This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Lines
The Importance of Being Nice to Your Fans
By
Joe Whatever
"You're Crawford, and you're late".
The pretty young woman in the school uniform looked at the teacher and stammered, "Uh...actually my name is Brittany, and I'm shooting the music video down the hall".
The doddering old man in the front of the classroom looked confused. It was hard enough substituting, but now he had a phony student!
Before he could apologize a female student interrupted.
"I know you think the old ones are stupid, Crawford, but lying makes it worse!" she said.
Brittany looked across the classroom and recognized the source of the lie as a student whom she had turned down for an autograph. Brittany shot her an angry glare as the grinning young woman winked back.
"Old and stupid indeed!" the scowling teacher grumbled as he grasped Brittany by the wrist. "The OLD ways are still the best ways, young lady!"
Brittany gasped as the old man sat down on a chair and flung her over his knee like a rag doll.
Brittany had been warned not to wander through the school in uniform, but the temptation had been irresistible. Unfortunately the eighteen year old seniors in this class were only a few years younger than Brittany.
In her in her plaid skirt and pony tail, Brittany was now just another naughty student...
Brittany's eyes flew open as the first spank landed like a hammer on the seat of her short skirt. Someone had to stop this! Someone had to tell this old fool who she was!
But as she scanned the classroom she saw nothing but smiles.
"I filed Henderson's paperwork this morning Sir", a nerdy male student in the front row said. "I believe you should be spanking her bare...."
Brittany stared at the young man in disbelief. She had indeed seen him working in the office that morning; she had laughed out loud when he stood up and revealed his childish uniform short pants.
But Brittany's smug sense of superiority vanished as her short skirt lifted and her underpants slid down to her knees.
Brittany looked up at the class. All of the boys, and a few of the girl's, were staring at her bare bottom with undisguised lust. Brittany knew what the boy's obvious excitement and the girl's gleeful satisfaction meant.
Everyone knew who she was.
But no rescue was coming.
"Perhaps we should move closer", a female student suggested. Brittany remembered laughing at the young woman that morning when the wind had raised her short skirt in front of the school building.
The Headmaster agreed, and the class quickly formed a circle around Brittany. Most of the girl's stood in front so that they could see Brittany's already tear streaked face, while most of the boy's took a port position.
"When the little slut kicks she'll show the boys everything", the smiling young woman tittered.
Brittany kicked, and cried, and wiggled as the Headmaster taught her the importance of being nice to her fans....
The End
© Copyright Joe Whatever, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Warm Hand Jack
This is an excellent story. It's quite original, and is effectively developed and rendered. The First Line is used creatively, with the unexpected turn of the identity being mistaken.
The punishment is nicely justified: it's given for the wrong reason, but is fully deserved. The fact that Brittany recognizes exactly how she's slighted each individual antagonist is much more satisfying than if their motivations were simply generalized star-envy or meanness (as might have happened in the hands of a lesser writer). In a similar vein, the fact that the teacher (not Headmaster, I think, since he's a substitute) is both doddery and new to the class makes his error believable.
I don't know who Henderson is (was this supposed to be «Crawford's paperwork»?); and several simple plurals are written as possessives (girl's, boy's). Aside from those quibbles: great!
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I really like this story where Brittany learns to be nice to her fans at the price of her fanny. The way that this young woman is spanked is very entertaining.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
The use of the first line was OK, but very far-fetched as was the plot, but that is the fun part of the story! The humor made me wince sometimes but still, if anyone every wanted to uppp-end the 'britster" this story will really tickle their fancy.