Stephanie was shocked. But then she smiled knowingly...
"Im going to write you a punishment note to bring to Mr. Patterson, Missy!", Martha said crisply.
But Stephanie hesitated as she remembered the way the dirty old man had ogled her. "What if he decides to pull down my jeans...or even worse, my...my UNDERPANTS?" Stephanie stammered nervously.
"It would serve you right!" Martha patronized, clearly relishing her newfound authority.
Marthas tone became increasingly strident as she began lecturing Stephanie, and by the time Martha began writing the punishment note Stephanie could tell her sister was genuinely angry.
Stephanie fidgeted nervously as she watched her stern, unsmiling sister seal the envelope. Although she couldnt read the note, Stephanie did see the phrases, "spoiled", "smart mouth", "hairbrush", "corner time", "embarrassment", and "real tears".
But worst of all Stephanie saw that her notoriously strict and uncompromising sister had repeatedly capitalized and underlined two words that sent a chill down Stephanies spine:
BARE BOTTOM.
"Bare bottom?" Stephanie thought. "Its a mistake!" "Im 29 years old!"
But the years melted away as Mr. Patterson lowered Stephanies jeans and took the trembling girl over his knee...
The panties with the tiny dinosaurs looked cute in the store. But when Mr. Patterson chuckled Stephanie realized to her horror that her underwear selection had inadvertently but undeniably proved that Stephanie WASNT too old for an "underpants downer"!
Stephanie bit her lip as she stared nervously at the hairbrush. Stephanie knew that if he used that wicked hairbrush on her bare skin, she would kick...
And then Mr. Patterson would see everything Stephanie had...
"Its a mistake", Stephanie kept repeating to herself. "He wont take down my underpants!" "Its a mistake..."
Stephanies fanny cheeks tensed and squirmed in helpless anticipation as she nervously awaiting her shameful and humiliating punishment...
Mr. Patterson carefully studied the note, picked up the hairbrush, and smiled.
Stephanie blushed crimson as Mr. Patterson teasingly inserted his fingers into the waistband of her underpants...
The End
© Copyright Summer, 2001
Reviews
Pablo Stubbs <Pablo.Stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
It seems clear that, though Stephanie and Martha are the main characters here, this is told as Mr Patterson's fantasy, so a telling which concentrated more on his point of view would have been very interesting. The triangle of the three characters is intriguingly constructed, though, and has lots of potential, if clearly defined. Why does Martha send her daughter to him to be spanked? Particularly if she knows his interest would be more than merely friendly? It leaves a slightly confused aftertaste.
Sarah Nada <circler73(at)hotmail(dot)com>
This story has an interesting premise, and is nicely suspenseful. I like the dinosaur panties, too.
Anne <Ladyanne60(at)aol(dot)com>
Excellent classic spanking tale as Doctor Stephanie is made to feel years younger. Her secret spanking fantasies are about to be fulfilled, but is this what she really bargained for? The last line has me wishing to read more.
Owen Williamson <ashthorn(at)maildulf(dot)com>
Well written, and an interesting idea for a scenario. I found this story was an enjoyable read and hope for more in the same vein.