Your stories failed as stroke material, which is what I was seeking, but succeeded at being more interesting than stroke material, and also being arousing and otherwise excellent. Usually when my porn-surfing encounters something non-target but interesting enough to distract me, it's markedly squicking (eg _extreme_ body alteration). So I was doubly interested by something that wasn't target but was very interesting and also erotic. For me more the litporn equivalent of foreplay than climax, I suppose.

Your stories were tantalizing, interesting, intriguing, arousing, delightful. Several were too short for my taste, and I am generally looking for things more graphic (which of course is tedious in any other mood), but even the story I liked least (Pronouns) was damn fine, and that's even after it suffers from context (all my blood's in my erection, I can't think to follow these pronouns!).

I can't effuse enough how ass-kicking I found it.
<incoherent babbling here>

Thanks!

i would love to read longer versions of your stories
they are great and keep me hard all day.

All of the stories were terrific. I was only disappointed when I came to the end.

all stories are well written BUT for me too short..I leave them wanting so much more ..How about a long one

This is the first story of a sexual nature that plays with language. The story did not turn me on, although the idea was sexy, but the language. oh oh. I am immensely happy. It is a NEW style of writing about sex. kind of stream of consciesnous, but refined and tantalizing. Sentences that are passionate and obsessive. random like thoughts. I am impressed and encouraged. (you managed to convey lust in language. It was not romantic style bs. (he was overwhelmed by her beauty blah blah boring.) Nor was if factual like most porn. It was in first person (yey!) 9the whole remorse thing found in ugh romance novels not possible in first person descriptions on lust.) Is there a way I could learn more about number 6? [...] one critique. your feeling boxes need revising. enlightened seems of a spiritual nature, but this is more like discovering a brand new candy. delicious and definitely hungry for another one.

congrats. i'm impressed again. I notice a trend of doing the "wrong' thing. cheating being 'bad' and sex being bad. hmm. I like the message. Being sexually liberal, (it feels good thus its good) is so opposed by society. a society which prizes responsability, and self restraint. I don't know I'm blabbing. But I'm so impressed. I never read erotic stories that dealt with the concept of shame, managed to have a major "hot factor" and also do word play. The stories by themselves are nothing much, but the emotions and words make it hot and special. I liked the ending in this one. a blurb. an innocent blurb of the tongue. brilliant.

incest has never been so hot. I feel giddy and naughty. taboos taboos

One of the things that I really enjoyed about your stories is that you seem to have practiced a good deal of restraint in writing them. It's almost as if you have incredibly large stories, complex stories which contain all manner of strange behaviors and whatnot, and you parse it until you've reached a point where the enigma at the center of the story is all that is left. The fact that in most cases you've given us a snapshot of a situation was very appealing to me. I enjoyed the literary quality that surrounded your work.

I said that "Pronouns" was the "worst" story on your site, but that's not really because it was a bad story. I enjoyed the concept of the story, just found it a tad hard to follow. I'm sure that's a comment you've gotten on the story before.

"Tutleneck" was a story that just seemed perfect to me. It's very hard to describe why the story appealed to me so much; perhaps I identified with the narrator, or the situation was one that I'd been in before but hadn't taken it as far as he had, or that I really enjoyed the way in which the narrator kept this aspect of possible infidelity always closely associated with his marriage (and how his night would be more vigorous than usual). Whatever the reason, "Tutleneck" was one of the most enjoyable stories I've read in a long time.

Who's number one?

Great literary erotica. Lots of fun. Would love you to post more about who Number 6 is (within the bounds of protecting her privacy!)

"freshly fucked.." love that

I only read the first three or four stories and I really liked them. You have a different approach to erotica that is very entertaining. I can't beleive you've been around for a few years and I never heard of you. I feel deprived :)

Can I have a number?

Oh, Number 6, what an enigma you are! I enjoy the way you write. Teasing, anticipating, different twists. I love how you can confuse and disorientate your reader. More?

I can identify. TDhe poor bastard"s an alcoholic. He can't get out of his head and away from his glass long enough to connect with another woman and he'll live to be humiliated as more and more men are the answeres to his wife's passions. As I said, I can identify, the feet lifting from the floor, the walls moving, the snippets of consciousness and the lack of real interest. This is the only story of yours I have read, I think, at leas for a while. It's good. Funny and really about how he can imagine the baby sitter's mouth wrapped around his cock and at the same time looking forward to the first drink. Makes me wonder if you know more about addictive drinking than many would think. Keep writing. Try one about an older guy--much older guy--who wants to meet that one last woman who will give and take, knowing it may be that last real time in life for two sympaticos.

