This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Ageplay
Voices
By
Joe Whatever
As the twenty-five year old teacher drove to Wallmart her neighbor's voice echoed in her head.
"If you get into trouble you can always stay at my house." he teased. "Of course my house means MY RULES!" he snickered as he mockingly rubbed his bottom.
"Uncle" Alec never missed an opportunity to tease Debbie about her petite stature and youthful appearance.
Debbie stared into her shopping cart: a T-Shirt, denim short, sandals, and childish panties decorated with smiling Scooby Doos.
The childish underpants were a stark contrast to the expensive silk lingerie Debbie usually wore. Debbie rationalized that she was just taking advantage of the low prices while enjoying some harmless nostalgia.
As she walked to her Corvette Debbie Alec's voice once again invaded her thoughts.
"Regardless of age, any woman who chews gum should be spanked...bare fanny!"
Alec's casual addition of the words, "bare fanny" had sent a tiny chill down Debbie's spine. Maturity and modesty meant nothing. The equation was simple: bratty insolence = panties down!
The Convenience Store Manager barely glanced at the elegantly dressed lawyer with the shopping bag when she went into the restroom.
But a few minutes later he curtly ordered the scantily clad teenager who emerged from the restroom to "Quit loitering before I call the police!"
Dazed and disoriented by her dramatic loss in status Debbie obediently scampered out of the store...after purchasing an enormous pack of grape bubble gum.
As she locked her adult clothes and purse in the trunk, Alec's voice again echoed through her mind.
"You'd better not ever loose your purse, little girl" Alec had warned. "Without ID or money, no one would believe you're twenty-five!" "And if you ended up at my house, I'd tan your bare fanny!"
Debbie was keenly conscious of her snug Scooby Doo panties as she drove to Alec's house. Debbie shuddered as she imagined herself squirming helplessly over his knee, frantically pleading to keep her panties pulled up while he teasingly ran his finger over the laughing Scoobys.
Debbie winced. Scooby Doo! Why did she have to pick SCOBBY DOO? The childish underpants eliminated the faintest hope that Alec might spare her the indignity of an underpants downer.
By now her panties were so wet she feared that poor Scooby might drown. Of course when Alec discovered her shameful arousal, it would mean extra spanks...
Debbie carefully locked her keys in her car. Debbie was now a helpless teenager, stranded miles from home with no money and no ID. Until her husband returned from his business trip next month, Debbie would be totally under Alec's thumb.
Alec would be delighted that Debbie had no other clothes. Debbie shuddered as she imagined Alec driving her to the mall to buy the sort of skimpy teen tease clothes Debbie hated...but Alec loved!
The voices had stopped, but the faux teenager could definitely feel the butterflies in her tummy as she blew an enormous purple bubble and waited for Uncle Alec to answer the door...
The End
© Copyright Joe Whatever, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
Another story I wished I could read as a whole novella. This prelude whets one's appetite like no other.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
The flow of this story was disturbed by a few grammar errors. For example: this line made me stop and read it over. «As she walked to her Corvette Debbie Alec's voice once again invaded her thoughts.» There were a couple more that I will not quote in this review. Now, the story was very interesting. I enjoyed the word pictures. I sure hope there is a second chapter to be posted later. I wonder if the writer of this story lives in the USA. I ask this question because of the spelling of Wal-Mart. I guess that the location that she was to be picked up had been pre-arranged but I wish that point was a little clearer. Was he her neighbor or did he live miles away. Just where was she standing, while she waited for him to come get her. Next door in her driveway or miles away. This writer sure has enough writing talent that they should work at the craft. Was she going to stay with Alec for days or weeks or was if just for one night. I look forward to reading more stories by this author.
Kessily
Mmm the anticipation of the first spanking...I think we all remember this. I think a lot of spankos (subs, bottoms, brats) have fantasies about being trapped completely by a Dominant character. This picture of an adult woman in Scooby Doo panties is especially adorable. Nice piece!