This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Verse
Transformations
By
Joe Whatever
When I met with Helen at the Mall,
They scrubbed my nails and then my face
The uniform was quite a buy
"A changing room?" "Don't be shy!"
High heels were the next to go
Helen boxed up everything,
She'd stripped me of fancy clothes,
"You'll live at MY house, little one.
I knew that it was now or never,
I told myself that out in public
"She's nineteen now, but I'm still older..."
Skirt up! Drawers down! Over her knee!
The sounds of laughter, cheers, applause
They didn't see my Ph.D.
When you kick you legs, you know
"Please stop!" I cried, "I'll be good"
She left my panties on the floor
The transformation was so fast
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The End
© Copyright Joe Whatever, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great poem! I really enjoyed this. The poem told the entire story from beginning to end; in such a way, we were able to catch the whole picture here. I bet she really was having second thoughts whether she should have told her all to her former student.
Thanks a lot.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
Well, I do think the author here did a really fun job of turning the tide with a twist of the tongue. What a fun release for a spanko teacher, to come under the control of a former student. I wonder how many teachers and students have had that fantasy themselves? Since I'm WAY more of a bottom I, of course, think I'll picture myself as this very teacher later on when I'm daydreaming. <eg> Thought the verse had a good beat and would have been easy to dance too. (Oh man did I just show my age?)
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Very interesting (and very complete!) description of a role-reversal scenario, capped off by a public spanking (one of my favorite scenarios from way back). One or two grammatical errors, but that's a minor quibble. All in all, a very impressive effort.