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Comments from Readers

Birthday Party - Aftermath #1: How exciting...I luv for my wife to do things like that...except I am in on it and eat their cum out after she comes home. Thanks for great stimulation!

Birthday Party: Thanks for your newest. Loved the storyline. Also enjoyed both endings (preferred the second, tho.) Also, my compliments on the webpage, very well laid out and easy to use. Looking forward to more of your works. --- DTY

Paragon of Virtue: I had already read "The Basement" before our last correspondence. Have since read "The Paragon" which I thought was outstanding. Noticed that you used a bit of the reluctance concept, though it didn't take Denise long to give in! Certainly added to my delight. Am waiting as patiently as possible for your next! Keep up the hard work. --- DTY

Thank you for your great stories. You are one of my favorite authors on ASSTR. Very exciting scenarios, especially since they are based on past personal experiences! Hope you will continue to share with your readership. Thanks again, P.C.

The Swing Club: Have read several of your erotic stories and feel that they are some of the best I've ever come across, and I've read a lot of stories. Especially liked "The Club". Wish I could visit a place like "The Club". Nice to watch the action, if nothing else. Keep up the good work. Regards, John

Summer in Albuquerque: Your Albuquerque account of Paula and Gordon was incredibly sexy ...awesome i must say. Mail me more please. --- Janet

Flight to Santiago and Grayman's Island: I want to thank you and express my appreciation for all your stories over the years. When you stopped posting on Dark Wanderer, I had assumed that you had retired. I was overjoyed to see you active on ASSTR. Your writings have a wonderful sense of buildup with solid action. I particularly admire "Flight to Santiago". Also, is there likely to be a sequel to "Grayman's Island"? I really liked they way that one was building up. Thanks. --- Andy

Metamorphasis and Frustrated Mother and Daughter: Metamor and Frustrated are outstanding.... thanks for adding new stories! --- :) Russell

Frustrated Mother: Hi, I just read your story "Frustrated" Ohh my what a hot story.... More more more ( smiling) --- Tim

Summer in Albuquerque and Anniversary Series: Just wanted to drop you a note to say that I'm a big fan of your stories...been a fan since you originally posted some of your work on the Dark Wanderer's website and am glad that I found you on ASSTR. Summer in Alburquerque and the Anniversary Series are some of my favorites and I'm glad that I've now found more of your adventures on ASSTR. Keep up the great work!!

My Wife and the Air Force Captain: My Wife and the Air Force Captain, what a hot story! Very well written with great physical descriptions and graphic sex. Thanks for the good read. I�ll fuck your wife in a heartbeat! I�ll be looking for more of your postings. Best regards, --- Art M.

The Swing Club: I saw your new spotlights and downloaded the stories. Read "The Swing Club"... that is a great story! Very much enjoy a hot fuck story written by someone who can actually write!

Summer in Albuquerque: I have just finished reading "Summer"... for many years I taught Creative Writing on a college level, and have never encountered pornographic stories as well developed as yours. Both your patience and writing skills are remarkable. ---- :) Russell

Flight to Santiago: Hi RLM, i'am talking to you from Santiago of Chile. I really like your stories and I apreciated very much if you tell me where i can find your entire collection. One question, have you really been in Santiago? Anyway your stories are so hot and i realy enjoy reading. Add me to your msn ..... if you like.... Thanks for your time and your Stories ..... See you

The Swing Club, The Shoe Store, and The Theater: The Club, and The Shoe Store, and especially, Theater, Whew! I have read three of your stories, beginning with Theater and now am half way through "My Wife and the Air Force Captain." Not only is your line by line writing excellent, and the overall development of the story superb, the general theme of a hot, sexually out-of-control wife really gets my blood pumping. Anyway, thanks for your most excellent efforts. I seldom save anything from the internet but have saved these stories, and am open to correspondence should that interest you. --- :) Russell

My Wife and the Air Force Captain: Hi, What an amazing story! You are an excellent writer. Very enjoyable. I love these edgy alpha male rivalries. Thank you so much for sharing your time & talent. I really appreciate your imagination. L.

Theater: I just read your story at asstr. I enjoyed it very much. You write well. Have you written anything about licking your wife after another man has screwed her? Hank

Great set of new stories; I wish they were all true; if so, your wife is too hot. Gary

The Shoe Store: Mmmmm, wow! Got any more? I'm into it, but I must look up "cuntal", not sure it's a word? Again, Rachel says, WOW!

The Theater: I loved the story about going to a x-rated movie house and getting fucked. --- Dennis

Tenth Wedding Anniversary: ...was really great. Do you have more tales about your wife? You tell a good story and/or she is pretty hot. My eyes and ears are peeled.

Have just returned to DC from vacation in the Midwest and Mountain West. I had a great trip and did enjoy the adventures of you and your wife along the way. You kept me company from Chicago to the Black Hills. As you suggested I did find and print the Flight to Santiago. Nice story. I really enjoyed it. I always wonder how much writers simply report experiences, embellish the already racy facts or totally work from fantasy. Whichever method you chose, you did well. I do actually like the 10th anniversary series a even more better, but both are enjoyable. If you ever choose to write up the story of your most recent New Year's Eve, I'd love to hear it -- Blacklion

Metamorphasis: WOW! I just finished reading your story and am spent -- in more ways that one. Awesome stuff!! Assuming the accounts reflect the big picture, you've managed to satisfy your woman. Does the adventure continue in ways that the story insinuates? Thanks for sharing... Woody

Sexy Alice Ann and Hot Paula: That was one of the best written independent erotic stories I've read yet. Most people's grammar is atrocious, and their word choice is plane jane, but you did wonderfully. --- salute

The Theater: absolutely loved the theater story......had me creaming by the time I finished. Wish I could get my wife into a theatre like that.... B.

The Theater: damn good.... i love going to xxx theaters... i love exposing my cock to the women... good story...

Don't Come Home Yet: The story was outstanding. Just if I may ask a question, why you cut the ending short? Don�t let my question bother you it was great story. Thank you for writing.... Tony

My Wife and the Air Force Captain: This was as hot a story as I have ever read!! But if I was going to let other guys have my wife, I damn sure would be getting their wives too. Or someone else at the time!!! But it was a damned good story and so erotic and I love the wife of the first captain getting spanked with a belt.. That really did me good! I love to spank a good hot pussy!!! Please continue to write!! And if there is a way, let me know when they are posted. If you have others posted, can you give me a link to them? I love reading a good fuck story!!! --- rball

Don't Come Home Yet: We immensely over poured with lust reading the story of Come Home Late. Hat's off to you. .. Hurtfaty

Specific Story Not Cited: Dear RLM, I came twice just by reading your stories. Wish you could see my shaved cunt throbbing and pulsating. Keep them coming. You are gifted..... your fan

Grayman's Island: I Have just read what I hope is just the first four of many chapters of Grayman's Island. The story has all the earmarks of a great story. Thank you for posting it and please let me know about when the next chapters may be posted, or if there are, more chapters planed. Thank you for your excellent writing.... Tony.

General Comment: Hi there, I would just like to tell you how much I have enjoyed your stories, I really like the story told in the 1st person as much as possible and you do that a lot,..and of course the subject of a husband and wife having sex with others and then telling each other about it is my favourite erotic subject,and finally some of the descriptive terms fire the imagination,...So please keep up the good work...... Gary

A Paragon of Virtue: I have just read "A Paragon of Virtue" it was a excellent story. I did however have just a little trouble at first understand if it was being told in third person or first person and by whom Mark or Denise. That little problem aside, I must say it was very good. Thank you for a great story....... Tony

Flight to Santiago: Your stories are excellent. So erotic. My favorite is Flight to Santiago. Thank you. Dave

The Swing Club: I read your story "The Club". I couldn't help myself. I came in my jeans. Loved it..... Woodie

Theater: I just read a story that you wrote called Theater. I enjoyed it very much and wanted to know if you have written any more. Thanks... J.

Theater: Must say it was hot. love to read more if you have your own web site, the one I read is on asstr-mirror.org. Ususally I write to a writer, they give fake addresses, but whoever you are, you have a hot writing style, please keep it up... Ron

A Wife's Secrets: Thanks for your newest "episodes" with Paula's extracurriculas! As always, they were most amusing and exciting. I think you will agree though that they couldn't be developed as fully as your usual stories simply by their nature. Hope you will once again soon revisit the Grayman's Island concept. I found the possibilities virtually endless for that story. Regardless of what you choose to do next, I look forward to your next release.... DY

Grayman's Island-Part II: WOW!! As intensely erotic a story as I have ever read. Truly. And you are right on target about the excitement of some of the more novel and unusual methods that you describe. Very, very arousing...DY

Two Precocious Daughters: two teenage girls hot story and good pictures,the pictures bring a great visulization to any story.please post more... IWATCH

Flight to Santiago: Read the story as a result of reading the excellent comments it had garnered from your other readers. Glad I did! You had either been to Santiago or had an excellent guide book to use as a reference.... (story corrections and suggestions here .. not reproduced..thank you Frank) Again, thank you for strong plots, and for putting the table at the foot of the bed in Precocious Daughters... Frank

Erotic Encounters of a Hot Wife: Finally had sufficient time to read E.E. in one sitting! Loved your new lady. Treva certainly was enthusiastic, wasn't she!! Perhaps she can return in future efforts? ... DTY

The Distraught Housewife: As some one who enjoys watching his wife, you can guess I enjoyed this story a lot. Keep up the good work. Perhaps a few pictures as well in the next one. Sorry just have to be a little greedy... IWATCH

The Distraught Housewife: Wow...every story you write is as good or better than the last! I am constantly checking to see if you have any new stories out...keep up the great work! Of course the stories about Paula are the HOTTEST! Are any of the pics you use on the webpage stories actually of Paula? I'm sure I'm not the only one who reads your adventures that want's to see how gorgeous and hot she is. Anyways...keep up the great writing and I'm definitely gonna keep reading.... Scott

Flight to Santiago: Hello. My name is Denis. I'm from Russia. I very liked your story "Flight to Santiago". I have beautiful girlfriend and let her fucks around. I would like to translate the story into the Russian and share it on the Russian slutwife community. Don't you mind?... Regards, Denis.

The Distraught Housewife: I liked your distraught story. Where do you get the pictures if you want to illustrate a story? I'd say keep writing, but you are and I've only read a few of yours. Good luck if you are trying for a clitoride award.... Bob

The Paula-Gordon Series: I�ve read several of your stories posted to ASSTR and have enjoyed them immensely. It is such a pleasure to read a well-crafted story that has believable characters, a plot (a rarity), and generally good grammar, with only the occasional errant typo, not to mention your hot-as-hell sex scenarios. I have especially enjoyed your Paula and Gordon series... (additional cordial and constructive criticism here --- Thank you, Art.) Finally, thank you for sharing your titillating stories. Like I said, you are an excellent storyteller, not to mention wonderfully raunchy. Best regards, Art Martin

Deric's Wager: Just wanted to say that Deric's Wager was another HOT addition to your writings. Personally I loved the build up and teasing that occurred...made the story even HOTTER. Can't wait to see what you have coming out next! A suggestion for you, as I'm sure I'm not the only one interested in what you have in the works...maybe you can post on ASSTR a short description of the stories you have in the works...I know that I'd love to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work!!!... Scott

The Atonement of Two Hot Wives: I find written erotica more arousing than video porn. I really like the story (atone) and some of the others about Gordon and Paula... Bob

Hot Married Pussy: All I can say is...you did it again! Another great story about your hot slut Paula! She's absolutely incredible...you're a lucky man! Was Paula this hot when you guys met or did she become a hot slut after your guys were married? Would love to hear how you guys got started or how your first discovered how hot Paula is. Keep up the great work as always... can't wait to read more about you and Paula... those stories are the absolute best!... Scott

Grayman's Island: We enjoyed the Grayman's Island. Cant wait for part III. Have you completed the third part yet? If so would you send it? This story was particularly suited for us... Thanks, Jean and Rob.

General Comment: Dear RLM, Your writing is absolutely beautiful and oh so inspiring. I am an ailing old widow who really hasn't had much to inspire her to make it from one day to another for many years. That has all changed since I began reading your stories just a few days ago. I have only read two, so far, and hardly wait to start some of the others. Bless you, ... Olive

My Wife and the Air Force Captain: WOW!!!! I'm just now catching my breath from all the orgasms I had while reading "My Wife and The Air Force Captain". Your descriptive writing style grabbed me in the first paragraph and didn't let go. I wanna be Tracy! ... Squirrely

Summer in Albuquerque: Gordon and Paula, I really did enjoy your story and wished I was the mailman in the story. Do you have a website and (hopefully ) some photos? I now realize that If I read the html I get the photos too. Really hot. you are on my favorites. ps, I'm typing one-handed now. Regards ...Thorn

General Comment: I thoroughly enjoy your stories posted in asstr-mirror.org. There's much to like, but I especially enjoy the personal strength the husbands display in supporting their wives play with other men. If a husband feels insecure about his wife's activity, as the husband expressed to his wife in the story, "My Wife and the Air Force Captain," she expresses her devotion and connection to her husband with what seem to be an honest expression of love and desire for him. (general comments about swinging here... not reproduced... thank you Bruce.) I get that your stories are fiction, but hope that more and more couples, in reality, can enjoy the pleasure of the company of others outside their marriages. Sexual pleasure can be great fun, and variety is, I believe, a genuine ingredient to keeping it fun and oh-so-satisfying without mens' and womens' lives. Thank you for your stories. Sincerely,... Bruce

The Reluctant Wife and Deric's Wager: I love your stories! They are well written, very erotic and provide a great deal of reading pleasure. I've read about one-half of them, and I've just finished "The Reluctant Wife". It was terrific. My favorite is "Deric's Wager". I thought the plot twist at the end made it an unusually good story... Thanks again for the entertainment!!!! Jimbobay

Pandora's Box: Even though it wasn't starring my favorite hotwife Paula, I loved Pandora's box...another masterpiece of erotica from you! As in Deric's Wager I loved the teasing and lead up to the climax of the story. Can't wait to see what's coming next from you (hopefully more of Paula's HOT encounters! WEG) Keep up the great work... Scott

Theater and Deric's Wager: Man I just read your story it was GREAT. I loved every nasty minute of it. I also read the wager I also thought it was wonderful. Do you know these gals?... Waylon

Pandora's Box: Just finished reading your posting of Pandoras Box. Once again, I commend you for a fine, first-rate fuck story. I particularly enjoyed your story�s twist on Brices emotions, turned on anger and jealousy, impending loss, conciliation to swing. The story had a good pace and the imagery invoked was quite explicit. Of particular note was the vision I conjured (with an economy of well-chosen words) of Sharla naked on the beach during their honeymoon. Best regards,... Art Martin

A Working Wife and her Sister: Just read your story on asstr-mirror.org titled, "A Working Wife and her Sister". It was nicely written with the right blend of background building and detailed fucking. A throughly cumming experience, I should say. Congrats for writing such a nice story. I am sure a lot of people would have enjoyed it. regards... Aditya

Theater: Just read your story, it was fantastic, I thought the idea of the wife telling her husband what was happening was excellent... les

Flight to Santiago: Hi again, We like " Flight to Santiago " very much. My wife think it is the best story ever written whole her life. I saw an announcement at " asstr " that second part of this story is on going ? is it true? Because it will be Luis Mendez Saga :)) who is my wife's darkest dream about submitting by powerfull dominant man in front of me .... According to your experince how is going marriage after this kind of act .... Actually im looking for this kind of dominant guy like in " fligt to santiago " Picture is my wife also attached if any opportunities for dominant guy who is reccomended by u. best regards ... MB

General Comment: My wife continues to really enjoy reading your stories and they've become a regular part of sex life. They are good!... John

A Sexually Enslaved Wife: When I saw that you were making a sequel to Flight to Santiago I made sure to go back and re-read it before it came out. After re-reading it I didn't think it would be possible to write a sequel that could top it, but you did just that. In Sexually Enslaved Wife Paula is sluttier than ever and that makes the story just that much hotter!!! Keep up the great work... Scott

The Shoestore: I just finished reading your story about Paula, her Hubby and the Shoe store clerk. VERY VERY hot..! I love stories that have a slutty wife as the main character. I think a lot of men fantasize about the woman being their own wife and getting to watch her get nasty. That is what I am thinking when I read these types of stories. Hope to read more of your stories and if the wife's name happens to be Doreen then I would enjoy it even more... Thanks again.. T.T.

