Tim, the Teenage MC
By Rass Senip ( rass_senip@usa.net )



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Updated Information! - added November 28th, 2008

I apologize for not updating this page sooner.  To all those who have emailed me in the past couple of years, your words were not ignored or forgotten.  In fact you are reason I resumed work on Tim in August 2008.

I started writing Tim in 1996 while I was going to college.  Most of the time while I wrote the first 19 chapters of Tim, I was writing instead of doing what I was supposed to be doing, namely homework.  Strangely enough, it was the stress generated by this that actually fueled my motivation to write.
 

After I received my BS EE degree in 1999, I got a job with a small company who designs and manufactures custom programmable controllers and other electronics. The family-like atmosphere I work in produces less stress than most work places, and I generally put my all into my work every day.

I've matured quite a bit in the twelve years since I started Tim.  Between that, all the typing I do at work, and the loss of that self inflicted stress,  the frequency of when I'm motivated to work on the story has significantly decreased.

It has been seven years since I posted chapter XXI (21) and the previous update I posted here talked about releasing a revised version of the story called
Tim, the Teenage Telepath (T4) .  While I would still like to do that, I've decided to simply attempt to complete Tim, the Teenage MC as is before taking on the job of rewritting something so massive.  I most likely will skip a few chapters and simply write the finale just so the story has its ending and I can get on with doing other things in life.

That is what I hope to do.  Realistically I'm not sure if or when that will happen.  But if nothing else, I've completed two more chapters, and I hope you find the wait was worth it.



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Table of Contents:


(TP-Mast = Telepathic sharing while masturbating)
** denotes the section contains a graphic or other media type related to that part of the story

Chapter I: 8th Grade, Spring 1985
      Part 1 - The Beginning                             (mc, mm-masturbation)
      Part 2 - Controlling One's Power                   (mc, m-solo (sort of))

Chapter II:  9th Grade,  Fall 1985
      Part 1 - Love, Life, and the Power                 (mc, mf-TP-Mast, mfm-TP-Mast)
      Part 2 - The Rules of the Game                     (mc, implied mm oral)

Chapter III: 9th Grade - Winter 1986
      Part  1 - Three Heads are Better than Two          (mc, mf oral)
      Part  2 - Curiosity and the Cat                    (mc, brief Mf-anal)
      Part  3 - The Horror of the Power                  (mc, Mm, Mf, Mfm)
      Part  4 - A Little Help From Your Friends          (no sex)
      Part  5 - Let's get naked                          (mf oral)
      Part  6 - Romp in the Park                         (mc, exhib)
   ** Part  7 - A Day With Dear Ole Dad                  (mc, oral mf mF MF)
      Part  8 - To Fuck, or not to Fuck                  (mc, oral mf)
      Part  9 - Make Love to me - Round 1                (mc, mf)
      Part 10 - Make Love to me - Round 2                (mf, mm, mmf)
      Part 11 - Make Love to me - Round 3                (anal mf, mfm)

Chapter IV: 9th Grade, Spring 1986  - Brad and Sandi
      Part 1 - Sharing With My Buddies                   (mc, hyp, mm-TP-Mast)
      Part 2 - Brothers and Sisters                      (mfmm-TP-Mast, f-solo w/toys, mf incest)
      Part 3 - Your Sister, Your Slave                   (mc, incest mf, mfmm)

Chapter V: 9th Grade, Spring 1986 - The North Mansion
      Part 1 - Mother, Father, and My Lovers             (mc, oral mf & ff)
      Part 2 - Are You Free This Evening? (Or A Slave?)  (fff, mm foreplay)
      Part 3 - Chains of Slavery                         (mc, mf)
      Part 4 - Pop Go the Cherries                       (fm, mmf)
      Part 5 - Sex Goddess I Call Mom                    (oral mF)
      Part 6 - Winding Up Another School Year            (mfm)

Chapter VI: 9th Grade, Summer 1986 - Summer Camp Campers
      Part 1 - Off To Summer (Sex) Camp We Go            (mc, mfmm, mf)
      Part 2 - The Girl's Showers                        (mc, mf, ff)
      Part 3 - Summer Time Fun                           (mc, mf, oral mf, mm)
      Part 4 - It's Good To Have Friends                 (mc, TP-Mast)

