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| Hello to all, I'm doing my own guestbook now (the manual way), so if you wish to add your comments please just enter them below and I'll put them up on this page. If you wish to have your Homepage URL added to your entry just place it into your message and I'll see that it's available. If you wish to use my Dreambook instead go here instead. Thanks, Naive |
| Name : | Gary |
| E-Mail Address : | anonymous_person@noone.nosuchperson.org |
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I have to agree with Alex and say part of what I like about your stories is how you play around with the conventions of this type of fiction a little and make the characters more three dimensional than what we're normally used to, breaking them out of the standard cliches. A good example is "A Touch of Art," where things don't go the way the women planned, and the victim isn't quite as easy to control as they thought. The stories I liked best are "A Safe Home," "The New School," and "The Farm," so I hope you continue these in particular. Sorry to read how your life sounds like it kinda sucks, though. Hope things improve for you. |
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Wednesday, July 9th - 2003 3:47 PM |
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| Name : | Mick |
| E-Mail Address : | Mb014c7859@blueyonder.co.uk |
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Hi, I have read a few of the stories and wonder if you are going to continue the New School Story? I very much hope you do. Great work keep it going. Mick |
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Thursday, June 5th - 2003 2:26 PM |
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| Name : | funnybag |
| E-Mail Address : | funnybag |
| Comments : | good grief can you write!!!!...have MA in lit and recognize talent when i see it...this is brilliant erotic lit...puts ann rice to shame...when feeling too depressed reread joyce's ulysses...your stuff is too good to be lost...recommending to friends on various erotic chats...only the intelligent ones...great stuff!!! |
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Saturday, April 5th - 2003 11:03 AM |
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| Name : | David H |
| E-Mail Address : | anonymous_person@asstr-mirror.org |
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Naive Looking at your list of negatives on your page, may I give you a suggestion. Take a page from Anais Nin. She wrote erotica to order and supported herself reasonably well. Advertise, your skills that you are able to write to order, using an alternative newspaper to start. I suggest that you purport to be a female as that will bring in more business. Most requests will be for the old in and out but there will be some that will be entrancing enough tospark a story you may be able to sell |
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Sunday, March 23rd - 2003 12:18 AM |
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| Name : | juta |
| E-Mail Address : | jaymadhab@hotmail.com |
| Comments : | hi |
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Saturday, March 22nd 2003 - 02:06:06 PM |
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| Name : | andy |
| E-Mail Address : | andy@hyperchat.com |
| Homepage URL : | http://www.hyperchat.com |
| Comments : | I feel so moved when reading about the humiliation of a man by women. Thank you. |
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Friday, March 21st 2003 - 10:55 PM |
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| Name : | PharmerTuck |
| E-Mail Address : | tucktucktheduck@yahoo.com |
| Comments : | Love your stories. Especially the "New School" series. I really hope you continue it. |
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Thursday, March 13th 2003 - 11:54:47 PM |
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| Name : | Mick Bird |
| E-Mail Address : | mb014c7859@blueyonder.co.uk |
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Great Stories I have enjoyed reading some of them The Truth and Dare got me hooked keep up the good work. Mick |
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Saturday, March 8th 2003 - 05:59:13 AM |
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| Name : | Alex |
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I wanted to tell you that I really enjoy your stories. Especially because there's always an element of humanity in the bad girls (at least in most cases), instead of being just superficial "cruel bitch" characters. That, allied to a nice innocence/love/guilt element, makes your stories mostly unique among other femdom stories. I hope you continue "Truth or Dare","A Touch of Art" and "A Safe Home". Those are my favorites. Thanks for writing them. |
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Wednesday, February 5th 2003 - 02:57:23 AM |
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| Name : | Ludde |
| E-Mail Address : | Ludwig_L85@msn.com |
| Comments : | I just wanted yo tell you that I enjoy your stories very much and especially "Truth or Dare" and I`m looking forward to when youŽll continue your stories. |
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Sunday, December 29th 2002 - 04:33:59 AM |
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| Name : | Cody |
| E-Mail Address : | codiexxx4@netscape.net |
| Comments : | I eagerly await the day you feel like adding to these wonderful stories, especially The Farm. Take care of yourself, because I would hate to be left stranded without them being completed!! |
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Friday, October 18th 2002 - 01:55:38 AM |
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| Name : | bb |
| E-Mail Address : | hellbirdman@yahoo.com |
| Homepage URL : | http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Atrium/1301/ |
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I love ur stuff and you are very brave to be so truthfull about yourself. I will say a prayer for you to find yourself in the same femdom situations u write about. When it happens give yourself over to it. bb |
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Wednesday, September 25th 2002 - 09:50:41 PM |
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| Name : | Naive |
| E-Mail Address : | Shattered_mind@hotmail.com |
| Homepage URL : | Naive's Story Site |
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Welcome to my GuestBook! Thanks for any and all comments. Naive |
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Thursday, September 5th 2002 - 02:32:31 AM |
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