A Working Wife and her Sister: I just completed reading several of your stories and had to comment on "The Working Woman and her Sister". First, I enjoyed the story immensely. Second, the idea of "Strip Lying" is inspired. Thanks for your hobby... Jimbobay

Doreen: Tom's Adventuresome Wife" Hi RLM. Love "Doreen". Your best since since Santiago. I love the interplay between slut wife & husband. Sex scenes that go on & on become boring unless emotions like guilt, jealousy,etc play a strong part in the story. Well done. looking forward to more of your stories. Regards... Dave

Flight to Santiago: My wife and I really enjoy you stories! Flight to Santiago is probably the favorite. How do you find the time to write so prolifically and stories so lengthy? (some questions here about the models for the images... not reproduced) Thanks for the entertainment,... Andy

General Comment: I love many of your stories posted on ASSTR. And, one of the special aspects of the stories I very much like is the inclusion of the photos within the stories. Alas, most of the time when I select one of the stories to read the photos aren't downloaded with the text. Is there something I can do to get this to happen? Thanks, ...Bruce. [The problem is the limited bandwidth available to asstr-mirror.org. You just have to try different times for downloading. When the servers are not so busy, the photos will download. RLM]

An Anonymous Informer: Just read your story "An Anonymous Informer" and loved it, hot, hot, hot. Also loved the pictures of the georgous women OMG. Especially loved the absolutely stunning blonde on the title page. Could you please supply details (name etc) so that I can find some more pictures on the web. Keep up the good work. Cheers, ... Colin

Doreen: Tom's Adventuresome Wife: OMG, this story is so fucking hot...! I can't get through more than about 10 minutes of reading before I am shooting off a load of my hot cum..!! Reading about my wife Doreen is the sexiest thing ever!! I'll read more as soon as I am able to get hard again and will send you another message then.... Thanks so very much for adding some REAL excitment into my day.It looks like Doreen is getting rather slutty so I will continue to read with the computer mouse in one hand and something else in the other..!!!... Tom

Theater: This my all-time favorite story...! It has always been my fantasy to have me wife go with me into an adult theater and to be handled an fucked by numerous men..! This story hit on every turn on that I have had for my wife to be fuck and to have her suck the cocks of men that are total strangers.....Thanks alot....T.T.

General Comment: Thank you for your body of work. I have been reading erotic stories for thirty-five years. Whereas the Internet is a great resource, truly well written stories are a somewhat rare find. I have derived great enjoyment from reading (and viewing) your works. Other than the stories that contain incest, you have really provided me with the flavor of material for which I have searched for years. I am most interested in the slut-wife genre, and no one does it better than you. Thank you... T.B.

General Comment: I really appreciate your stories, thank you! It is getting harder and harder to find stories as good as the ones you write. Personally I like the hot wife stories but they all seem to work the you write them. The pics you publish, are one of the first things I check in the mornings. Where do you get them from? Those ladies aare the perfect women I see when reading the stories of the cuckolded hub or the open couple, PLEASE keep them coming. Once again thanks for your work!... fallclasic

Birthday Party: "Birthday Party" and both 'aftermaths'... excellent trilogy... Frank

Covering for a Friend: I've been reading your hot hot letters. I love every one so far. I've read only half so far. These are so damn good. Keep up the great work... dewman

Vacations: Your writing is awesome, very, very creative and a nice twist - scale of 1 to 10 gets a 20. Thanks, Thomas

General: fantastic, all of them. What a turn on !! ... Paul

General: I just wanted to send you a message to say hi. I came across your stories on asstr and I had to let you know you are a fantastic writer. Obviously since I am a straight man I have no real comparison for what you are writing About, but you seem to have such passion, its absolutely riveting! I have written a few stories in my time, not nearly as amazing as yours, and I can appreciate your talent! Its also a TOTAL turn on... very nice to read in my office by myself at work :) This south African man is a big fan! Keep up the good work! Cheers, ... David

Tenth Wedding Anniversary Series: Dear RLM: I have recently found and have been reading your stories on Dark Wanderer, including the four part series about your Tenth Wedding Anniversary. What a great collection of nine stories!! I am really enjoying them, and they make me hot and horny. I need you here, Paula!! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the stories. Where else do you have current stories posted? Please write back. A new horny friend,... Larry (Hope you found www.asstr-mirror.org from the URL I sent. Thanks for writing, Larry...RLM)

The Student Boarder: I really like your work, you have a nice writing style, and, while I tend to like slightly different subject matter (inc, mainly, and not any cheating stuff) you do it so well I really enjoy your stories. They're also pretty damn hot. That being said, I have one complaint: you dominate the crap out of the ASSTR Author Spotlights section. (Thank you for the constructive criticism. Please check the new posting on the Spotlight Section. It will be more to your liking. Thank you for your helpful comment. Best regards... RLM)

The Student Boarder: Hello. Want to take a min and say how great is your story. I am 53 yr old hubby with a 52 yr old wife. She is not hot wife. That is my dream but how you show the changing the wife and the change in the hubby is great. I truly love how you showed that the Hot wife piece not only improved their sex life but their marriage as well. Thanks for writing. have you written anymore? know of any other stories along this line of plot? Where a wife and husband start to explore the life and it improves the marriage the woman's self esteem confidence etc. Those things i want for my wife. Again thanks for writing... meijer

Sensuous Women: A superb and accurately illustrated story. I am retired but I was in the motor trade all my life and I do know how it was in my time, looks as though some things never change... Anonymous

Theater: Thanks for the great story of Paula and you at the Adult Theater. I am divorced now, but my X-wife and I used to go to a place called the Palm in San Mateo, CA. There she'd go behind a half high wall in the back and let guy after guy fuck her. It was so wonderful and exciting. My job was to check to see if all their cocks had condoms on 'em, which I usually did by sucking on them a little before they stuffed their cocks into Bonnie's cunt. It was such an incredible time. Years later they torn down the Palm and Bonnie and I broke up over money stuff. But, reading your story really brought the memory if watching my wife get gang-banged back into clear focus. Thanks again... Kyle

Bridge Playing Wives: Finally had a little time to catch up on my cache of reading materials, and one of your stories came to the top, "Bridge Playing Wives." Loved it, man, loved it! As I said before, I like your Paula and Gordon stories the best, and I wasn't disappointed with this gem... Art Martin

General Comment: Hi, thanks for the stories. They get better and better. I cant tell you what they make me do !! I'll have to write one for you one day. thanks and regards,... Paul

The Student Boarder: Your new way of illustrating your stories lifts them to new levels. Before they were no better and no worse than all the other stories on numerous websites, now I am looking at your stories every day to se if there are any new ones. I will usually cum twice during the course of reading a story and I often go and read a story a second and subsequent times. This level is now the level that others must aspire to and that all new authors must achieve at their very first story on line. Keep up the good work, regards,... Jim M.

Bridge Playing Wives and Temptations: Well as you know my favorite stories of yours are the ones involving Paula and Bridge Playing Wives did not dissapoint one bit. Paula was as HOT and SLUTTY and I LOVED IT!!! More Paula please!! Temptation was also very hot...loved the teasing and build up involved at the opening party before Darla let herself go wild. Keep up the great work... Scott

Tenth Wedding Anniversary: Dude, I read the stories on Dark Wanderer about your wife with the 17 year old and when she danced in the club. Are they real stories? If they are she is hot!... Henry, Savannah, GA

Fishing Expeditions: Hey that was a great fuck story with the action vids embedded. Thanks for that and it had me going for the whole trip. Thanks again and I am going back for more.... badabbot

Theater: As a street passable Tgirl I love going to adult theaters.. i have seen what you have writtin in a adult theater in Hartford, CT.. you are a good writer.. charlene

General Comment: Your stories make me pound my cock until I shoot! The only thing better would be to pound your Mrs with my boys!... Henry

Tenth Anniversary Trip: I was just reading, "Anniversary Trip", parts 1,2 and 3. They are very good. I really liked part 3. Can you e-mail stories to me? Thanks... John

Three Choices from an Unsatisfied Wife: Another cock-stiffening tale from a master! ... Art

Theater: OMG ED! Your wife Paula is so fucking incredible! If these stories are true, you have to be one of the luckiest guys on earth. I realise that the pics provided with the stories are for illustration purposes, but DAMN! Are any of the shots actually pics of Paula? You are an excellent writer my friend. The way you build the story up is great, and, you understand how absolutly essential dialog is in a great erotic story. So many people who try to write in this genre don't have a clue about that. Please, keep writing and tell Paula she has made many men hard as rocks (myself included) because of her intensely lustful ways! I have downloaded all of the stories from your page and can not wait to read the rest, especially the ones concerning your wife. Where the hell did you find this amazing woman and does she have a sister? lol Thank you so much for sharing her escapades with all of us!... Jon

All of them - First to Last: Outstanding... Fileclerk

The Arrogant Wife: I was reading Literotica stories for awhile. Picked up your link from a story of yours I saved months ago from ASSTR. (It may be "Arrogant Wife", one of my alltime favorites). Since reading your stories, I like them better than almost all Literotica ones, even though my wife & I aren't swingers. This isn't flattery- just how I feel. Great job!...Keith

General Comment: I have read several of your stories and must say I have enjoyed everyone I have read. Also do you live in the FT Worth area? I live in the Colleyville area, well enjoyed your stories keep up the good work. Oh and if you do live in the area and need some more material email me and I can come do the wife.....lol Thanks... Tony

Game Nights: I have been reading all your stories and tonight I read Game Nights. You are a very good writer/author. I have enjoyed each of your stories and the accompanying pictures as well. Usually I tend to not read illustrated stories as the pictures or art work never seem to 'match' what the story is about. Your stories are an exception. I hope that you keep writing into the future. Thank you for sharing your wicked and wonderful talents with me... and the rest of the world too.... Dave

A Wife's Diary: Another excellent story. Just Great. Keep the stories coming!... Anonymous

Game Nights and A Wife's Diary: Wow once again you've outdone yourself. Game Nights was incredibly HOT! The games that Paula and the other wives cook up make Vegas look like childs play. No man in his right mind would pass up your hot wives to play poker.

If Game Nights was incredibly HOT then I don't even know how to describe the Diary. Reading first hand how much of a hot wife Paula was from almost the beginning was almost too much to handle. Tell her she needs to publish her Diary...guarantee it becomes a #1 bestseller...I know I'd be first in line to buy it! I for one hope that there's more to come from Paula's Diary. Keep up the great work and can't wait to read your next story.... Scott

The Reluctant Wife: Great Story. Many 1st's. The erotic buildup with Jean hit on the romantic side while it was raw sex for Paula. Thanks for a great read.... Anonymous

The Submissive Turkish Wife: Hi. We've been reading your stories for a few days. They are the best stories we have ever read which makes you our fav. writer. Not that it is any honor to you but we wanted to let you know. Our fav. one was the "submissive Turkish wife". It wasn't the "submissive" part what we liked but the "Turkish" part. As we belong to Cairo, Egypt, it was a turn on to read muslim couple have their fun in New York which was impossible they could get in their own country... We are a married couple in our mid forties... We started reading erotic stories at asstr and literotica.com for quite a while. These stories made us start our own imagination and see ourselves in some of the stories, if you know what I mean. We like it when a story is the nearest to the reality which is your speciality. Which is not possible to happen in real life, doesnt attract us. We'd like to share some of our fantasies if you entertain such requests, of course. Thanks... J and J

Covering for a Friend: I did not like how it ended abruptly and how Matt was the only one who was cheated out and taken for a ride without any benefit... Anonymous

Gail's New Look: Bravo RLM! This is the best story you have written in a long time. This story had had emotion. It wasn't just a raw sex story I cam away wth the feeling tha Gail truely loved her husband and he loved her. I do not get that feeling in a lot of your stories... Anonymous.