Chapter VII:  9th Grade, Summer 1986 - Summer Camp Counselors
      Part 1 - Don't You Just Love Surprises             (mf)
      Part 2 - Lessons of Love                           (mc, oral mm mf, mfm)
      Part 3 - Lessons of Sex (or, Fuck Me Teach')       (mm, mf, mfm)
      Part 4 - Lessons of Trust                          (ff, mf, mfmf)
      Part 5 - Whole Lot'a Suckin' Goin' On..            (oral mf mm)
      Part 6 - Will You Be My Slave Tonight?             (mc, Mf, mf)

Chapter VIII:  9th Grade, Summer 1986 - After Summer Camp
      Part 1 - Life After Camp                           (mc, mf mfm)
      Part 2 - It's My Orgy, And I'll Watch If I Want To (anal mf, mfm)
      Part 3 - Who's The Master In This House?           (mc, mf)

Chapter IX:  10th Grade, Fall 1986
   ** Part 1 - Rings of the Master                       (mc, mf)
   ** Part 2 - Rings of the Slaves                       (mc, oral mf)
      Part 3 - Rings of Love                             (mc, mf)
      Part 4 - A Day With the Slaves                     (mc, mf)
      Part 5 - The Drug Deal                             (mc, mf)
      Part 6 - Dreams People Share                       (mc, mf, ff, fisting)
      Part 7 - Holly's Favorite Dicky                    (mc, mf)

Chapter X:  10th Grade, Winter 1986/87
      Part 1 - Life Support                              (no sex)
      Part 2 - The Dance of Sex                         (mc, oral mf, mf)
      Part 3 - Twosomes and Threesomes.                  (mfm)
      Part 4 - Parental Secrets                          (mc, oral mf, mf)
      Part 5 - Tim's Family Christmas                    (mfm)
      Part 6 - Sweet Sixteen                             (mc, mf)
      Part 7 - Choices In Sexuality                      (mc, mf, mfm, oral mm)
      Part 8 - Brother, Sister, and the Teddy            (mc, inc, oral mf)
      Part 9 - LeAnne's Animal                           (hyp, mf, mf oral, mf anal)
      Part 10 - The Making of a Slut                     (toys, mf, ff, oral, anal)
        [Part 10 - Segments from LeAnne's journal, not told from Tim's point of view]

Chapter XI:  10th Grade, Spring 1987
      Part 1 - An Adventure with LeAnne                  (mf, drugs)
      Part 2 - Awakenings                                (mc mf)
      Part 3 - The New & Improved Tim                    (mf, fat)
      Part 4 - Domination 101                            (dom/sub)
      Part 5 - Your Subconscious is Thy Master           (no sex)
      Part 6 - Police Action                             (mc, mm, mf, anal, rape)
   ** Part 7 - Apartments 6c and 9c                      (mf, very young incest)
      Part 8 - In the Name of Fatherhood                 (mc, mf)
      Part 9 - The First Signs of Spring                 (mf)
      Part 10 - Jack and the Teddy Bears                 (mf)
      Part 11 - Ghosts of Lovers Past                    (mf oral)
   ** Part 12 - The Power of Dreams                      (mfm)
      Part 13 - Where the Path Leads                     (mc mf)
      Part 14 - Prisoners                                (mm)

Chapter XII:  10th Grade, Summer 1987
      Part 1 - Deeper Into the Depths of Hell            (MC, mf, mfm, mm, brainwashing)
      Part 2 - The Price of One's Soul                   (mc, mf, anal)
      Part 3 - Hope's Last Chance                        (mc, no sex)
      Part 4 - The Little Girl Inside                    (mf, anal)
      Part 5 - Sisters of Deceit                         (mc, mf, mffff, ff)
      Part 6 - The Deal of My Life                       (mc mf)
      Part 7 - Deceit is a Traitor's Motto               (mc, mf, drug)
      Part 8 - Final Farewells and Hello Agains          (mf)
      Part 9 - Fate and Luck                             (mf, oral)
      Part 10 - A Day of Fun with Holly Quinn            (mc, mf)

