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From "Locker Room" (Working Title), Coming Soon to Acid-Core Erotica:

Their team had won, and that was really all that mattered to Jill. As captain of the volleyball team at Rykesland High School, she was responsible for her team's success; And their success reflected directly on her. Therefore, when they didn't win, she's wasn't happy. Today, however, they'd kicked those sluts from Van Rees High across the court again and again, and she WAS happy.

Jill stepped out of the shower and toweled off, droplets of water flicking from her tanned, curvy figure and spattering on her toes. She curled them reflexively, looking down at the shiny new paint job she'd applied to her nails only yesterday, sitting on her teammate Kelly's porch, talking about the big game.

Now the game was over, and their team was victorious. Jill pulled her undies on - a black thong; She rewarded herself for victory with sexy underwear, go figure - and a baggy t-shirt with some uncreative beer slogan scrawled across the white front. Comfort clothes. She'd just started to pull on one of her socks when she heard a locker close behind her.

Kelly was leaning against her now-closed locker, towel clutched almost casually over her chest. A black cord was tied around her neck, weighted down by a strangely cut green gemstone that hung between her ample breasts. She smiled at Jill's slightly confused expression, and stepped away from the locker, towards her captain.

"What, surprised to see me? That was a great game, Jilly." Jill smiled and relaxed. Naturally on the defensive, being a girl alone in the locker room, Kelly put Jill at ease. After all, they'd been friends since before high school, since they were just little girls. Jill noticed the strange necklace draped around Kelly's neck.

"It was, yeah... Is that new? I've never seen you wear that before." Kelly looked down as though just noticing what Jill was talking about, and plucked the stone up with her fingers. She removed the cord from her neck, and cat's-cradled it between her fingers, the big green gem swinging down below her wrists.

"Isn't it great? Got it from my granny's old treasure trove; I used to play with this jewelry all the time when I was a kid and mom and granny were in the other room. Hehe, got in so much trouble when they found me, but the other day I came across this thing and granny just told me I could have it, that I always had more fun with it then she did..."

Jill was nodding, watching the gem. It seemed like it glowed a little, a light that was alien underneath the cold flourescents of the locker room. It was a strange sort of glow, and rather fascinating. Jill nodded at Kelly's words and found herself leaning back against her locker as she watched Kelly's necklace. Kelly's voice became a little more serious now as she watched Jill, raising the necklace up like a pendulum, swinging back and forth.

"Watch the necklace, Jill. Gaze at the pretty gem..." Jill continued to nod in acquiescence with Kelly's words.

"Pretty gem... Yeah... Uhh... I like it..." Jill was rapidly becoming mesmerized by the glowing pendant, her highly suggestible young mind yielding to its strange power quickly... Kelly'd had some success on her cat and younger sister with the gem before, but Jill was even easier, easier by far. And that made Kelly very happy indeed. She stepped closer to Jill, swinging her necklace back and forth. Her captain followed its motion, starting to sway in place, back and forth, her eyes growing heavy and unfocused.

"Look at the gem, Jill. Focus on its light, you're falling into the light, your mind is going blank."

"Uhh.. blank? Umm... Light... Focus... uhh... yeah." Jill felt totally dazed, only half-aware of what Kelly was saying. She was one of the smarter girls anyway, and Jill never really followed a lot of that stuff, she just smiled and nodded and was glad to have Kelly around. They were good friends after all. She was pretty confused now though, whatever Kelly was babbling about, Jill just felt warm and sleepy, she just nodded, wanting to agree with whatever Kelly said so she could get it over with. That gem was making her so dizzy...

"Your pretty little head is empty, Jill, no thoughts of your own are left to bother you. None at all. It's all a perfect little empty shell, just doing whatever I tell you, and not thinking or worrying about stuff at all. Isn't that nice Jilly, to not worry 'bout stuff?" Kelly was right next to her captain now, patting her on the cheek as she swung her pendant back and forth before the hypnotized blonde's wide eyes,eyes that were staring to glow fainly green, as the gem's spell wove itself around her will.

"Uhhh.. Yeah... whatever you say Kelly..."

"That's right, Jilly, whatever I say. Anything Mistress Kelly says, you must obey. Ain't that right?" Jill's head was spinning, and any pretense of conscious thought Jill once had was long gone now, she was running on autopilot, and the navigation was coming from Kelly's eager lips.

"Yes.. That's right.. I must obey Mistress Kelly."

"Yesss... Oooh, that sounded good. That's your only thought now, slut. Uh, Jill. Jill, repeat. Repeat it." Kelly put the necklace back around her neck and Jill's glowing green eyes remained fixed on the gem, as she swayed in place, nodding agreement with Kelly's commands.

"I must obey Mistress Kelly.. I must obey Mistress Kelly.. uhh.. I must obey Mistress.. " Jill swayed in place as she spoke, her voice devoid of feeling, or thought. Her mind was blank except for the one sentence that passed her lips. Kelly was resisting the urge to tear her clothes off right now, so excited was she by the culmination of her plan, the scheme she couldn't get out of her head since she found this pretty gem, and its special secret. She kissed the spaced-out team captain square on the lips, and the dazed girl didn't respond.

"Now.. Jilly, strip off those clothes, and serve your Mistress." Jill immediately slipped her shirt over her head, presenting her breasts for Kelly's inspection. She held them out for a moment, and seemed to toy with them absently, before hooking her thumbs through the waistband of her thong and sliding it downwards. Kelly watched Jill remove her undies from those long, tanned legs and licked her lips at the sight of her captain's perfect body. She started to strip herself as mesmerized Jill slowly knelt at her feet, reaching for her teammate-turned-Mistress whose body anxiously awaited her touch.