Gail's New Look: Lovely story. I enjoyed it immensely and thought you handled it all well. I'm glad that she gave up the others and came back to her husband in the end, and that they were able to fix things between them. He treated her poorly, yes, but she most certainly got even and then some. She was lucky he stuck it out, waiting for her to realize that he really did love her, and he was lucky that she didn't leave him when he had treated her so badly too. Thank you for sharing your talents, once again. As an author myself, I appreciate the time and work you put into each story, especially the illustrated ones... Dave aka curious2c

Gail's New Look: Great story... Dale

Bridge Playing Wives: What a great story. Reminds me of a time sooooo long ago.Thanks for all of your hard work.I think I shall see what other stories might interest me. Once again ,thanks for all of your hard work... Olddad

A Wife's Diary: All these stories are great. A wife's diary was very hot. I'm curious about the pics of from the stories. Anyway to get the complete unedited sets? I'm especially curious of the name of the blonde model you use for the Paula pics. Thanks for this great site!... R

The Morrison Wives: WOW, WOW, WOW, Possibly the most well thought out, most interesting and hottest story I've ever read. You have such a devious imagination with this storyline that it (in my opinion) borders on genius. The photo's and clips only serve to further enhance your extraordinary abilities. (I like the Blonde women also :-) Your the best on the Web, in my opinion. I must say that I do also like Art Martins work, and I'd noted that you have colaborated with him - I also am a fan of his work... I said before that on a scale of 1 to ten you get a fifteen, I stand corrected. You get at least a 20!!! Sincerely,... Thomas [Thank you, Thomas! ... RLM]

The Swing Club: What a well written story! Now I need to read all of your stories.... Was the (story) a real encounter of your sexy wife? (Yes...RLM) Where are you from and how old are you now? Did you ever get to make love to another women?? (Yes... many times... RLM) Hope to hear from you... Peter

A Wife's Diary, A Reluctant Wife, Flight to Santiago: The other stories that I have read are A Wife's Diary, A Reluctant Wife, Flight to Santiago. SOOOOO good! I am wondering how a man can stay hard soo long and shoot so many times.....women no problem having mulitple pleasures! I will take the time to read the others as well. Makes me want to be in them myself!!!! All the best! Peter

Gail's New Look: wow your stories rock... dewman

Erotic Adventures of an Egyptian Family: Hi I have never read stories like this and shit did I cum so many times, loved it Cheers... Nash

Erotic Encounters of a Hot Wife: I enjoy your writing, but you misused the phrase "hoist on one's own petard." It comes from Hamlet III.iv.206-7: "Tis the sport to have the enginer Foist on his own petard." An enginer was a sapper and petard a bomb, so this was a man blowing himself up, not stabbing himself with his own sword as you (and many others, including me for a long while) have used it here... Anonymous [Thank you. I never realized that. I did check and you are absolutely correct. I have, therefore, removed the incorrect phrase from the story. My apologies... RLM]

Three Wishes: This is one of several stories of yours that I've enjoyed. I may have to comment on some of the previous ones, later. The Alladin's Lamp element was a bit corney. I almost passed on the story for that reason. But, I was surprised to find that the way that the situation developed had grabbed me. In fact, I'm sure a that I would have been happy to go along if the this story had been stretched out. I was almost disappointed that the characters couldn't have explored more of the levels with more situations... Manny

Giving Hubby What He Wants and House Guest: I just read "Give Hubby What He Wants" and "House Guest" Both were excellent. The deception in "hubby" was great, as was the wife staying a month with you. Did that adventure really happen?... Keith

The Satyr: I really, really liked it. Did Cliff and Kathy ever get married? I didn't notice it and wished they did... Keith

Giving Hubby What He Wants: now here's a story i can get behind, even if there was a "great deceit" involved. excelliant, brilliant. wow. thank you... RK

General Comment: Just wanted to let you know, I have read most of your latest stories. They are truly awesome. Thanks,... John

Disciplining Marsha: OMG, "Disciplining Marsha" is fantastic. Sometimes I wish I was like CC. I could never be that forceful... John

The House Guest: Finally had some down time for little recreational reading and chose "The House Guest". As you may remember, I've always immensely enjoyed your Paula and Gordon stories. The House Guest didn't disappoint. In fact, I think it's your most erotic P & G story yet. Perhaps we'll hear about Tracy's visit sometime in the coming months. Gordon should definitely treat her to gang fucking like Don did for Paula. Maybe even treat Don to a webcast of the event. Thanks aging for a superb read. Best regards,... Art Martin

Story not Specified: I just finished reading your story. Let me tell you that was some story. You realy got me hard. Just thinking about your wife is gettig me off. thank you. I truly enjoyed the story. Please feel free to send me one of your hot stories any time. Dam you just thinking about your wife is getting me of. Thanks ... Tom Jones

General Comment: I have read them all, but I have started reading them again. Starting with game nights. When can we expect game nights 2? I have enjoyed all of your stories very much... S. Johnson

Cruise: Really enjoyed the "Cruise" story. Let me guess. In Richards Club at the end of the story, Paula did more than chat with the manager and some other dancers, right?... Keith [Maybe. She never told me... RLM]

Cruise: hiiii,ur stories with illustrating pics always drives me crazy.the pictures r appealing n real tat one certainly enjoys the experience.wud really like to meet u n paula personally.n one request -keep updating new stories....this site rocks n d best part is tat its absolutely free....tats gr8... getsmoin

A Predatory Couple: An absolutely superb piece of writing coupled with some absolutely delicious photography... Anonymous

The Student Boarder: great story...may another chapter? anyway thanks for sharing..... looneyone

A Distraught Housewife: Wonderful work of art! I loved the story, I actually have read several of yours and they are all fantastic! Outstanding job. Thanks for the great stories... Wife Watcher

Pandora's Box: I have to compliment you again, I am reading Pandora, and I have to say, it is absolutely amazing. Simply awesome friend. Later,... Chris

To Build a Fire: Sorry to admit it, I lost the title of your story about Alyson Linhart. I truly enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Unlike most fuck stories there really is not a story. This had at least three stories in the story, this I really enjoyed. Most of erotic stories are simply, she looked a him and he pulled out a 10" dick. She had her first big O at the site of it. He licked her and she had another O, she begged him to put it in. She has one or two more orgasms he fills her to over flowing. (One teaspoon) the end. I will be reading more of your work. Starting tonight. Great Job, well done... Capt. Q (Cue)

Working Wife and her Sister: Absolutely awesome author, how do I address you? Why is the world stuck up about sex? ... Regards... SenseNonsense

The Submissive Turkish Couple: I just read your story about murat and ozlem I jerked off but my cock hardened again. very powerfull story... tarik

Cheryl's Heat: Always enjoy your stories, but holy smokes! You've got a hot one here! Certainly her husband has a hot one. Unfortunately, I have to run and make an apointment, but I am certainly looking forward to reading part 2 as soon as possible. Cheryl honey, you are my kind of girl!... Art Martin

Cheryl's Heat: great story - where can i find video of her?... cfaxxx

Cheryl's Heat: Been up to eyeballs in alligators, but finally had a chance to sit down and enjoy Cheryl's Heat-Part 2 without endless interruptions, and enjoy it I did. Outstanding and hot as hell. Great cock stiffening prose. Give my thanks to Chris and his sexy wife for sharing this story through you. Especially enjoyed the pics, that's one hot assed mama! As good as the pics are, the story itself is even better. Hope to hear more about them in the future. A Cheryl & Chris meet Paula & Gordon story would be grand, but another true story would be fantastic (come to think of it, that C&C meet P&G could be a true story). It's back to making a buck for me, but thanks guys for the great read... Art Martin

Slave: Just wanted to say that the new story you posted, Slave, was very hot. I love the depiction of the setup at the PI's office, with the review of the setup. Great story... Chris

The Birthday Party: I read the birthday story for at least the 3rd time. Still like it as much as the first time... Keith

A Sexually Enslaved Wife: Too weak, I came very hard, I'm still very wet... Nancy

A Sexually Enslaved Wife: Nice story. The pictures have added values to the story. Do u share incest story? ... Regards, Robgati

Virgin: Great idea for a story - but if Paula enjoyed him as much as you said I cant believe a cheerleader or two couldn't have taken him beforehand. OK its a story so stop thinking about that Sam! I do really enjoy your work and all of the thought behind the photos/videos you add to them. They make them great stroke stories believe me! You're keeping me 'up' with them so keep up the writing! Many thanks, Sam
PS. How about more European stories? Screwing on the Orient Express, or swinging parties on hot summer days high up in the Swiss Alps, or doing lots of smart English 'Totty' at the Ritz Hotel.

Theater: I loved the story of wife in porno theater. Wish I could take my wife to one of those theaters and watch others doing her. Thanks... Tony

The Arrogant Wife: Hi. thanks for a great read. Regards... Rhys

The Hot Bitch: I am an avid fan of all your work and I am amazed at both its high quality and abundant quantity. One of my favorite stories was "The Hot Bitch" and its lead character Amanda Brooks. While "Sorority Girls" was fine, I felt it strayed too far from Amanda and her intriguing personality. It seems to me there is room for a story that would fit in-between the two. My idea was Amanda on her senior class trip with her mother and Paul's parents as chaperones. More fellow students, random people in Washington or wherever they went, teachers, parents - there seem to be a lot of possibilities. I also enjoyed "The Satyr" and thought that Kathy in that story seemed to be Amanda a few years down the line. I love what I call "heroic fucking", reading about people who excel at the sport be they men or women - and you are a champion of this genre. So not to single out just two stories, a couple of the discipline ones don't float my boat, but just about everything else is outstanding. Whatever you do, keep 'em coming... REO

General Comment: I wanted to send you an e-mail about your stories. They are AWESOME. I think I have read them all!! Some more than once. The (html) ones with the pictures, are even better. I really like the women you pick. Please, keep up good work... John

Cheryl's Heat: Cheryl absolutely loved the story. In fact, I am quite sure she climaxed repeatedly while reading it without touching herself. We are planning a vacation in April, just the two of us, to Vegas. I have already recommended the Red Rooster so we will see what happens. I just wanted to thank you again. You are an amazing writer and extremely gifted. Thanks again for the amazing time, maybe we can do another one day. If we do, I promise we can do it shorter... Chris

Don't Come Home Yet: I just read "Don't Come Home Yet" again. Just as good as the first time. One thing I noticed that you might want to correct. In the second to the last sentence, discussing Allison, it looks like a "you" is missing. However, as usual, the story is grammatically excellent and extremely enjoyable... Keith

Amy's Fantasy: Just read "Amy's Fantasy". Another AWESOME story. I love the MILF/Hot Wife stories. I also wish You a very happy New Year... John

Rumors: Great story! One of my real favorites I think! Really hot scenes and some great buildup and teasing/etc. Especially liked the drew/kati bit in the middle with the fake photo's and when kati and mary spy on darren and the other lady. Hot. The twist at the end only leaves me wanting a follow up! Thanks for sharing these great stories! ... Supereel73

General Comment: LIKE UR SITE WITH SEXY STORIES/PIC. WHERE CAN I GO TO SEE MORE? THANKS MUCH--- THE K-MAN\

The Theater: I spent two very enjoyable hours on your page before I read The Theater. I had been "edging" very nicely reading about the Mom and Daughter watching each other; then as I read The Theater I lost it as she let the second guy cum on her pussy. I love voyeur/masturbation stories like this since I had received a wonderful, slow handjob in a movie theater when I was a teenager. Thanks so much for a very hot time this morning... Erosguy100

Pandora's Box: Cheryl read Pandora's Box Friday Night, and it got her very much in the mood. So much so that she kicked up a photo session for a surprise for me. Thought I would send you a few to to see what you inspire, BTW, that still remains to be one of my favorite stories, although Santiago and the continuation of Santiago are a close second, and Cheryl's Heat of course! Loved the new one by the way, I am only half way into it, but hopefully will get a chance to finish it tonight or tomorrow night... Chris

Sensuous Encounters-Part 1: I think I'm with Gordon on the first bit with Harold and Alice. I love dogs, really do, but I have to say no to Dobermans, much less 4. :) Perhaps I'm being to literal and should work at the main idea of the bit but in this case I think I'd stick with blue balls and occasional teasing. Besides unhappy partners suck! The second part was entertaining and reminded me a bit of Reluctant which always gives me a chuckle and Hot MP which is one of the few times Gordon shocks Paula... Supereel73

Grayman's Island: I just read your story, GRAYMANS ISLAND. It was fantastic. I hope you continue this story and add a little more inticing bits. It would be nice if at the island the wives had their cunt hair permently removed to further their submission to believing they are nothing more than sluts. It would also be a thrill if the daughters of these women were also sent to the island. Then not only would the sluts subit to men, but females also. Thanks for a great story. Please write... Burtdelibo

Sexy Alice Ann and Hot Paula: I read the story for the second time and still enjoy it. I also enjoyed the Worried Husband and Jealous Wife stories. As usual, you did a great job of bringing the scenes alive in words... Keith

The Basement: While looking for info on El Paso Texas last Christmas I run into your webpage of erotic stories. Been reading them ever since, they are great! What Robert Ludlum does to spy stories you do to sexual stories. Each story has story, it is lenghty not just a quick fuck this suck that, well detailed, well writen. The pictures are a lot to the story, most of them consistent (a picture of Paula is always a picture of the same woman regardless of the story). Read somewhere these stories are based on your own life? What a life!!! Keep up the great work!... X Y

Bedroom Lessons for a Hubby and a Son: Wow, missed this one some bit ago I guess. Nice hot story, I love the teasing that the couples enjoy through out the first part, very hot. Interesting twist with the son and mother sexual tension, pretty hot for sure. It is curious that incest is a dark a taboo is but it's also one of the more common fantasy's. ahh well I'm no shrink. I still don't get why some guys have that no oral sex thing on their ladies. Its one of my favorite sexual things. I had a buddy who was that way, well after a drunken night and my now wife spending about an hour between his girlfriends legs, that relationship crashed within a few months. The main event was hot as hell and the photo's especially of/for Marcellla were super. The final wrap up was funny and kinky for sure... Supereel

An Anniversary Present: I really liked "The Anniversary Present". Well written, the words form pictures in the readers' minds that make photos unnecessary. I enjoyed the twist at the end... I prefer your stories where the husbands and wives forgive each other to the catch them cheating and divorce them stories. I like it how they use the experiences to add spice to their relationships. It is so much more upbeat than divorce. In yours, the husbands and wives (in at least 1 occasion) may cheat because of dissatisfaction but eventually change. They also work at saving/ keeping their marriages vibrant vice throwing it all away... Keith

Theater: The line "I can't get in the car because I am being fucked" hooked me and had to read the story. It is another great story. The line confirms what I told you, although one knows the story is about sex it is unexpected and makes one keep reading. Read many stories (the Basement, Chirstmas in Wichita, Fishing Expedition, Bridge Wives, Games, Vacations, etc, etc) but have quite a few to go. It is going to be fun. Take care and keep writing!..XY