Chapter XIII:  11th Grade, Fall 1987
      Part 1 - Musical Bodies                            (mff bodyswapping)
      Part 2 - Pocket Knives and Pornos                  (mc mf, mm oral incest)
      Part 3 - Best Friends                              (mc mf)
      Part 4 - Enough Love For Everyone                  (mf)
      Part 5 - Doing It For Love                         (mc mf)
      Part 6 - The Quest for Sarah Begins                (mc)
      Part 7 - Family Matters                            (no sex)
      Part 8 - College Life                              (mf oral)
      Part 9 - All According to Plan                     (no sex)
      Part 10 - Losing Control                           (mm light rape)
      Part 11 - Give Me Some Dirty Sex                   (mm analingus, anal)
      Part 12 - Boy-talk                                 (no sex)
      Part 13 - Party Animals and Party Poopers          (mf oral)
      Part 14 - Joey's Darkest Hour                      (no sex)
      Part 15 - Rat Hunt                                 (mc, mm, mf)
      Part 16 - Richardson's Suite                       (mm)
      Part 17 - A Symbol Is Mightier Than a Sword        (mc, mm, mf)
      Part 18 - A Choice of Families                     (no sex)
      Part 19 - Shit! It's A Connor Family Reunion!      (no sex)

Chapter XIV:  11th Grade, Winter 1987/88
     Part 1 - Boyfriend, Girlfriend, and the Sight       (no sex)
     Part 2 - Traveling Companion                        (mmm)
     Part 3 - Symbolic Relations                         (mm oral)
     Part 4 - Our Parents' Wishes                        (mc, fmf)
     Part 5 - Moving In Pains                            (mmm oral)
     Part 6 - Southeast Fringe Benefits                  (ffm, ff)
     Part 7 - Getting Down to Business                   (mc, mff, mf, ff)
     Part 8 - Crash Course Under Fire                    (mc)

Chapter XV:  11th Grade, Spring 1988
     Part 1 - Un-welcome Home                            (no sex)
     Part 2 - Sex is for friends, Love is for Lovers     (mfm)
     Part 3 - Wedding Bells                              (mc mf)
     Part 4 - Slaves Young and Old                       (mc incest mf)
     Part 5 - Male Ego                                   (mm)
     Part 6 - Troubles of Sexuality                      (mm)
     Part 7 - Vision of the Damned                       (mc mf rape (sort of))

Chapter XVI:  11th Grade, Summer 1988 - Nathan & Joey
     [As told by Joey]
     Part 1 - Nathan, My Best Amigo                      (mc, mf, ff)
     Part 2 - Fruits of This Land Be Ours                (mc, mf)
     Part 3 - The Joys of Enslaving and Raping           (mc, mf)
     Part 4 - The Pit                                    (mc, mf)
     Part 5 - Bewitched                                  (mc, mf)
     Part 6 - Bonds of Loyalty                           (mc, mf)
     Part 7 - Escape to Witch Mountain                   (mc, mf)

Chapter XVII:  12th Grade, Fall 1988
     Part 1 - Rebirth                                    (mc mf, breast feeding)
     Part 2 - Big Shoes to Fill                          (mc mf)
     Part 3 - Tests of One's Character                   (no sex)
     Part 4 - Back to School Again                       (mf)
     Part 5 - King of Sluts                              (mc mf)
     Part 6 - Love at First Sight                        (mc mf ff fmf)
     Part 7 - Romancing a Lonely Heart                   (no sex)
     Part 8 - Giving Up the Throne                       (mf ff bodyswapping)
     Part 9 - Thanksgiving at the Corrigan's             (no sex)
     Part 10 - Aid for Heartaches                        (no sex)

Chapter XVIII:  12th Grade, Winter 1988/89
     Part 1 - Chains of Love                             (no sex)
     Part 2 - The Unwanted Gift                          (no sex except making out)
     Part 3 - Woman's Right to Change Her Mind           (no sex)
     Part 4 - My Student and Lover                       (foreplay)
     Part 5 - Teacher's Day Off                          (mf)
     Part 6 - Her First Day Out                          (mc oral)
     Part 7 - Birthday surprises                         (no sex)
     Part 8 - Final in Telepath 101                      (foreplay)