Thanks

the stories erotic, the writing excellent..BUT they are too damn SHORT..like a dick tease girlfriend..they get you started BUT never finish up. PLEASE longer stories!!!

I bet you'd write great poetry.

I liked the ending, it made me laugh. I especially enjoyed it because my boyfriend is music minister at his church and we have great Saturday nights and then dress up and go in on Sunday mornings all sweet and 'innocent'. lol.

I have only read a few, but still wanted to thank you for your gift of imagination and style. I will definitely come back, and try to make more specific comments. Once again, thank you.

Now that I've finished with my final exams, I finally have the time to read some of your stories. I've only read two so far, but I'm amazed already at your ability to write very erotic short stories.

Short stories of this high quality are very rare on the internet. I look forward to reading more over the coming days.

I remember now getting an anonymous feedback from you a month ago. I found it today and realized it was you that added my link to your links page. I've returned the favor. Not as a trade, but because your stories are quickly becoming some of my favorites.

Have a wonderful evening.

Yours,
Pookie

Your stories are some of the best I've ever read. Very real, good sex and just fun. thanks!

Mostly Harmless was fun! :) I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for an entertaining and well-written sex story!

Evangelists was fun. However, shouldn't he have found Goddess, instead? ;)

God knows I've tried hard.I sucked the girls, fucked them, rimmed them (I don't do men). It was to no avail. You and Stacie "snuck" off...There ain't no such verb tense. It is low, trashy usage. I feel like destroying myself. Fine writing but try harder. :-)

Enjoyed your new story, "Inappropriate Behavior" very much. Thanks!

I very much enjoyed "kissing counts". Most straight forward pornongraphy concentrates solely on the physical but often times its more fun to fuck the mind. thanks for the stories

secrets was wonderful..those stolen moments turned me on..and i wish it would be a longer story..with a lot ofstolen cheating moments, frankly said....thank you

so far the stories remind me of some french movies,,,they leaves me dry..the finesse ending with imagination left to the reader, just doesnt do it ..the stories are not long enough to catch the charectors to a point that could leave to a flow of imaginations.. bottom line..the stories are ok..but leave me hi and dry...excuse my grammer and spelling....thanks

Write more. Please!

hiya
I really must admit that your writing is excellent :)
although I am usually more into kind of harder stories - the really disgusting ones - I absolutely enjoyed reading your stories. your writing and describing is very skilful!!! although I write myself, I really envie people who manage to acually finish and disseminate their works go on like this

yeah!

nice stuff, Number 6

The stories I liked, I really liked. The stories I didn't like, I haven't read yet. I was thrilled, I was captivated, I was left cleaning up a big mess.

I'll be back, oh yeah, you can count on me coming again.

Just read parent/teacher story. "Not as easy as you, ma'am, that's for sure." Great!

just read Parent/teacher...and it really tickled me
*grin*.

*smiles*
Dryad

Most folks think the stories are short, I agree. It is as if something is started and the desire to finish it is there only to have it finished by someone else. I find myself wondering if you would enjoy collaberating with a few authors who might embellish each story in a new way. Then you would have the brief form and the dressed up form of the same story.

Programmers is your only story I have read thus far. I think it is a little jewel!

I feel satisfied but that wasn't a "General reacion" choice.

Blame Dryad. She made me find your site.

After looking around your pages for a time, I can't blame her.

You set an example that's hard to follow but maybe some day...

Keep on workin', man.

Deadly

You are very gifted. I Love this site.

Well written... Intense and tantalizing in its brevity.

Now I'll go read the rest !

Congrats!

"Hi Sweety" is just so cool!

Merchandising was hot.

Most exciting, interesting erotica I've ever read!

Was looking for a short story to cheer me up this morning. The story "Lunch", hit the spot. Really enjoyable.

pleasurably enough, you produce inconsistent incoherent implausible reactions. twisted? maybe. tell #5 that you're doing good work.

after reading more than just considering marriage, i have reconsidered.

Down the hall is the best story I read. Right after enchante. which is higher than awesome. Needs a new ranking. ineffable? sublime? if only i had a proper english word, to describe, as the phrase "porntastic" does for the offering of prime salacious material online, what these stories are to written erotica.

"Keep up the good work" is cliche, unoriginal, banal, trite, and too too overused. Please, however, do. I get a warm feeling just from _knowing_ that someone is engaged in this manner. Let alone the warm feeling from reading the product.

Dear Number 6,

This seems to be the only way I can find to write to you, so here I am. Thank you very much for your kind words on 'Rebecca' -- it finally gave me the impetus I needed to write and tell you that I've adored your work for a good long time.

If you want to ask whether I feel guilty over not writing for so long, I do. Happy?