Bedroom Lessons for a Hubby and a Son: I Love all of your stories, more so the ones with pictures. More please... Dan

A Sexually Enslaved Wife and An Anniversary Present: I got done reading both stories, both great. I did not expect the end on An Anniversary Present...! Reading the story makes one wish one could be in the story, meet the character, be Paula or Sheila, etc... XY

The Theater: send more paula series hot and sexy... somia_shik

Cheryl's Heat: Oh GOD! That story had my little clitty throbbing and my, almost hairless, young, but fucked, by my brother and daddy, pussy, just gushing juices. I must have come 10 or 12 times, with dinner in there someplace. When I told Joey, my brother, he came back to the puter and ate me while I read the rest of the story. Now he wants to read it and I can be sure ALL of my holes are going to get deposits while he does. So, let me sign off and let him 'get at it. take care & keep up the good writing AND photography... joeie

Stud Service: I enjoyed "Stud Service". Very well written and excellent plot. It will probably be another one that I read at least twice... Keith

General Comment: all of them and like very much... please OLD WOMEN and OLD MEN stories... ssdatsun

Sensuous Encounters: Haven't commented in awhile but I just wanted to say that I've enjoyed all the stories you've posted since I last emailed. Sensuous Encounters once again reminds me why the stories about Paula are my absolute favorite. She is just so damn HOT! Keep up the great work... Scott

General Comment: Hey, your stories are amazing, very hot. How true are they?... k'

General Comment: I have been a consistent reader of your stories for a long time and truly appreciate the effort you have put into them. They are truly magnificent. Me and my wife both share the fantasy of her being a hotwife even though we have not acted out our fantasies till now. But we do plan to make it real one day. While appreciating your work again we would feel privileged if you can write a story about my hotwife "Asia". You can use any our pictures that is available on the links below or else I can provide you with the originals... Max [Sounds erotic. Let's see what we can do... RLM]

General Comment: I enjoy your stories, all so far, the pictures that go with the stories make them special. Do you know of any other authors who use a similar style? ... Serenitygj

Wives Night Out: I think that your story will do as well as many of yours other stories, in which the husband tolerates or accepts his wive having sex with other men. I liked this story because Ellen makes sure Steve is okay with it before having sex with other men. The scenes are also very erotic. There is something different and good about this story. Maybe it's Ellen's payback to Steve for letting her play... Keith

Grayman's Island: i read most of your stories and i love most of them, especially Grayman Island, i wonder would you planning on a new story about it, i am looking forward to it, big fan... Chris.

General Comment: I love all your stories. Keep them comming. I love the public scenes, they get me so hard ... Paul

The Theater: Loved your stories about the theater. Do you have others?... Tony

Asia's Fantasy: Asia loved the story. She came thrice reading it and fingering herself... Max

Game Nights: Great story! Love the concept, wanton wives trying to get laid with the husband's complicity. Some of the descriptions of wives getting off without being touched are a little over the top, but mostly really well written, and very enjoyable... tmwilki

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Asia's Fantasy: OMG!! You out did yourself. I love the way you tell this story. I have read most of your stories, and re-read many. I think you had one with a wife in the basement, the husband was off to the side watching. Thats how I replay mine happening. One other thing the pictures you use are the BEST!! I LOVE thigh highs, garter belts high heels.... John

Asia's Fantasy: Another outstanding story. Excellent one-on-one and group sex description. You convey the excitement very well. (I think so- have never done it.)... Keith

Asia's Fantasy: I've read all your stories to date from asstr-mirror.org. I enjoy the HTML format with pic.s. There have been some common elements to most of the stories. They haven't gotten old because they are some personal favorites (hot-wives, gang-bangs, interracial, bareback, etc.). Others, while enjoyable in their own right, nonetheless beg for more variety - most of the women were depicted as having much the same body-type (tall, huge tits, similar legs, etc.). Most of the characters seem to be from the same community. But, so far, some of the plot elements and twists have remained fresh. This is my favorite series and I'll keep coming back for more as long as they continue. The only real problem is that they keep me up too late in the evening as I can't afford the sleep-debt... Manny

Cheryl's Hotwife Vacation: Great sexy story makes me want to jump right in and fuck her too in various positions. we are swingers presently living in Rio Rancho NM but will be moving to Asheville area NC as soon as present home is sold and closing is successful... J

Cheryl's Hotwife Vacation: I liked the story about Chris and Cheryl in Las Vegas, I was wondering, though. The pictures showing Cheryl's hands indicate that she wasn't wearing her wedding rings. Did she take them off when she was with Andy? In my opinion, if Cheryl keeps going back to see Andy, it would be only fair if Chris saw somebody. However, he'd probably just want to wait and stay hard for his wife... Keith

Cheryl's Hotwife Vacation: I did not care for this story too much. I don't know why. Other adventures of Cheryl's I liked... Jbuster

Cheryl's Hotwife Vacation: Just had a most enjoyable read with Cheryl�s Hotwife Vacation. She�s a hot cunt, that�s for sure and the story was hot too. I take it that there will future stories of Cheryl�s adventures. As I look over my reading list, I see that I have several of your stories that I haven�t gotten to. Need to fix that. Best regards, ... A. M.

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Arlene's Anger and Three Wishes: I liked "Arlene's Anger". She was not very nice was she? As a follow-up, what would happen if the husband found out about the whole thing?? I know she did what he wanted on the vacation. Could you tell me? Also, I REALLY liked, "Wishes"!! I want one of those lamps!! ... J.B.

Adventures of an Erotic Egyptian Family: I have read your story "Jamila". It is very erotic story. I am from Pakistan and the names were not unfamiliar and reading about this family did wonders to me. You can win a prize over such an erotic job. I am married and the story provide number of erotic fantasies for my dirty mind. All thanks to you. I am reading your other stories and all of them are hot. I wish I could write like these. I wish to share my thoughts with you, if you dont mind. Thank you for your time... An Erotic Reader

Story not Specified: I loved your story on asstr. I love the idea of my wife getting so hot and fucking people she's never met. Great load of cum. Thanks... Bob

Theater: Great story. Could imagine my wife getting worked up like that. I'll read some more of your stories later. This one will be hard to top. I love the way she weakens and then goes all out. You have become a treasure with this many great stories. Do you have any with young teens? Keep up the great work... B.A.

General Comment: Best regards from Belgrade, Serbia, your stories are absolutely hotest on the web... anonymous.

Control: That has to be one of your best. Stacy is amazing! It would be cool to have "Control" over a hot sexy woman like that. Nice description of the clothing, and lingerie. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to your next hot wife/sexy milf story!!

Game Nights: Really great story. I didn't particularly care for the very last part where the husbands were putting the wives into bondage and especially didn't like gagging them, but otherwise this group of stories was really great. I lok forward to Game Nights 2... Wilki

The Sexual Awakening of the Laurents: OMG - That one was incredible!! You did not let up at all on that one. One after the other, and they were getting better. I was disappointed when it was over. How is the Empty Nest coming along?... J.B. Morrison Wives and The Student Boarder: I just had to tell you, I love the stories that you have posted on asstr-mirror.org under Mischa8. They are very well written and I find myself not being able to stop reading them. I just finished reading breed and boarder and they are great. Keep up the great work... Dave

Sensuous Encounters-4: Revenge Fucking: Wow! What can I say that I haven't told you before....can never get enough stories about Paula! She is just so hot and sexy it's unbelievable! Keep up the great work!... Scott

Fishing Expeditions: Another great story. Love ur writing style. These wanton women stories are beyond fantastic!!! I really liked the anal, would like more description and detail. I plan to read all your stories; will feedback on the ones I like... Ted

Summer in Albuquerque: I read "Summer in Albuquerque", and it is/was a sensational story! After saying that I didn't like bondage elements, I was so turned on by her lover, Ben, leaving her tied up and sending her potential lover, Greg over to find her tied up and helpless, and having obviously recently been fucked. I was stone hard reading that part, and when Greg removed the butt plug and plugged her, I almost lost it. And her hysband, Gordon, not only watching her getting fucked while tied up, but also filming it, was an added thrill that I could relate to, not that I have filmed my wife but the concept is so exciting. I didn't much care for the spanking, and didn't like Greg using his belt, but could have enjoyed a more descriptive handling of him ploughing her ass, and would have really liked reading about DP with Greg and Julio. Overall this is a fantastic story. Thanks for writing and posting it... Ted

Flight to Santiago: I am neglecting what I should be doing to read your stories, but I wanted to read "Flight to Santiago" on your reccommendation. As I expected it was fantastic and 'exciting'. I loved the scene where Gordon and Paula were in a resturant and she was giving the voyeurs a treat. Women who obviously and intentionally show off are an immense 'turn-on' and these descriptions are great. I also particularly enjoyed where she is being repeatedly taken, on the nude beach and her holes are getting filled and overfilled. That was great. Also the sidebar about her not being allowed to use birth control was great... T & R

Secret Slut: Saw your post today of Secret Slut and just couldn't resist. As always, you spin a hot, sexy tale. Glad I took time to read it as I am way behind on my reading these days. You didn't disappoint. Best regards... Art

Theater: That story was extremely hot. Was it true?... Greger1013 [Yes... RLM]

A Wife's Diary, Erotic Adventures of an Egyptian Family: im a consistent reader and like all of ur stories. Especially "a wife's diary" and "erotic adventures of an egyptian family". In both these stories the plot matches d best. further, id like 2 upload pics frm ur site to my website at peperonity and make it public for erotic purposes as I can find the best pics are used by u and only you. Once again gud work... Sam.

A Walk on the Wild Side: I loved your new story! Quick- where is the fire extinguisher? In addition, the description of the rut was really good!... Keith

A Walk on the Wild Side: Excellent, as usual... ZG, A Fan

Hot Hole Secretary: Very, very nice story. I LOVED the description of the outfits. The low cut dress, the mini skirts with the thong,just my thigh-high stocking and heels below the waist. Keep up the good work! ... jbuster

Hot Hole Secretary: I've enjoyed your stories, and the bi-weekly schedule you've tried to keep in posting them. Adding the pictures is a nice touch, and would be great to see more. Are you planing sequels to Hot Hole Sec? or Asia? Both of those would have interesting next parts of the stores. Do you know if you plan a 3rd or 4th chapter for the Graymans island. Finishing her training, the auction, etc. And then returning home and the new home life? How is the sequel to Game Night coming along? You set a nice basis for additional stories. Your bondage writing is nice. Not to mean or rough, but fun. I understand the desire to build new story lines, characters, etc, but you've also spent a lot of time with Gordon and Cheryl on various stories so it would be nice to see follow ups on others. Thanks... Anonymous

Teacher Does her Assignments: Hi Gordon: Just read The Teacher Does Her Assignments and it is by far one of the best stories I have read at ASSTR. Great hot sex and all of it very believable; as long as you know that women can get as hot and horny and desperate as men always seem to be. The pictures and gif's fit the story well and were hot all by themselves. Loved that Nancy got to taste some very nasty and dirty sex; just the kind that I love. For instance having her daughter play with her and help her cum and take her to a filthy adult theatre. Great work and hope to read more of your writing. Also thanks to Nancy for her contribution to this work... awesome... Jim Cumslut

A Sexy Wife and her too Fast Husband: Hi. Story 104 was truly great. I liked it a lot. It was great to see the husband larger and also taking other women... Keith

General Comment: There is no doubt about it, your stories are amazing. They're erotic, well written, and coherent. The only thing I found quite disconcerting was the change in grammatical person throughout some of your stories. While I favour third person stories because it affords me a view of what everyone is experiencing, I have read and enjoyed stories written in the first person, although I find the scope more limited. And while I certainly enjoyed all your stories, the ones written in the third person were, for me, far and away the best. I have bookmarked your Website, and will certainly return with the hope that you have posted more tales. Thank you very much for the stories you have written thus far... Regards, Regis

The Swing Club: Hi, Just finished reading your story about the couple that went to the swing club. I've fantasied about my wife and I going to a nightclub and a black guy asking her to dance and then another guy joins them a they make love to her while she is standing up with everyone watching. A very hot story. Thanks for your contribution and I'll be reading more of your stories... Take care, Dave

General Comment: What a fantastic website. I think I'm going to be very busy for awhile. Loved the pictures of the gals in the garter belts and hose and your subject matter, too. Thanks for you reply... Take care, Dave

Challenges: Damn it, Marla! 1. Paula and Gordon (my favourites!) 2. Lots of action! 3. Excellent scenes! 4. Hotness, wetness, brazenness, and borderline legal - Oh My! Do you even realize just how many times I have... um, ahem, "exhausted myself" on that story of yours? But seriously, vintage, as usual. I love it. You have *GOT* to loan me your mind. Beautiful imagination. Even better application on paper. To paraphrase an old client of mine: "...who needs a wife when I have your stories..!" Gmail and Mischa8 directory - only sites that get I check daily... As Ever, A Fan

General Comment: Hi, I just had to drop you a line to say how much I am enjoying reading the stories in the asstr archive. The writing is hot and very enjoyable, and has filled many hours already for me, and I'm sure this will continue. I am a big fan of the swinging lifestyle portrayed in these stories, but have, other than a brief period years ago, haven't been able to participate in it. Now that I'm getting a bit older, I imagine these stories will be as close as I get to the lifestyle. Couples don't care to talk to single men anymore--there's too many of us, I suppose--bso with the addition of being a mature person, no one is interested in corresponding. In any case I am having fun reading about Paula and Gordon and their adventures. If you are doing the writing as RLN, thank you for the stories. All the best from western CSANSAda... Carl

My Wife and the Air Force Captain: As always I enjoyed the story. Your style of writing erotica is is really hot and exciting, and each time I finish a story, I'm anxious to start the next. Keep up the great writing... Carl [Thank you, Carl, and also, thank you for pointing out the typo...RLM]

[Note from RLM: The link below contains a detailed critique sent to me by one my readers about my stories in general and about nine of the stories in particular. These stories are: "House Guest", "Bridge Playing Wives", "The Reluctant Wife", "Erotic Encounters of a Hot Wife", "Wife's Secrets", "The Basement", "The Shoe Store", "The Swing Club", and "Theater". It is well thought out and discusses both the positive and negative aspects of the stories. Thank you, Ted... RLM] .../files/Authors/mischa8/critique.html