Chapter XIX:  12th Grade, Spring 1989
     Part 1 - Changes in the Wind                        (mf, mm oral (brief))
     Part 2 - Nothing's Stranger Than Love               (mf)
     Part 3 - Lee and Me                                 (mf, anal)
     Part 4 - Attacks of the Heart                       (fmm)
     Part 5 - Just the Three of Us                       (mf)
  ** Part 6 - Graduation day                             (mf, mfm)

Chapter XX:  Summer 1989
          [T] = told by Tim     [J] = told by Joey
     Part 1 - Flight 689                             [T] (no sex)
     Part 2 - Empathic History                       [T] (mc, mf)
     Part 3 - Loves Slavery                          [J] (mf)
     Part 4 - Pieces to a Vanishing Puzzle           [J] (mf oral anal)
     Part 5 - Return to Witch Mountain               [J] (mc, mf)
     Part 6 - Twinnocence                            [T] (mc, mf)
     Part 7 - Hidden Memories Revealed               [J] (mc, mf)
     Part 8 - Filling the Needs of One              [T&J](mc, mf)

Chapter XXI:  Fall 1989 - Spring 1990
     Part 1 - Searching For the Pigments of Your Self Portrait (mff)
  ** Part 2 - Revealing Truth with Every Brushstroke     (mf)
     Part 3 - The Greatest Tests Are From Within         (no sex)
     Part 4 - Suzi's toys                                (mc, mFm)
     Part 5 - Fitting In, Again                          (no sex)
     Part 6 - A Lover, A Dreamer, That's me              (ff)
     Part 7 - A Pickled Matter                           (no sex)

Chapter XXII: Summer 1990                                added November 28th, 2008
     Part 1 - Family Surprises                           (mc, m masturbation)
     Part 2 - The Group                                  (mc, mf, ff, mff)
     Part 3 - Beyond the Boundaries of Sex               (mc, mf, body swapping)
     Part 4 - Higher maintenance                         (body swapping, mf, incest)
     Part 5 - Starships and Queens                       (mc, mf, mff, mm, mfm, all very brief)
  ** Part 6 - Sir Eric Roberts of Atlantia               (no sex)
     Part 7 - For the Love of the Queen                  (mf)
     Part 8 - Virtual Timality                           (no sex)


Chapter XXIII:  Fall/Winter 1990

The twins, Brad, and another old friend join Tim, Joey, and Suzi at Central State where the unknown group of voices use the innocent to infiltrate the group's security.  (100% done). 

Chapter XXIV:  Winter/Spring 1991

The unknown group of voices spring up again with an all out attack that even Tim is unable to stop.  This chapter is 40% done. 
Chapter XXV:  Summer 1991
This chapter is still up in the air about what it will contain.  I figure inspiration will strike by the time I reach it. Of course at the rate I'm going, old age may strike first.
Chapter XXVI:  Fall 1991 - December 1991
This chapter will set the stage for the finalle, but most of the plots within it will be concluded before moving on.  Among them will be Eric joining them at Central State bringing along his FEMALE love interest, and he and Suzi help Tim deal with his emotional hell when Tim finds himself having formed romantic feelings for someone other than Jennifer.  This chapter was started on paper (a first for me) while serving jury duty and waiting to be called, but has not yet been entered in.
The BIG Finale :  January 17, 1992 thru Spring 1992
This one's been in my head almost as long as Chapter XIX, but has evolved so much that it no longer resembles my original conception.  Heavy MC content, along with action/adventure, and very little sex.  That's just the opposite to my original idea, for when I first dreamed this chapter up, I had planned to have Tim experience the darkest forms of sex and MC.  I guess you can say writing this story has been good for me in that sense.  This one will introduce a new and incredibly powerful foe, will (hopefully) quickly build up to the telepathic war of the century, then spirals down beyond the lowest emotional depths of any of the previous chapters before hitting rock bottom where Tim's discovers the path to his final destiny.  This chapter has bits and pieces already written, but this only amounts to at most 10% of what I expect to write.
Addendum 1:  Summer 1992 to January 1st, 2000
Mostly clean up and whatever happened to everyone mentioned in the story.   Sometimes I wonder if I should be writing a little part of this one  every time I introduce a new character, but I have the feeling I should wait until I've finished everything else before writing any of my character's fate out.  I'm planning on basing this chapter around a New Year's Eve party held on December 31st, 1999 at the South Mansion.  I'm even thinking of having other characters tell parts of it, but for the most part it will be Tim telling it.
Addendum 2:  July 9th, 2000
A short story told by Joey which concludes the story, yet allows for its continuation if I later (as in a decade or two later) decide to do so. 