I love your writing. I do flashes myself, and I wish I could carve them as well as you do: precise and hot and urgent, manipulative men and angry women and motivations never quite as clear as when they are greedy for something. What a pleasure.

So to get your note about Rebecca was wonderful. It's always good to feel that someone who knows what he's about appreciates my work. Thank you.

Next time, include your email address...

Yours,

Selena

I came to your site because of the link from NICK's site. I haven't read a single story yet but I laughed hard at your introduction area. The phrase, "keep it in your head where it belongs," was first but then to proceed to the enter button there was FLEE. That's so great... My side actually hurt. I will certainly read your stories as I love wit.

Within your story, "Academic Exercise," you again had a phrase which, to me, is world class. "Certainly she is not popularly gorgeous." The words tell so many things which are, of course, difficult to describe. It does it all without detraction or superficial description. GREAT.

Hi Sweetie, just wanted to let you know I read it, and found it scintillating *giggle* The ending made the story:)

Babble --- Amused.... had a little different twist than I expected. Enjoyed it though. Will read some more.

Revolution --- Very amusing. Just when you think you have it made, it vaporizes before your eyes. I once had an english teacher who fit the description you gave. She was a real turn on. She liked me very much. I even accompanied her to the movies once. Looking back I think I could have made it with her, but I was too dumb and iexperienced at the time. I'm enjoying reading your stories.

love the variety, and your imagination.

I have an awesome hard on that will not go away I just finished reading FALLEN... which means I need an encore! Your stories are ALL awesome.

I'm going into the bed room to fuck my sleeping wife now...I only hope something like this happens to me someday!

Fallen leaves you hanging and wanting for more. I would really like to see where you can take it.

Hi Sweety- smooth seemless sexy turn-on
thank-you

Brain sex. Fucking with the mind, body, and soul. The perfect reward for the perfect program. Objects oriented for the ultimate release. Thank you.

I held my breath, my mouth went dry. Until.

I would add breathless, impassioned and lustfilled to "I left feeling." Guess I must be SSD cause you sure know my triggers. I was a Number 6 virgin when I read "Hi Sweety", am only down to "Arrogance" and I like longer stories so don't put too much weight on my relative votes.
But More More More

Hi six, this is a very well developed subject. Extrmely well written. I hope to read some more of your work.

i would pay to read these stories...your ending are good

YUCK

The Audition: wonderful story. A great Father's Day story -- tension, wonder, imagination, disbelief (not inconceivable, just unlikely to happen to me), presents a level of communication that would be possible if we were to open ourselves to each other. I noted one little typo: "without the speaking,"

The other story, the new one and I don't remember the exact title, New Age Sermon? was also great. Described the internal tension warring within an erotically alive yet fervently religious believer. Hard to do without denigrating either part. You did it.

I had read a couple of your stories earlier and didn't care for them. I don't know how -- now that I've read these and enjoyed them so much! Maybe they were too much shorter and I just wasn't able to get started before it was over. I don't know but...

But I need to go back to begin reading your stories.

Thanks for writing for us.

You sure have a way with words. My writing is sick in comparison. Perhaps I should quit -- Naw! I really admire your writing. No doubt, you are the best!

I liked most of your stories very much: multitasking, accidental shirt, America, Angel of change, appearances.... I love the flirting, teasing, the innocence. I love the tension and risky situations. I'll be reading a lot more of your writing.

loved Copy Shop.

Dear No. 6,

I just want to tell you how much I enjoy your stories. I have read a number of them several times, but just found out one can read them sequentially, and so am starting through the cycle. I need to pace myself, however, as I don't ever want to finish them all. Love them; sure you can't write as many as I can read in a day. Since you have a headstart, maybe you can stay ahead of me for a bit. Keep up the good work.

No. x

Hi Number 6-

I've been reading your stories for a while and just wanted to say the "Foreshadow" is one of your best pieces of work yet. Although I enjoy your shorter work-- and you're a master of that format-- this longer story worked really well. Thanks!

CzL

the soft high button neck cardigan is such a simple garment, but is also so sexy if worn in certain ways, keep the cardigan stories rolling please.

I have enjoyed reading all of your stories. You are truly a gifted writer; I check the Asstr. website for your new stories - first - before glancing at the others.

Every man's dream ! "Paybacks are hell."

Keep up the good work

Great story! Geez, I just attended the open house for my daughter. Her kindergarten teacher has this intoxicating voice that made me all melty inside...

I must be turning into the Schitzoid Man. I don't know if you're Number 6 or I am. Today I was IMing a girl buddy. She mentioned that this morning she had to go to the dentist because her braces came disconnected. When we were through IMing I told her I couldn't wait to see her next week. "Braces are cute."