General Comment: Hi RLM, Stud Service, Metamorphisis, and Working Wife and Her Sister are just as good the second time as the first. Just so you know, in Working Wife and Her Sister, there is a missing picture where Neal first takes her... Keith [Thanks for the alert. The missing pic has been inserted... RLM]

To Build a Fire: The more of your stories I read, the more I enjoy reading them. I just finished �To Build A Fire� and just had to tell you how much I admired your skill in telling the story. I was touched by your �Jack� character,and his insight that totally transformed the life of the totally despondant woman whom he thought he�d never see again. I loved the way you developed the plot, the characters, and the story flowed extremely well throughout. You may be interested to hear that I am vision-impaired, and use a screen magnifier/reader called �Zoomtext�. It has a female natural sounding voice that I use to read your stories, and sometimes it seems that it is starting to pant ande whimper during some of the sections� LOL [I love this! Thank you, Carl... RLM] Keep up the good work�I�m rapidly going through the stories in the archive, and hope you�ll keep writing so I won�t run out of good stories to read. I�m curious�if you don�t mind telling me�Where you�re from� my guess is you�re a hot southern gal� All the best, ... Carl

The Polyandrist: The Polyandrist was an interesting story. You never cease to amaze me how you can come up with so many good plots. Many are so different from what I've seen others write. Well written and definitely erotic... Keith

The Polyandrist: This surpasses the American Dream: two husbands for the wife, a hotwife for the husband, married pussy for the benefactor, a nice retirement plan for all... Manny

Switch: The end reminds of 'Scenes from a Marriage' by Igmar Bergman starring Liv Ullman. But, much less Swedish, and definitely a lot less Bergman (5% erotic, 95% gut wrenching angst and drama - with captions)... Manny

Deric's Wager: This story was very well crafted, and it shows the trend that I have noted in your writing: your writing has improved and continues to improve as each story is read. The gradual improvement is most noticeable in the storyline as it progresses from one scene to another, making the reader want to see what is going to happen next. It isn't all about well, she fucked him in that scene, now she'll fuck another one, then another, then end the story. Ther's a real story there, with a real beginning, midddle, and end. Yessssss.... It STILL amazes me that a story can grab me up and make me feel involved with these characters, some or most of whom are fantasies from a persons fertile imagination. It doesn't always happen every time... I'm not that easy... but it has been happening regularly with your stories... Carl

Empty Nest Slut: Well you have Susan going too far... doing his law partner is beyond acceptable and she knew it. He would naturally be incensed. So she handled the money and took her half knowing what was coming and triggering the end result prior to the pre=planned return to California. The story should have taken a different twist at this point: I would have added that given his millions; given his possible underworld contacts (most lawyers have a few); he would have had her exterminated. Now that would have been a great fantasy finish! ... Anonymous. [Since the comment was anonymous, I can only reply here: I prefer my ending... RLM]

Being Caught" "Being Caught", is amazing! One of your best!! Erica and Traci are awesome,as well as Wilma. You should write a part two, to this one. You had a lot of the things I like in this story... JP

Being Caught: Saw your latest story today and found it to be hot, hot, hot! You do have the talent! Thanks for a great read!... AM

Being Caught: The latest story posted at the site. Managed to pull the strings of my heart, I must admit... A Fan

Paula Stories: This Paula but also other women are gorgeous. The combination of photos and story makes reading your stories such a joy. This combination is more fullfilling then watching an average porn flick... Gerard.

Lisa Fowler - a.k.a. Laura Fox: I love your stories. Yet, I was disappointed to read in the most recent story, Fox, that the 16-year-old Lisa tempts the math class nerd to do her homework and help her cheat on the math tests. Having Lisa act in such a way treats her as stupid, and has her behave unethically and uncaring about her education. Perhaps it's a silly point to make about a sex story, but it does make a point about someone who is as sexual as she is, enjoying the advantages of her hot body, compromising her education and abusing the educational process simply because she can, using her body, and she does. I wish you had her be the smart and sexy girl, rather than the stupid, unethical and sexy girl... B

A Trapped Wife: Hey Dude, This is awesome......wanna show me how to trap my wife.......she is such a prude, and needs to become a cock whore... Shane

The Frustrated Mother and her Daughter: You write wonderful, wonderful stories and this one was no exception. And the illustrations are beyond wonderful and the really nice thing is, they track the story perfectly, which makes for some really nice reading. It had the desired effect, :-) many times over from start to end. Thanks you much for your efforts. :-)... Indian7

General Comment: Wonderful work. Excellent dialog among the many, varied characters. Nice job. Great images too!... Julian

Other Men: "Other Men" was a terrific story. I liked it... K

Getting Tenure: You are a machine! I got Paula and Gordon again so that's good. Love the story, as usual. Warm Regards... A Fan

Getting Tenure: "Getting Tenure" was a really good story. I enjoyed it. I have to ask, though...how much of it was true? ... Keith

Getting Tenure: You've once again proven why stories about Paula are my favorite. She is absolutely HOT in every adventure, and they keep getting hotter. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read your next story. ps...wondering since Paula subs has she ever had any adventures with ex students after they graduated? Now that would be a story to tell....can imagine how those teenage guys must be drooling over her as she stands in front of the class... Scott

General Comment: Keep them coming! ... Anonymous

General Comment: Your work is very good and I only have a comment about the Picts: More of them seemed to be too good, too professional, too cold, so don't transmit the emotions involved in the stories. They are not even placed in the situations or places described in the story and they lack of some kind of "amateur or real life quality" so they can't really be related with the situations. I can, and surely will, send you my true life stories about my wife and me with authentic photos taken by me and you will tell me the difference, because in despite they are very good hot picts, they are really true life photos, no Pro-Studio's freezer photos... pepeleon

The Gift Boxes: Gift Boxes was an awesome story. You did an excellent job on that one!... Keith

The Gift Boxes: I just finished "The Gift Boxes" and enjoyed it immensely.You have a way of building characters and situations that makes a story entertaining, more so than any of the other erotic writers I've found so far on asstr-mirror.org... I try to get back to your webpage often so I can find new stories there, and I think I'm all caught up again... Carl

Getting Tenure: Wow, where do I begin? First off the pictures are a great addition- I love them and the people are so hot. The girls are sexy and the men have such huge cocks. This was a total turn on for me. I love the heels on the women, actually i love pretty feet in those sexy shoes. Their asses and bare, sexy, thighs and legs were perfect. The story is a fantasy come true in a lot of ways. I work with some pretty hot woman and think often about things just like in this story. The bending over, teasing and overall sluttiness- I will definately be reading more of your efforts... Congrats on a great story- I will be back for more- regards, T

Another Cheating Wife Story-Or Is It?: I found "Another Cheating Wife Story" impossible to stop reading without finishing it... The "Or Was It" got me to thinking that there was more to it than just cheating ... So, I sort of figured it out, but not the details of the very end. I found it to be very interesting, and entertaining, and well crafted as are all your stories. I've never been disappointed by any of your writing... CD

Another Cheating Wife Story-Or Is It?: oh it was soooo obvious after I finished it- but I didn't have a clue till the end - great story... TG

Virgin: I just reread "Virgin". Great story! Liked it a lot... K

Shoestore: I loved it. I have always had a fantasy, being a shoe salesman- a sexy woman in a short skirt, with sexy feet- wow- great story. really loved her removing her soaked panties for him... T

General Comment: Keep them coming. Thanks for Paula and Gordon, Arlene and the rest. More black DP or Multiple Penetrations please... no one writes it the way you do. Excellent. Warm Regards,... A Fan

Seduction Contest: You know, I really enjoyed "Seduction Contest". Even when glossing over some of the people said during the sex, it still was a good story that left me with a good, happy feeling. Great job!... Keith

Another Cheating Wife Story-Or Is It?" Arlene was your best yet. The usual kinky sex was blasted by the surprise ending. Thank you for a nice surprise. I have read a lot of your stories. The fucking-sucking was standard but the twist at the end was excellent. A very nice twist... Erig

Seduction Contest: Another fine story to add to your long list of fine stories! I anxiously await your next new posting on your website. Any new stories in the works? In any case, keep up the great writing. All the best... CD

Mandy's New Job: I loved the Mandy story. It had an excellent plot and was extremely well written. Have you contemplated a follow-up featuring foursome or Susan and mandy with several men, with Grant and harold present?... K

Making of a Cuckold: Read that story over and over and came every time. Would love to see my wife fuck other men ... many men. I pictured my wife taking another man's cock deep down her throat as the woman did in the streaming pics. The way her throat swelled taking that long hard cock ... wow. I have hinted to my wife about fucking other men, but she just laughs. The thought doesn't seem to disgust her though, so I'll keep hinting. Maybe some day ... I can only hope. Keep up the great work. Maybe if I can get her to read some of these stories she'll realize I'm serious... Skyrider

Polyandrist: Another great story. What more can I say. I have written before about my fantasy of whatching my wife getting fucked by other men,and this story turned me on tremendously. All through this novel I kept visualizing my wife taking those long hard cocks into her hot wet cunt. Can't even tell you how many times I came... orgasm after orgasm... Skyrider

General Comment: I first wrote to you back in Feb when I discovered your stories. I just finished the last one I had not read (Paragon of Virtue) so now I can tell you that I enjoyed reading them all. Often got a hard on while reading them, they were hot reading!! Definately the best erotic writings I have seen so far, and once again, you write erotic stories like Ludlum does spy stories. Can't move away from the screen until I read the entire story. Keep up the great work! I'll keep visiting your page to see if new stories are added or to re read the old ones... XY

Mandy's New Job: Mandy's New Job was a fun read, as are all the stories! I especially liked the ending--Harold and Grant reaped the rewards of a perfectly planned and executed project. Fun stuff! Keep up the good work... Carl

General Comment: I have read a couple of your recent stories and they are incredibly hot, I really loved Other Men, Gift Boxes, and Mandy's New Job is just off the charts hot... Chris

Grayman's Island: When are you going to complete this series. It is great and a little diferent... Anonymous

The Liberated Wife: I just read Liberated Wife for the second or third time and REALLY enjoyed it! Great work!... K

My Wife's Diary: Congrats! This was the first illustrated story that had photos that matched the text. Incredibly hot stuff... Tom Anon

The Trip: The trip down the Grand Canyon is on MULE back, donkeys are too small for many adults to ride. Mules are more surefooted than other quadripeds. Fantasy fiction, so perhaps this question does not apply, but how do the swingers with 50 plus mates in two weeks avoid sexually transmitted diseases? Most of the time condoms are not used. I assume birth control is taken card of, which is the other problem that might arise with all this sexual activity.

I really like your stories, the pictures and video clips do make them outstanding. Have you considered a future story with a BSDM background? You have done a little of this (sex slavery) in the past, but not recently. Pehaps your models don't like whips? if course, as at Snoqualmie Pass, "Chains are Required" but whips are optional... Richard

The Trip: Great Story, RLM. I absolutely loved it!... K

Another Cheating Wife Story-Or Is It?: Really neat twists in the plot. Sort of a flip side to a revenge story. Kept me hanging. And nice graphics in the html version... Frank

General Comment: I really enjoy reading your stories: right now The Club and Cheryl are my favorite two stories. I don't know if you're writing from real life experience or not, but the stories are very arousing. I generally like My First Time stories, orgy stories, and voyeur stories anyway, so I may be a bit biased, but I find your stories to be more well written than your average jerk-fic. hope you keep them coming... Random Mythos

The Trip: Another great story! Marathon sex with a happy ending---what's not to like?... CD

A Cold Wife and a Hot Daughter: I loved the story! I enjoyed it very much. You and Zubin created a story that was excellent. I guessed the ending about halfway through and was hoping that it would be what I guessed... Keith

A Cold Wife and Hot Daughter: What a cock-stiffening story! Well done my friend! Well done. I now have a tremendous backlog of your stories to catch up on. Nice problem to have and look forward to whittling that down to size. Best regards... Art Martin

Escorts: It was good. As per your usual standards. I like simultaneous mother-daughter action... ZG

Escorts and Cheryl's XXX-Xmas: I was reading your Escort and Cheryl stories. They both are very good... jbuster

Escorts: I really liked the story "Escort". I liked the one before that where the wife finally loosens up, but Escort was still very good, much better than most I've read over the years (including the magazine stories I read many years ago)... K

My Wife's Secret Lover: Another AWESOME story!! If that story is only half true, Paula is an AMAZING women!! You are one lucky husband. I can hardly wait for the next one! Can you give me a little teaser?... John

The Reluctant Wife: I have read many of your erotic stories and find that all of them have gotten me highly aroused but 'the reluctant wife' was the most believable story so far that I have read so far. The best story of the series. Please keep your stories coming. thank you... ronni

General Comment: I have enjoyed your novelettes immensely. If they are bases on real experiences, I congratulate you, very erotic Enjoy and I look forward to further experiences... Hexenmeister

Houseguest: all your stories are very exciting to me my imagination wishes they were my experiences congrats to excellent stimulation of my senses... Hexenmeister

Rented Wife: Very good. A tad melodramatic perhaps, but ultimately very satisfying. Too bad Andrea's thoughts were not expanded upon when she discovered she was trapped. But I don't want to whine. It was exquisite, as it was... Your stories are great. But THIS one was -almost- at the same level as Santiago. Fantastic! Your action descriptions are simply magnificent. But your pictures in HTML? They're add an almost surreal atmosphere to your stories -- I actually see them being re-enacted. Beautiful! As ever -- A Fan

Rented Wife: I read the last half of "Rented wife" and loved it! Really, you did a great job!... K

Rented Wife: One word :AWESOME !! One of your best stories. Not counting the ones about "Paula"... John

Grayman's Island-Part 2: as in all of your storis, this one was great also, but, are you going to continue with the adventure? i truly hope so, it seems to me there are so much more to tell in her training. thank you for the great stories... ronni

General Comment: I love your stories they are so fucking hot. I wonder if you could do me a favor and send me some of the picts in my email,and links to the gif's that are in the story. Thanks a lot keep writing... Maurice

General Comment: These are great stories and well illustrated. My only comments are too much f word, c word and too many aaa, ooo, ugh words. Otherwise excellent story lines, pace and detail. And the pics and short vids are brilliant. You obviously like well-endowed ladies. Big fat tits aren't everything (and many of them don't look natural); nice small tight tits are also just as exciting. Have fun... RockHard

A Wife's Fantasies: That has to be one of your BEST stories so far!! I think your are going to have a hard time topping that one. Whats your next one about??... JP

A Wife's Fantasies: I just read "Wife's Fantasies". As usual, excellent job. You've continued what I like about so many of your stories. The husbands and wives work together to solve their issues, arriving at solutions they both enjoy. Also, neither gets humiliated... K

Genesis of a Nympho Wife: I loved your new story.. You always create some very sweet action in your stories, but the depths you go and the excitement you create is why I keep coming back!... WW

General Comment: I love your stories. Great "arcs" and satisfying conclusions. I look forward to each new installment. As a request it would be great to see the next chapter of "Graymans Island" best regards... Sean

General Comment: I have been able to read more & more of them. They get better as I become familiar with you as personalities and lovers. I enjoy the variety and knowing that some have been "real". The pictures and Gifs could be larger with more detail. The combination of visual and verbal is terrific. Of course, the "swap or transgression" scenes become fuel for my wishful fantasies. I, we, have never indulged and I do not see how my mate ever would, thus the quiet imaginary thrills become very real for me. Again, congrats and give us more.... HM

A Wife's Fantasies: I just have read the story "Fantasy" ... where you put some french words ... Very nice but it can be improved with the right translations ... for example , you translate "Tit" by "mesange" ! :) very funny but in sexual context Tit means "Sein" (and Tits => seins) but also "Cunt" => it is very more sexual to translate it by "chatte" feel free to ask any other help in English/French translations. congratz for the stories, i'm a fan. regards... Michael [Note from RLM: Thank you, Michael. The suggested changes have now been made.]

