This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Ageplay
Dialog with Daughter
By
Don A. Landhill <DLandhill@aol.com>
"Have you been a good girl today?"
"Yes, Daddy."
"That's good. Because you know what happens to naughty little girls, right?"
"Yes, Daddy, they get spanked, hard, on their bare bottoms."
"That's right, Precious. So you be a good girl, and daddy won't have to spank you."
"I will, I promise."
"That's my girl. Did you clean your room as I asked you to?"
"Yes, daddy, I did."
"Good Girl. I'll just go see how neat it is."
"But Daddy, you don't have to – I cleaned it, really I did."
"That's OK, it won't take me a minute."
"But – ohhhhh...."
"Young lady! Cleaning your room does NOT mean stuffing everything into your closet. I am very upset with you. Go get your punishment paddle, right now!"
"But daddy, please, I was just –"
"I said now, missy. One... two... three...."
"All right, all right. Here it is. Don't get in such a lather."
"Don't give me any sass, brat. Bend over. Bottom Bare. – You are not to disobey me. You are not to lie to me. I expect better behavior than this from you."
"OUCHH! It hurts. Stop, Daddy, please stop, I'm so sorry."
"You should be. I'll stop when I think you've learned your lesson, because you were a very naughty little girl."
"Please daddy, I'm so sorry. I'll be good, ever so good."
"All right, get yourself into the corner, on your punishment stool."
"Please daddy–"
"NOW, or do you need a dose of the strap?"
"Oh No, I'm going I'm going – ouch, the stool hurts."
"Are you ready to behave now?"
"Yes, Daddy, please I'll be ever so good."
"Very well then, you may come down. Give Daddy a hug."
"I love you, Daddy."
"I love you too, Precious. But this had better not happen again. You are too old to need to be punished for not cleaning up your room. At twenty-eight, I expect better from you."
"Yes, Daddy."
The End
© Copyright D. A. Landhill, 01 September 2003
Reviews
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
Good Story. Well written. I really can almost see the spanking happening and the corner time on the stool.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
This was a cute age-play story. I love calling the one I love and play with Daddy and I am no where near the little-girl-age either. This was not exceptionally original but it was very good for what it is; naughty girl shoves all her stuff in closet and earns a bottom paddling. I enjoy the read very much.
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
OK, to start with age play eludes me. This one read like most of them seem to do (my opinion of course). I don't think the punch line was funny or the payoff or whatever the author wanted me to think. As age play is with adults it seemed superfluous that s/he thought I'd think it was a real child there. Unless of course that the woman's daddy was really her father. Just not sure on this one.