What I really wanted to say was, "I've never kissed a girl with braces." Well, there's always next week.

you fiend!

absolutely loved...on second thought, I'm not telling. And you can't make me, either.

If I could write like you...oh, well...ummm, I wouldn't write like me.

There's something super-hyper-compelling about the title? of your site, "There is no Number 6" ...almost chic, but thankfully, not quite. Read your 'about/FAQ' section re: Number 6, but neither allusion (sex act? nor TV show) rings my bells. Your stories are just super. And they do ring a few bells.

welcome back. I missed you.

wish you had story codes to indicate who did what to whom, when, where, how or why. It'd be nice to know what genre you offer, and if it's my stroke style.

BTW - the 1 I read was good.

A very pleasant experience! ;) As a female, it is nice to read stories that aren't "hard core" but still get the proverbial juices flowing.

u r a marveless peace. i can't spend a day with out checking ur site for updates. still when i am visiting places...i had to got o near by cafe to check on updates. u fuel my imaginations, satisfies my hunger for lust.

dare win lose

I've been reading you for a while, great stories. You capture instants of life with delicacy and precision. Keep writing and don't disappear again.

I wish this one was longer with more of a setup. Mabey some sort of pinball contest to make the other lose their "bet" while playing pinball. Mabey a pro who finally meets his or her match ;)

Loved "Did I Do That Right!" Keep up the good work! I am sending it to all my favorite women.

I want to make a pop band in the style of the Velvet Underground and have a song, using that as lyrics, with a John Cale reading (ala "The Murder Mystery")

Luv the FAQ; one of the best I've ever read. Luv the minimalistic approach; the appreciation of what is brought to the material. Something I rarely give: 5 stars.

I have read your other "erotica" and not been excited, but this one got me. Jokingly, I will ask you "So that's how I was supposed to read your works? I need to try that again."

Loved the double meaning in the first part "mixing of tongues".

I was expecting the husband to hear them and get mad, but, then I liked that the husband got the American goods he wanted (stupid American) and the translator got the American "purchase" he wanted too.

Well heck - I thought that I'd lost you for a while there. Nice to find this again.

The very first story I attempted to read on your site had an opening sentence with 149 words in it. Not just the opening paragraph, but the first SENTENCE. This type of writing is very difficult to read and enjoy. It is a shame really, because I love to read erotica. But I can't read something that gives me a headache instead of a hard-on.

hey this was great story and the pace is perfect...

too much for a heart condition

love you but i need gay old man stories

I like a lot of these stories. The tension built up in the back story always seems to be of just the right length and depth before getting to the consumation. I like that.

hi nice looking web site i do feel that you need story codes for the stories as the reader does not know what he/she is going to read.

I love your perverted sense of humor.

Thats the only one I read. I liked the character development and motivation. It was elegantly accomplished.

This story is tender as it gives you insight into the man's not appreciative family and her lack of being appreciated too.

I just stumbled into this one, and found myself laughing and enjoying it immensely.

I read this a while ago, but enjoyed it all the same again. Sort of like sex, you know. Doesn't matter how long it's been, you always enjoy it.

Again, I am laughing. So funny, the drooling and getting caught drooling. Nostalgic fantasy.

I leave this one wondering: how did these two get so close and how does his religious tendencies fit in?

I am intrigued by this one. The characters seem to be going ahead with a script which has been written in their heads for a while, but, as the man says he is older and ripened(?), it is time to perform the play, not just go over the lines again. Interesting.

These stories keep leaving me wanting more, but I don't have faith in the execution if you tried to make them longer. Thankfully, there are SO many to make up for it.

I desperately want to recommend these to all my friends, but they are just twisted enough I'm horribly afraid to admit reading them.

I like what you have here, but I would love to see longer works. These "flash" stories paint a single image and done.

I want you to do some plot. I think you would be awesome.

Stairway to Heaven was a fantastic story. Love the title- also love the song. It shows what happens often when a husband is clueless. I found the story very erotic. It would be great script for a short film. Would that Diane Lane and Olivier Martinez could reprise their roles in Unfaithful. William Macy could be the cuckolded husband.

I find myself smirking. Do you think he really thought that, i.e., is that a "male" common way of thinking, or is that you thinking for him, do you suppose? [...] Therefore I discount your story's "confidence" comment.

I laughed my ass off at Pronouns . I thought about all the delicious possibilities.

I enjoyed your story Sunday School . I guess church can really be boring at times.

lovely story but it left me wanting more. i had not quite cum it left me with a hard cock

Just read For You . Glad to see that you're still posting, even if it's not as often as before.

Stories seem so real!

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