To Please a Husband: I don't know what you have planned for next. But, You are going to have a had time topping that story! My only comment would be, She never wore thigh highs. I LOVE thigh highs, and heels!! Still, it was a great story. Whats next?? How are Chris and Cheryl doing? ... JB

To Please a Husband: To Please a Husband is the best story ever. Recommend an extension of the stories to exceed Cheryl which had four stories... abhrsw

Tenth Wedding Anniversary: "Tenth" is fantastic. I love the concept of "private hot married pussy" ... HM

Rented Wife: Alright, alright! I admit it. Your rented.txt (read it again and again and again) gets better with EACH reading. Even better than Santiago!!! (There! I said it) Don't really know what's come over me, but I check 4-5 times DAILY your website... hoping against hope that ANOTHER of your wonderful stories will have appeared. Its like a damned drug! You entire collection is on my mobile -- for times when I can't access internet or can't carry my laptop with you. I read and re-read your stories everywhere! YOU BASTARD!! GIVE ME MY LIFE BACK!!!! Heh, on a more serious note, keep on writing Marla. Maybe I should kidnap you and FORCE you to write stories day and night :) Later... A Fan

Don't Ask-Don't Tell: Finally, after what seems like *years* of waiting -- A Paula/Gordon story. And that too in 3 parts. AMAZING!! The action was quintessential Paula. Exceptional! Especially when she loses the bet and how Ramon can make her squirm. The story was fantastic, except in the beginning, where it was a little *jarring*. My brain went on the special "Paula Heuristics Mode" and I immediately realized why it was the way it was -- you *ALMOST ALWAYS* never BEGIN a story with action! It was like open the page and *bang* Paula and Gordon are at it. It normalized after about 4 paras. And then the usual Paula took over. Not that I am complaining, mind it. :) Now I'm even MORE eager to find out what happens to Gordon on his don't show don't tell, and EVEN MORE when they go for a vacation together for show and tell... Z

Don't Ask-Don't Tell: Part 1 of "Don't Ask, Don't Tell" was a great story. I really liked it. Again. I enjoyed reading that no matter who else your wife was with, she always enjoyed you more. I look forward to reading Part 2... K

Don't Ask-Don't Tell: Read AND re-read the story. And still finding nuances that excite me. Kudos to your abilities. Just hoping I don't wither away and die, waiting for your next part to come across. Already checked you site SO many times... Zubin

Disciplining Marsha: Last night I wanted something different to read *was reading about the Civil War). I read "Disciplining Marsha again. Was a great story line even when glossing over the descriptions of the sex. Have a great weekend... Keith

Cheryl's XXX-Xmas: loved it fuck i spunked everywhere that was realy ball emptying wanking sex thank you very much... allym

Teacher Does her Assignments: hey, i would like to know the email address of that HOT milf teacher...maybe I can help her...I'm sexually active...and maybe I can also get a chance to meet your wife too...and share it to some of your readers also... Alvin

Don't Ask-Don't Tell: Gordon's Vacation: Excellent action. Hot. And I just realized something AFTER reading these stories, you've got to be positively the BEST action describer I've ever read in ANY story out there on the net. I mean it. I hope the last part involves a lot of PAULA GETTNIG GANGBANGED. Especially the interracial kind. And holy hell, wouldn't it be a HOOT if Mendez turns out on their vacation -- spoiling Gordon's vacation, much to the glee of Paula's pussy!! Now THAT would be something to think about! And oh yes, a FINAL compliment -- Whenever I want to make my wife's night a memorable one, I READ a couple of your stories FIRST. Better that ANY sex manual or instructional video. And my wife is the HAPPIEST person the next day! From me, personally, THANK YOU! ... ZG [You are very welcome. Give my best regards to your wife... RLM]

Monica Comes Out and Genenis of a Nympho Wife: I read the Monica story a few days ago and the Nympho Wife Story (skimmed) tonight. Enjoyed both of them... Keith

General Comment: I very much enjoy your stories.....especially love the scenes where the wife is very intense in her descriptions of pleasure to her husband (but with another man at the time).....I am hoping I can make a suggestion about expanding a certain story or creating another one like it.....the story is "Two Precocious Daughters"......the scene towards the end of the very erotic story where both the mother and the daughter are beautifully occupied by young strong black virility.....what I had in mind was that the husband/dad would be there in the same room and both the wife and daughter would be talking (gasping) the pleasure to each other and to their husband/dad....with the intensity building up the point where both the mother/wife and daughter want to be bred in front of husband/dad.....(husband/dad weakly objecting but too excited to seriously stop anything from progressing).....of course the virile blacks are bursting with the thought of impregnating mom and daughter and perform with ultimate vigor.....do you think that might work for a good story? Thank you for your great writing ability and style... Peter

Don't Ask-Don't Tell: I have been reading your stories for a long time - you were never better than with Don't Ask - Don't Tell. I can't wait to read the second part... Nonny

Paragon of Virtue: Thank you for two days of cumming... lxndrprkr

Cheryl's Heat: VERY HOT ... Hex Meister

Virgin Daughter-Faithful Wife: Awesome story! I would love to see a follow up where the family visits the brother Erik at college so the sister can check out the college and the brother gets a crash course in the new family dynamic while the daughter and mom expose themselves to the brother's fraternity/dorm life... Anonymous

Virgin Daughter-Faithful Wife: I've enjoyed your stories for a long time. Unfortunately for me, the repetition of the themes lessens my interest in reading the new stories. Thank you for writing and publishing the hot stories. I've enjoyed them... gamesman

General Comment: Love your stories - All of them!!! I particularly like the stories where Gordon gets some action; you should write a story that has Gordon go on a business trip and bring along his friend's wife as his "assistant" or "escort" (while the friend stays at home and keeps the wife company). Another potential theme is Gordon keeping the lonely recent divorcee company... anonymous

Virgin Daughter-Faithful Wife: STOP! In the name of God man! My dick can't take the strain! Please stop! After reading momteen... I couldn't STOP getting off.... Pardon the expression, but "SUPER FUCKING AWESOME" story....!!! I'm barely having the energy to sit straight... much less WRITE an email to you.... That was... EXPLOSIVE! -- A Fan

General Comment: Hi RLM, please stop writing! My dick is sore! My wife's cunt is sore! My balls have shrivelled to the size of peanuts! My prostate gland and my balls are refusing to produce any more cum! And still I cannot quit reading! Amazing writing, probably the hottest and finest on the net. Great stuff, and I am glad I found it. All the best from Germany... Nick

Show and Tell-Part 3: Don't Ask-Don't Tell: Have enjoyed all your stories, some more than others but this one I really enjoyed. Maybe Paula would like to reflect on her libido and where it will ultimately lead her. The patient Gordon certainly also enjoys himself however it usually follows Paula exploring her sexuality and sexual enjoyment. It appears quite apparent that if she really wants to retain his affection and the use of his satisfying implement she should perhaps moderate her enthusiasm for initiating sexual exploits. Otherwise he will find greener pastures before both their sex drives moderate to the mundanity usually experienced as we grow older. Thanks for the enjoyment you give your many ardent followers. Certainly amongst the best erotic writers of our times... John, Melbourne Australia

Show and Tell: Part 3: Don't Ask-Don't Tell: It had everything. Gratuitous sex, interracial gangbangs, and a very good storyline. It also had my favourite two characters -- Gordon and Paula. Throwing Luis in the mix was the icing on the cake. Also, you hit Luis where it hurt the most. A story full of sex. A fantastic plethora of descriptions and a fantastic come-uppance. Why then, do I feel that the story lacked a soul? ... There are a couple of observations that I'd like to make.
1. The story seemed rushed. The plot was good and the action terrific, but it seemed you wrote this story to COMPLETE part 3, rather than ENJOY writing part 3 -- a big difference in my head.
2. I read your stories for the gorgeous description of the actions. This one seemed lackluster.
3. The story, if it were a human being, felt tired. It was almost as if the story did not want to go on, but here we were, whipping and kicking it into further movement.
4. Finally, the characters seemed to enjoy themselves, because the author wanted them to, not because THEY wanted to -- catch the drift? The story showed Paula's excitement and Gordon's plan, which unlike your other stories about them, did not FLOW, it hobbled.
Please do not take this as a criticism of your writing abilities -- they are BEYOND PAR -- above ANYONE else I have ever known. But take this in the spirit of ONLY Hedo 3 story... A Fan

Show and Tell-Part 3-Don't Ask-Don't Tell: You continue to maintain your excellent writing skills and storytelling ability. My favorite part of the story was how you dealt with Mr. Mendez. Good job... K

A Single Mom and Two Teenaged Daughters: Fanfuckingtastic. Best yet and I want to join in the practice sessions too... John

A Single Mom and Two Teenaged Daughters: i wanted to write and let you know how much i really enjoyed your story, "a single mom and two teenage daughters" i just finished reading it and it was amazing. i was also wondering if you had any other stories because i am having trouble finding a link to them on the asstr website. on a seperate note, i have written a 7 chapter story invovling a dad, mom and daughter, something along the lines of what you wrote but it is not published on asstr. i would love to send it to you and see what you think, if thats ok with you... ckc

A Single Mom and Two Teenaged Daughters: Good Morning, and WOW! Just finished your latest tale. The two daughters and the Mom. AWESOME!! Whats coming next?? I think that one will be tough to top!... JP

Don't Ask-Don't Tell Series: Just finished reading the Don't Ask Don't Tell series. I loved the 3 stories, particularly enjoyed the part of Luis Mendez. When he first shows up I thought oh no, him again! But the way the story turns out was just great. Good erotic sex all the way through all stories... XY

The Cuckold Husband: Just read your new story. Best one yet! Thanks. Alie says she hasn't heard from you in a while. Hope everything is OK and you are enjoying something sexy... Alex

The Cuckold Husband and A Single Mom and Two Teenaged Daughters: You bastard!! :) JUST when I thought you've lost it, you spring up the surprises. Refreshing, rejenuvated, exciting. Sisters and Cuckold. Dick hardening stories. Hot with action, hard-hitting and most importantly, lots of gangbangs and wives getting dominated... SUPERB! With Hedo3 being the only aberration, I'd daresay, that you Cuckold even surpasses everything you've written so far, except perhaps, the descriptions in tenth.txt. Marla, fuck man, you're BACK! YEAH! And champ, you have no ideas HOW many times, just how many times I have my dick ripping my pants off, reading the cuckold. The *only* story where I had to *let off* in the workplace. What if I had been caught? Hell, I'd prolly had sued you!!! ;) Hot Damn! As ever, ... A Fan

A Mother and Daughter Obtain Positions: Very close to a personal fantasy: A slutty MILF at work, with an equally slutty daughter, and an approving husband. Will there be sequels and/or spinoffs? Wish list (no particular order):- Husband joins the company to "oversee" wife's and daughter's appointments. - Fathers and daughter's resist but eventually give in to taboo. - Co. visits the strip club, - The heroines party with the other wives. - More of the chauffer's adventures. - New wives, daughters, sisters,(relatives and employees) etc. get indoctrinated into the corporate culture.... just a couple of ideas... Manny [Reply: A long list of interesting suggestions. We'll see if we can make some of them happen. Thanks. RLM]

A Cuckold Husband and A Mother and Daughter Obtain Positions: Your cuckolded husband story was one of the most positive of that genre that I can remember. To me, it is only borderline cuckolding because the husband takes part. Wife wasn't looking for an alternative to the husband, IMO. I skimmed the end of the mother daughter story and it looks interesting. Looks like Devin will get all his needs filled at home. As usual, both were very well written... Keith

A Mother and Daughter Obtain Positions and The Cuckold Husband: I just wanted to say the last couple stories have been GREAT! You probably know from other emails, I love stockings and heels, and you desribed them well. This morning I went to see if you had a new sorty, there wasn't one :( BUT, the pic for the upcoming one is AWESOME!! I can hardly wait... JP

Secret Desires: Heartiest congratulations! I see that you've got your groove back! Desires.txt -- Fantastic story. And for the first time in many months, EXCELLENT feelings also. You can't believe how many times I've been cleaning the ol' pipe, reading THIS one. SEXCELLENT!!! :) Superb! More. I want MORE!!! -- A Fan

Three Wishes: hi to the great erotic author. . i read a few stories of u non stop for the past three days. . . i loved all ur stories . . they were awesome . . but i felt with that much of writing skill u can try writing a realy long story abt a couple may be a detailed version of any of the stories here. . . may be in literotica.com ... anonymous

Secret Desires: your new story "secret desires" was great, especially the mother daughter group scene interracial...can I request a sequel where the 2 husbands can watch the action and be turned on by what is happening and ultimately approve and participate? sincerely, ... peter

