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Notes about Daddy's Little Whore – First, I'm glad it's over, but a little sad too. It could have gone on, but I really went seven chapters beyond the best ending anyway, which was chapter five. So this is the end. And it's a long ending, twice the length of the usual chapters, but that couldn't be helped.

I came very, very close to killing Samantha. And it wasn't suicide, which was the implied threat for the last few chapters. Rather I had envisioned a scene where Deke confronts Sam at her home, her father learns the truth about her being a prostitute, and a fight ensues. JoJo would be there and being the bad guy, gets Deke's gun from the car and shoots…Samantha stepping in the line of fire, takes the bullet meant for her dad. She gets a nice death scene, with her dad holding her in the dying light. Roll credits.

In that ending, Sam would not have seduced her dad, he would have resisted right up til the end. Which some readers wanted, and some didn't. I myself have a lot of empathy for her, much more than you'd believe probably, and so I wanted her to win…or to die trying. The hard part would be the continued resistance simply because Daddy can only say no so many times before Sam will kill herself. That seemed clear to me at least.

So my opinion is that the reason she ultimately succeeds is partly due to her appeal as a beautiful young woman to her father as a man; but also because there's a sacrifice on his part. He has to trust her and he has to give in because he knows that rejecting her leads to the worst possible conclusion. So I wanted both his resistance, and his submission to be noble acts and worthy of his love for Sam.

I didn't mention Debbie at the end, though I was tempted to. We can assume she returned home, for better or worse. We don't know if she was really saved or not, and that was ultimately not Sam's responsibility, saving Debbie from her father. I'd like to think Debbie's mom got an anonymous phone call from one of her daughter's concerned friends.

And the teddy bear…Yes, there is a copy of the video inside the bear, along with Sam's money and her bracelet, I'd assume. Definitely though, she made two copies, keeping one for herself. I know I would.

And that concludes the author's commentary. I hope you enjoyed the story, I hope it entertained you and even aroused you in places. For those of you who had to wait 8 months for the continuation, pregnancy is like that. You just have to be patient and the good things will come. I thought I was being clever with Sam's timeline reflecting my own as I wrote this...But I tend to be too clever in such things.

As always, feel free to share your comments or questions. my email is rache696@yahoo.com...or on SOL use the link provided, as that sends email to my Gmail account, which is actually better. Not as much spam to weed through. 

Best always, Rachael... May 10, 2007

oh...the French? it means "My snake slithers through the short grass of the plains of Venus." isn't French hot? I should write a story in it.

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And now, the winner of the "Pick Samantha!" contest is....

Congratulations Samantha...You win by a finger!

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