 

Leftovers:



The very first version of Chapter 1 - Chapter01X
An unfinished part from chapter 10 or 11 - Chapter10X
A part that just wasn't going to work out in chapter 11 - Chapter11X
The original uncut version of what became chapter 13 - Chapter13X
A section thrown out of Chapter 14 Part 2 - Chapter14X
A false ending for Chapter 14 - Chapter14Xend


 

Email Ramblings:



"I've been waiting for him to suddenly discover that telekinesis and telepathy are related to an extent... or so I've found anyways..."

Telekinesis isn't something I feel fits in _The Book_'s universe.  Remember, my goal here is for someone to be able to read _The Book_ after reading my story and not find any really strong conflictions between the two.  While _The Book_ never mentions telekinesis or empathy in any way, and even though I have added empathy, I have made empathy a distictly seperate ability and such would not directly conflict with _The Book_'s ideals.

As you have suggested, telekinesis would most likely be related to telepathy, but nowhere in _The Book_ has that been mentioned.  The Book's form of telepathy depends on the use of symbols.  Whether these symbols have any true physical form or are simply the mind's representation of the processes going on in one's head is a matter of conjecture.  But I feel in that universe telekinesis would be unrelated and completely seperate to telepathy.

Telekinesis will play an important role in the finale, but not in the sense you probably have been thinking of.  And there already has been two seperate uses of that universe's telekinetic abilities in the story so far, but I don't expect anyone to even hazard a guess at what they are.


"Oh that reminds me, when Tim is floating his mind around,  that's more a form of astral projection than simple telepathy."

Not the way he does it.  The way I've been developing the physics of the symbols, the transmission of one's thoughts/symbols does not depend on the distance between the two and occures instantaniously.  However, because the brain is flesh and blood and therefor doesn't operate instantaniously, one can sense and defend themselves when another mind is preparing to probe or attack them.  They don't actually sense the probe itself, just the person's intentions before releasing the probe.

When Tim went mind hopping, he first had to use his telepathic senses to find a mind who was in the direction we wanted to go, then opened a partial two-way with them.  His telepathic range was only limited by his ability to distinguish who's thoughts belonged to whom before locking on to that person's mind.  The more he did this, the better he got, and by the time he was at the summer camp, he could lock onto another's mind simply by initiating a specific responce while listening to their voice over the phone.

If Tim had figured it out back when he had mind hopped to Brad's house, he could have simply said something over the phone to Brad to get Brad to emit a specific thought which he could have focused his telepathic senses on detecting.  When using the telephone, Tim actually isn't interested in what they say since that comes after what they think.  But then their voice does help him by giving him a feel for what they had thought the fraction of a second before it traveled down the phone line and through the air to his ear.

People who were physically near his location were easier to lock on to because he received more of their thoughts than the others further away.  Like the sun being easier to locate in the sky than a particular star.  A lot of those stars put out more light than the sun, but because the sun is so much closer to us... well, you get the idea.

When Tim forms the two way with that other person, he uses their own telepathic senses (which everyone has a small amount of, even though I haven't stated it in the story yet) to find the next person to hop to.  Once Tim can distinguish a single person's thoughts from the background noise, he can usually keep a lock on them by making them repeat a certain thought which he keys in on.  Like I mentioned in the story, the limiting factor isn't the distance between Tim and another person's mind, it's the number of other minds between them.

Hmm..  I'll have to add that to the FAQ or something.
(well, this is the something... heh)


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