Don't Ask Don't Tell: paula great wife give more storeis ... K Man

Virgin Daughter-Faithful Wife: Virgin Daughter-Faithful Wife comments = I really enjoyed the story (as well as your other stories) and I hope you keep up the good work, however, your website, http://mischa8.com/ appears to be down since the graphic images don't appear in the pages and the website doesn't respond. Thanks,.. Ted [I've sent you an email, Ted. I think the problem lies with the URL you're using. Let me know. Thanks, RLM]

A Temporary Whore: My God, MY GOD! A Paula.Gordon story out of the blue! Simply superb. Marla, I think multi part stories be damned, you are the AWESOMEST writer I ever know! I know awesomest does not exist, but I guess it should -- reading your stories. It feels great Marla. just Great! you, paula, gordon, me and the super awesome action! Took my breath away. If only Paula existed for me in real life.... sigh! (Hell, I'd probably wet my pants just looking at her, wot?) :) Marla, an advise I told you long ago... repeating myself: Lose the day job and just writer. I CANNOT WAIT SO LONG MARLA! I want MORE! Thanks for listening me out... A Fan

Submissive Turkish Wife: Dear RLM, I was reading "submissive turkish wife" but suddenly in these few day i cant because asstr-mirror.org is down, can you tell me is there any alternative site you will upload your stories. Great stories by the way, i often read them for plessures... Cris [I post only on asstr-mirror.org., RLM]

The Sexual Transformation of Two Wives: Part 1: Just finished "The Sexual Transformation ....". Why is it that I never seem to meet these luscious licentious lovely women? Maybe it's because I don't go to those resorts and I have fulfilled my three score years and ten. Bugger, the trouble with growing older is that by the time you find out what's available you're not enticing and they wont try old reliable. Might be slow but it still works for me. Looking forward to the next instalment mate, if it's half as exciting as this one you'll have surpassed all your other stories...Cheers to you ... John

The Sexual Transformation of Two Wives: Part 2: I don't know whether my blood pressure can remain in check for the next instalment of this extraordinary story. These two ladies really have the male population worked out. All we can think with when we see a bit of tit and pussy is our small blood engorged brain. How you can write these stories and stay seated long enough to type them is beyond me. Your wife would have to be the most sensational lady and so accommodating to your needs because you would be busting at the seams 24/7. Congratulations on another fine story. Cheers... JG

A Temporary Whore: While it's not something I can realistically see my wife and I involved in, it must have felt good that your wife (whom you knew would never leave or mock you) impressed other guys enough to be offered money. "Sexual Transformation Part 1" was also a good story. I scanned Part 2 and will read it. You still write excellent stories... Keith

The Sexual Transformation of Two Wives-Part 3: New Horizons: I like your stories a lot; well written & with a plot. One common feature has the women sneaking past the hubby's knowledge, beyond the agreement, implicit or otherwise, even they eventually agree to He let's her get more than he does, & she sill goes further, secretly hooking up or the like, abusing his trust. A good plot twist would have him find out she's cheating despite the latitude he gives her, & she has to pay him back. Maybe she's not allowed any strange for a month, & she has to set him up with a string of her girlfriends to pay him back and regain his trust... Anonymous

Empty Nest Slut: Have read several ==and enjoyed them all ==the last is where the lawyers wife got jealous of your wifes bigger tits and told you the chemstry wasnt right == until her husband insisted that was nonsense--BTW-- have not yet found the link to your web site-- would like to have it -- am in louisville == play on the side from time to time-- anywhere nearby??--go to a couple of swing clubs in southern ohio--cheers--rob

The Daughter-in-Law: I have just read the above and want to thank you for a great story. I will try read more of your writings... Best... Flegelo

The Daughter-in-Law: I loved the story. It was very descriptive of the long relationship w/ his wife. Why, at the end did you not spend as much time explaining the change of that relationship? It would have been just as interesting to understand the change from a "controlling the sex" female to an "anywhere, any time" wife & lover... BigJim8 [I should have, but didn't think of it. Wish I had... RLM]

The Daughter-in-Law: Hey mate you continually better yourself. This story is another example but I must agree somwewhat with the bloke who suggested you explore the why of the transformation. Those two shielas would raise an erection from a dead man and that worries me. Cheers and all the best to you and yours... JG

The Daughter-in-Law: I believe I've read all of your stories, many of them more than once. The Daughter-in-Law is the best written of all of them, because of the complexity of the story, and the depth of your characters. I enjoyed it immensely, except for the all too rapid change of character of Janice. Going from a sexually repressed or inhibited woman for all of her 45 years to a sexually voracious woman happened in the blink-of-an-eye. The one notable exception to my 'depth of the characters' statement is perhaps the central character of the story, Janice. We get some insight into why she developed sexually as she did, but I wish there was more about it in the story.

Erica's personality is fascinating in that it contradicts so much about the probably myth of women, if not about people in general. She loved her husband, Carl, and was, in your description of her, genuinely concerned about his impotence, while conducting a long-term affair with her father-in-law. Your rendering of her gave her the ability to love and lust after two men�father and son�seemingly equally and without difficulty. Wondering as I do about the workings of love and sexuality within human beings, and being aware that the cultural construct in America is that one person loves and is sexual with one person at a time, I know the reality is different. It's, I'm sure, high-falutin to write about such stuff about what is essentially a story built to sexually arouse and titillate. Yet, you did a good job of presenting Erica and making her seem real enough for me. Thank you for your best story. Sincerely,... Bruce

The Daughter-in-Law: My My!! What a perverted sense of hedonism. Has there ever been a writer like you, who descends unapologetically into the quicksand of debauchery and lust in so headstrong a manner as you? I don�t think so. Admittedly, you have now been my favourite authors for some time now. And just when I think you cannot possibly become any better, that you will be unable to outdo your last THIS time, you prove me wrong again. And what a proof! Straight in the gut. Or rather, the penis, I should say. A tip of the hat for your continued passion in writing. You seem to nowadays ENJOY writing these stories, and no doubts will continue to. But the biggest impact is on your skills. You already had awesome skills in describing the action, but somehow, they have just gotten awesomer (pardon the prose). Like always, every new story you write seems to be better than the previous one. Really fantastic. And I feel you have outdone yourself with the latest one. I think I might have to ask you to leave you job again and write stories 24 hours a day --- there is NO other way you are going to satisfy my thirst for more. Superb... Regards, ... A Fan

The Daughter-in-Law: I enjoyed your latest story, the Daughter-In-Law. What was best was the story line. It was very well done. I like the happy endings. As I've written too often, if I want bad news, I'll read news reports. Even though I don't do sex outside of my marriage, I still enjoyed the story... K

The Daughter-in-Law: Your stories are generally good - but I'm perplexed by the switch in DIL from third-person to first-person and back...??? ... Anonymous

The Sexual Transformation of Two Wives: I also enjoyed your recent trilogy of stories. My favorite was part 2,which seemed to me to have a more intriguing story line. Part 3 was the second best, IMO, but part 1 was good, too... K

General Comment: I've read your stories over the years with great interest, and always get very hot and bothered (in the best possible ways...) when a new one appears... Jo

General Comment: nice and sexy your stories... Anonymous

The Daughter-in-Law: Daughter-in-law was much more erotic than the Perfect Wife was. They are the last two stories that I read. Maybe it is true that eroticism is mostly in the mind!... Frank

A Big Brother and His Hot Sister: Enjoyed the story brother and his hot sis Can you tell me the name of the actress and scene above the following "My mouth twisted into a hot grimace as Mark's cock jack hammered in and out of my arse."... Z

A Big Brother and His Hot Sister: I can cope very well with a story without a plot. I can also cope up with a story that has no emotions, but has in the it the best action, I repeat, the best action ANYWHERE on this planet. Outright. Hands down, there is no one even CLOSE (for MILES and MILES!) to your level of describing the scenes and scenery. But this one? It left me with a feeling of� ennui? Halfway through, I began drifting� not AT ALL what happens, when I read a Marla story. I cannot really pinpoint where you drifted off� but for the first time, I felt a Marla story lacking coherence. YES. Even Part 3 of Paula/Gordon/Mendez had a coherence� lacking a soul, maybe, but still coherent. This one --- don't break our friendship for this comment --- looked like you were all over the place! Generally, your laser focus on the narrative thread of the story is what makes is awesome� this time it seemed you were carpet bombing. "Heck, at least ONE bomb gotta hit." Wrong attitude....

If possible, read my email and discard it, should you think it immaterial. Either way, my respect for your formidable writing skills remain. Intact. As it is. And yes, I STILL carry and continue to add ALL your stories (read entire collection) on my mobile. Remember, I cannot sleep at night without a bath, an air-conditioner AND a Marla story on my mobile. What can I say? I hooked! Thanks for allowing me to rant. As Ever... A Fan

The Dating Game: The 'dating game' was one of your best stories to date, nice and believable... John

The Dating Game: I liked the story line of "The Dating Game" much better that the story about the brother and sister having sex with each other while their mother tried to earn a living by being a sex toy for her ex-husband's bosses. In both stories, your writing was excellent, as usual... Keith

Duplicity: Just fiinished 'Duplicity' and found this to be one of your most sensual and enthralling stories to date. Somehow you have the ability to write in a comfortable and relaxed style that breathes life and draws the reader into the situation. I think you are like a good port (the grog) and definitely improve with age... John

A Wife Helps Out: I have just finished reading this enthralling story and I thoroughly enjoyed every bit. The story line is totally believable and told with your usual flair for the inventive. I think I could fall for Loni as well... JG

A Wife Helps Out: Yeah, it's a fantasy, all right. Does any Olive Garden have a maitr'de? I'd bet a part-time college student at best, probably a woman... Walter

A Wife Helps Out: Almost the best one yet - I like it a lot. I've read every thing you've written and appreciate them all... Anonymous

General: i read the one with the cheryl and the mom,the nerd dad and son, and a couple more. They were good stories. really detailed and very erotic. sexually stimulating and out there. good work. hope to hear more... Anonymous

The Incapacitated Husband: Loved the tale and she was absolutely gorgeous. Thank god for the wonderous life us old fellas lead and even better the wonderful ladies we have the joy to enjoy... JG

Theater: Jusr read your story - THEATER in the group. Loved it... Chris

A Wife Helps Out: A couple of weeks ago I read parts of "Wife Helps Out". Another great story line. The couple working together without agreeing to do or talking about it so was a great exercise in trust. If I read the story right, the husband suspected what his wife was doing but was still angered by it. Maybe you were saying that he didn't really start suspecting what his wife was doing until after the divorce. The story does give the reader the impression that the wife knew what she was doing and knew what her husband's reaction would be, before he actually took action. It was a great way to teach some abusive and arrogant bosses a lesson... Keith

The Incapacitated Husband: I read "Incapacitated Husband" with interest. As usual, you did a great job of laying the story out and keeping it moving. Admittedly, the twist at the end, where it was revealed that it was all a conspiracy between the husband and those who became his wife's sexual partners, surprised me. As a fictional story, it was a great twist... Keith

General Comment: Hi, I'm big fan of your stories. The best part of your stories is that you put lot of conversation. And some of your light domination-sub stories are outstanding. Wife getting dominated by a stranger is real turn on. Look to read more of your work. Thanks for writing... Kruti

The Wife Helps Out: Hi, Just finished reading this short story. Great idea, great sex. Best wishes. Yours aye... PoppaClyde

The Wife Helps Out: Hi RLM, I re-read your story "Wife Helps Out" and enjoyed the plot more than the first time. You did a great job. Great plot... Keith

The Year-long Visitor: G'day Mate. Another ripper. Poor bloody Gordon, while Paula gets more than her fair share of pulsating pricks, he gets nothing more than a severe case of blue ball, like our young visitor. Perhaps in a forthcoming instalment on the fortunes of Paula and Gordon he gets more than satiated and she gets only a little, just to see how she likes it when the shoe is on the other foot or alternatively she gets a paucity of prick and he gets a swamp full of anxious pussies... John

The Atonement of Two Wives: I've gone through a few of your stories and must say that they are without a doubt the best I've ever read. WHEN .....are you going to add to the collection ? ... g1814

The Student Boarder: Excellent Story, great writing, magnificent photography. I'd love to read more. Have you ever written in the Asian genre? Cheers, ... Nighthawk

A Submissive Turkish Wife: Hi, I love it. Its amazing. Would you write more about this lovely turkish couple? I really want to read more about Ozlem's cheating story. Thank you for writing such as hot story.,, Antiokhos

A Submissive Turkish Wife: Wow! I wish i had slave like Ozlem. Should i invite her to my place.LoL I wish i can read more about submissive turkish wife. I am your big fan. i am reading some of your stories and enjoy while reading your hot story. I really like your stories. Thank you for your reply... Deniz

Quid Pro Quo: Hi. Enjoyed the latest story. Thanks ... Zesh

Quid Pro Quo: [Comment from RLM: This is an excerpt from a very detailed reponse from ZG. I have appended the first three paragraphs. I should say that ZG takes issue with the violence in the story and has other suggestions as to how the story could have been improved. Needless to say, I very much enjoyed reading his comments... RLM]

This story is different. Not different than most, actually different THAN ALL THE REST. THIS ONE is the BEST! I didn�t like it, I LOVED it!. It took me just one reading to understand what it was. This time around, the wife was sympathetic towards her husband and really loved him so (emphasis being on REALLY). Not the slightly unbelievable, *mostly* superfluous kind of love that wives have displayed for their husbands in the other stories. This one displays the kind where she�s ready to stop her romps because she is in love. That she cannot stop, due to external circumstances, is another story.

I loved this story. Hot and heavy action (no one, I mean, NO FUCKING ONE can write gangbangs like you do). And don�t forget the interracial too. But what I loved was the action you described, KNOWING SHE WAS RELUCTANT, reluctant not because she would be discovered, reluctant because she really loved her husband and did not want to hurt him. For the first time (at least that I know of, amongst all your stories) the wife wants out (really wants out, not just for some obscure reason I cannot connect with), but cannot. Even better, she wants out because she loves her husband, not because of any other motives.

Knowing that she wanted out, but could not, gave a heightened sense of surrealism to your story. It moved it past good, into the realm of great. I loved the cuddling scenes and intimacy between husband and wife. THIS time around (yes, you�ve got these in other stories too --- but they somehow seemed like a fake orgasm) the love read real. THOSE were the best parts I liked. Even better than the gangbang scenes. And that�s saying really much Marla. Hats off to you! ... ZG

Frustrated Mother and her Daughter: Extremely well written, had me hard constantly. Photos were not showing at all but the visualization was good enough. Is ther any chance another chapter or two will ever be forthcumming? lol Those women were hot for sure, wish the photos were able to be viewed. ... Les/m/57 [Les: Please see my note about the photo problem at the start of my web page... RLM]

The Mistake: Well you certainly had Kristen rub the bottle and let Dale the genie out of captivity, fortunately she also kept her appetite satiated at the same time as he indulged himself in their mutual pleasures. I think this was up there amonst your better yarns. The excitement and sex were excellent, no one was getting hurt or even looked like it, nor was the sex too outrageous. Everything flowed and fell seamlessly into place AND you left room for a sequel. Congrats and thank, you kept this old bloke well stimulated for a long time. Best Regards to you both. Cheers... John

Don't Come Home Yet: Great story.... i have so missed pictures and live action with a damn good story... i dont know how to do those things....or where to get the photos much less videos...but there once was a site that had those but the closest i could find was E.S. .com....eroctic stories.com... best story i read in a long time..~! Alan007~!

The Teacher Does her Assignments: Fuckin hot ....damn....wished i knew a woman like that..i really do.... i always hoped that i would find a bi woman to marry... Alan007

Darkness: Best story you've written in a long time (and I've read all of them). Good plot� the mysterious protagonist and anti-hero; the supposedly frigid woman who goes to devious and evil lengths to help her man; the "wife" who turns on her husband; the protagonists solutions to his problems. Are there any good guys in this story? One thing that made your latest story a captivating read. Looks like you read another of my favorite authors�perhaps?�for an idea or two. (I won't say who.) Thanks for a story that kept me up past my bedtime... Bruce

Darkness: Wowsa, it was beyond great. Considering the sheer number of humiliation stories about cuckolding out there, you my dear man (or woman, sorry I am not clear about your gender) satisfy my craving for a cuckoldry story where the husband is either for sharing or NOT a wimp. I have loved most of your previous stories and this one just took the cake. How he exacts revenge on his bitch wife is so cool, I do hope she realises exactly what he did before long (especially about the utter annihilation of her bull lovers). Happy endings are the best of course and two find two assassins who love each other (extrapolated it although love is not explicitly mentioned) was the cherry on top. Keep up the great work... Your stories keep me coming back to ASSTR ... yasnoul

Darkness: In the words of Simon and Garfunkel, 'darkness my old friend'. A ripper story mate. Really enjoyed the story and Carlotta, nothing like a little bit of Latin to stir the loins. I thought you lifted the fantasy level just enough to still retain possibility. Cheers to you both... John

A Cold Wife and her Hot Daughter: mmm, so fucking sexy, makes me cum evertime i read your stories, love the exhibtionists in them, love the wife fucking. your stories are the best on asstr. Ive cum more times to yours than anyone elses. Love the dirty sexy exhibitionists in your stories... PH

Darkness, The Mistake, The Reluctant Husband, The Incapacitated Husband: Hi RLM, I read your last 3 stories prior to the latest one and really enjoyed the story lines. As usual, great job! I scanned through the 4th one and is is, shall I say, very interesting. He really does get even with Melinda and the bulls. Your story is the "get even" counterpart to all of those stories where it seems like the wives and bulls conspire to demean, and, in a way, enslave the husbands. I know, such feelings aren't Christian, but it's hard to be sympathetic to such people.... that type of wife or bulls. I have to wonder, sometimes, about what is going on in the minds of people who write such stories. It' silk writing about the glories of slavery or abuse. I know- I went on a roll again. I've said enough. Great story... Keith

Darkness: This has GOT to be the WORST trite I've EVER read from you Marla. No offense on your cuckolding and sex descriptions....FANTASTIC... but the story... leave these to Agatha Christies and Alfred Hitchcocks... UNLESS, you get a stroke of genius such as RENT.TXT. Difficult to believe that a world class assassin takes dildos up his a$$.... come ON Marla, at least ASK ME FOR THE PLOT if you want to write macabre and dark stories.... they're up MY alley... :) Regards --- A Fan

A Wife's Diary: Very well written. Good Jo story. I love the illustrations. You must have spent weeks on this story. You are an excellent writer... Puter Tutor

Permission-Part 1: What the fuck happened to Carl? Did he just fucking drop of the face of the planet or what? Talk about a let down...dbb [Carl will return in Part 2... RLM]

Permission-Part 1: Just want you to know how frigging hot I get from stories with pictures and stuff. I used to watched those porn videos, but more often than not I rely more and more on stories like 'Permission' to get me off quick and easy. So friggin' HOT! Keep up the good work and THANKS!... Scott

General Comment: Only yesterday, I finished reading your entire archive. This time in HTML. The one with the gifs and jpegs. If I think I was getting all hot when I read your stories, these HTML made it positively scalding !!! I forgot my story and decided to run through your archive again. In HTML. With 2 days all to myself (family on outing) and lots of lube, I was ready. And boy, did I get what I wanted. In Spades!

The girl you 'generally' take to represent Paula has got a wonky face, but by god I LOVE it when she gets speared by black meat. I love the gifs. Hell, I love everything... ZG

Assistant to the CEO: Fucking hot... but you already knew that..! ... Alan007

A Wife's Deception: damn all you stories are fuckin hot....i dont know more to say...maybe more pictures...and more moving pic's Wow... Smokin~!!!! Alan007~!

Permission - Part 1 and Part 2: You outdid yourself with this saga. Hot all the way, with excellent pics to illustrate. Sympathy to cuckolded Roy, who should let his secretary, Diane, have her way with him... Frank

Permission - Part 2: You've done it again. You have reset the bar with this scintillating yarn... JG

General Comment: I am reading the latest story you wrote. I have enjoyed your work a great deal. (at this point, this reader suggested an idea for a new story that is excellent... RLM) No matter what you put in writing, I will be reading it. Thank you for sharing your work. Regards ... Mark

The Year Long Visitor: Really loved it. A fabulous story. I hope you will write another about Renata's year at Paula and Gordon's place ;)... K Man

General Comment: Very nice stories... Anonymous

Domination: I'm gonna sue you. SUE YOU, YOU HEAR ME???!!!!!!!! You are NOT AUTHORIZED to write such higly erotic stories, that make me forget about everything else... Seriously, however, one of your better ones. Even after the fact that ALL of your stories are excellent... ZG

Cuckold: Very exciting, a real cock hardener. I have a true story I will share with you IF I can mail it in regular mail rather than on the internet. Truth is greater than fiction... Anonymous

A Working Wife and her Sister: Excellent plot and suspense. Many of us husbands have fantasies about making it with a sister-in-law, and this story pursues that theme through Angela's willingness and Lorraine's tolerance of making their marriage a triad. (We all should be so lucky!). As usual, well written; the outcome is not telegraphed early on. Neal's sleuthing contributes to the suspense. I don't know how you do it, but encourage you to keep up the good work... Frank

Secret Liaisons: Must say that the story was AWESOME! If you're into pure cuckolding, that is. I loved the sex scenes (you'll never guess how many times I got off). But the over all tone of the story put me off. Call it my misplaced sense of fair play, but I think pleasure has to work both ways. And I didn't like that the wife cuckolded the husband (without the husband getting his fair pound of meat) All your other stories are cuckolding. But one which is based on mutual consent and respect. And one where ultimately, the husband IS the most important person to the wife. This one was different. It was ... disconcerting. And in many ways, unsatisfying (not the sex, the story). It just left me wanting for more. And I don't mean that in a good sense. This story is RAW cuckolding. No mutual pleasure, no respect and no love (certainly). Not up my alley, sorry. Though, I must re-admit. No FUCKING person writes scenes like you do. Incredibly awesome! Wonderful! My only regret? --- No blacks and no black gangbangs. Otherwise, dick jerking! :) -- A Fan

Secret Liaisons: Just read your story, Secret Liaisons. Really excellent. We have read a number of the other "Stories by RLM" and there are lots of very good ones. This one was particularly well written and very erotic. Thanks very much for all of the hard work. It takes an enormous amount of time and effort to write a good story. Adding the extra depth, detail and sexual tension is what differentiates your work from a lot of the two dimensional, formula writing that you see so often. We are a married swinger (MMF) couple that live a slutwife lifestyle, so we really appreciate a good story on these lines. Thanks again... J&S

Secret Liaisons: Hi RLM, You did a great job writing this story. It featured your usual fine job with grammar and spelling. As you already know, I'm no fan of cuckolding and sneaking around, but obviously Nikolas enjoys his life. Was the part about his wife not letting him impregnate her true? IMO, that's cold. But, it's their life and they seem to enjoy it... K

Black Boss: Huzzah!!! Now let's see how many times it makes me go ding-dong!!! :)... A Fan

Black Boss: An absolute bloody ripper. All hail the conquerer... John

Black Boss: Inventive, intriguing - with the twist at the end. Clever, depending on the EEOC to not pursue sex harassment charges against a black-owned company. Changing Carl to Carly was unexpected. The pics of pregnant women with upgraded physiques were icing on the cake. In the html version, your models have to be in the top one percent of the population for looks and endowments. Looking forward to your next saga... Frank

Black Boss: I haven't finished your latest story, but it looks very good! I did read the end, and like the way they overcame the egomaniacs (his bosses). I've been reading a few others lately and for some reason, your's seem to have more content. I figured out why I read your stories. It isn't much about lust, but I just like to read something different once in a while. It's a change of pace thing... K

General Comment: Wanted to take a min and thank you for the great stories of yours. WOW it has been ah while since I have read one.IE Santiago. Just getting back to your stories what gems. I like the plot of the wife/ couple going from prim and proper to very wild about sex. Resembles what i would like to see happen t o my wife and I. Do you have any stories that you may recommend along those lines? All the best... Meij..

The Swing Club: Nice story but WOW Gail really owes Eric so having in a Swinger Club for 6 hours without ever getting into a woman. Personally that would be an interesting story in itself... Prettz007

Empty Next Slut: [Note from RLM: Prettz007 has sent me detailed comments and analysis of "Empty Nest Slut" that I found very interesting. His/her comments are too long to post here, but interested readers may see them by using the following link:

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Black Boss: I must say that I have never, ever, read a bad story from you. Oh sure, sometimes, the feelings were not there in the story at all (Take Gordon and Paula, part 3, for example), but yet, the action you have written was always the best. And I have NEVER failed to get off from any of your stories. I can confidently say: If I pick up ANY story from your reptotire with my eyes closed, it will still have the incredible action that only you can author. No one else even comes close.

It is the same with your latest story Black Boss. The action is mind-blowing. And it contains my favourite piece of feeling: Blacks with white wives and interracial gangbangs. Nothing excites me more. And to read your story, it also had impregnation in it. Double bonanza! The action was nothing short of spectacular. It was beautiful. A work of art.

However, something else has been going around in the back of my mind ever since I read this particular story. It seems rushed. It seems incoherent. There are too many action scenes just for the sake of being there. Make no mistakes, each scene is superbly crafted, finely balanced and the pictures and gifs are incredible. Yet, the whole story seems, for lack of better word, flat... A Fan

[Comment from RLM: This reader's e-mail continues for several more paragraphs in which he gives me some cogent advice for future stories aimed at correcting the above problem. His suggestions are well considered, and I am doing my best to incorporate them in my next story. Thank you... RLM]

The Liberated Housewife and Switch: I enjoyed both and I thank you for the story... Prettz007. [Note from RLM: Prettz007 has written a detailed analysis and commentary on both of these stories. Interested readers may see these by clicking on the following link:

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Towers and Other Stories: I really like your stories. You pull no punches and the stories are long, which I also like. All your stories have the same basic theme - sharing a slutty wife. You should fuck with people's minds a little, though. Write a story in which the hubby looks forward to being cuckolded but then cannot handle the actual thing and beats the shit out of the guy. He ends up dumping his hot, but cheating wife for the other guy's even hotter but monogamous wife. Also, a little more girl on girl action would not be amiss. (My wife likes reading about it. Maybe someday she'll even give it a try.)

And for the record, your hottest writing was the vacation trilogy, "Sexual Transformation." How about new Chapter 4? The ladies could bring in a few family members (in-laws) and maybe a neighbor or two.

I wish we had stars to click on. You would get 5 from me. I really like your writing. Do not stop, please. My wife said only four stars - she does not like the concept of fucking strangers. She does not read porn often but she has misha8 bookmarked. One improvement in our sex life can be laid at your door. She now likes to flash her shaved little pussy at me on a regular basis. Of course I have to "Punish" such blatant behavior.

Thank you for many hours of erotic pleasure... Troglodyte.

[And thank you and your sexy wife... RLM]

Black Boss: I've been meaning to write to you about Black Boss. Very interesting story, even without graphic sex descriptions. (I actually enjoy the story line a lot more than the sex.) Your superior writing style , with only 1-2 typos were very evident in this story. You did a great job describing the attitudes of the couple, the banker, and the black leadership. (As for the bank owner, why you hire someone as ignorant of his son was of banking, as a bank officer, is beyond me.)... K

General Comment: Dear Author, I'm a very fanatic of sex stories especially concerning
1) Previously innocent than HotWives
2)Lesbian Incest, sex(including strapon) but also romantic love between not so old mother and her innocent but willing daughter.
To my experiences of many years, you're one of the most brilliant authors who reflects some intrinsic feelings of human being who wants to live the life to its very ends. Not only about females and males committing sex or to have sex but your stories reflect quite physchological instances which trig the reader's mind. My only concern, is about the possibility of adding some reluctances to your hot wifes... I also want to know if you were kindly open to accept some story ideas...one of which has giving me so much thrill recently. Thanking in advance I remain and thanks from the deep of our hot heart!... Sevgil Savgi

Domination: very nice storeis i need more like that or hot wife paula... K Man

Denise's Adddictions and Walk on the Wild Side: i have just discovered your site and love the stories. you capture my tastes to a very large degree. I am a bisexual woman who is very active in the swinging life style. i prefer women but love sport fucking guys and love to be dp, tp and more by men. love multiple women of course and mix and match. i love the use of pictures and video clips. your vocalizations are good too. love the focus on the sex and how awesome it is. being bi i wish you would bring women fucking women each other into the story. i see you do ass to pussy and i love ATM and would love seeing that in your stories. i have glanced around your stories. do you do any rough sex. slapping, hair pulling and vocal defiling. Turns me on. this must take a lot of effort and i applaud you... Kabukidance