This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Edge
Going Without Breakfast
By
Plierla Fesserla <PlierlaFesserla@hotmail.com>
Andrew stumbled across his dad's secret hiding place. Amongst the find, his favourite is a WS DVD which inspires his latest idea.
During summer camp, Andrew and his school-friends find an old building on an isolated and disused airfield. Using it for their clandestine activities, it is now a casino.
Girls, from various forms in their school, are led into the casino wearing a variety of different outfits; school uniform, swimsuit, leotard, lycra cycle shorts and t-shirt, khaki shorts and top, white tennis gear with a very short pleated skirt. Three of the youngest girls wear nothing but their knickers, pale green, yellow, and a third in virginal white brushed-cotton.
The girls have each been forced to consume six litres of water since rising, an additional litre every hour as the morning progresses. Casino Members watch very closely because the first to identify that a water-baby has lost control will have the pleasure of administering a well-deserved spanking. Not so noticeably obvious for girls wearing skirts, all water – babies will undoubtedly be frequently tested for accidents. Water-babies will be assisted after a spanking by one of three fire-fighters who will apply cool cream to their smarting buttocks and issue an identical set of dry clothes.
Fire-fighters are dressed in very short red PVC jackets with hoods and red Wellington boots, nothing else. The fire-fighters are being rested after yesterday's severe canings; given time to heal. However, it is highly likely that their tempting bums will attract the occasional stinging slap. They may well also be tested from time to time.
Each member has a champagne flute and can demand a glass-full from any water-baby, this being their only chance of painless relief, but failure to comply will earn a spanking and likely as not, further demands from other members and more spankings. Clearly after a flooding, that water-baby will be a prime candidate for repeated drinks requests.
Suddenly the girl in the leotard is in tears, one hand ashamedly over her eyes, the other clutching lower down as pee runs between her fingers and down her legs. Four members rush towards her; only the first to test the wetness will spank her. The gaming continues....
Hours later the gambling ends: three water-babies with the least winnings all receive a caning, six strokes from each member, one unfortunate also suffers another like caning for being the girl with the largest collection of wet clothes. Then Andrew, the most successful gambler, has the privilege of initiating the debutante; Ginny in the white pants. She is held face down over the roulette table and persuaded to empty her bladder. Andrew lowers her sodden pants to expose her already sore bottom then canes her pert young bum at length. When ready, he spreads her striped cheeks and forces himself into her tight virgin anus.
"UUURRRRGGGHHHH." Andrew wipes the stickiness from his tummy and sheets. This latest fantasy is developing nicely.
He notices the bedside clock. "Shit. I'm going to be late for school!"
The End
Why edge and not child?. It's not the Water Sports but the abduction, non-con abuse and anal rape that push it into edge for me, even though it is just his imagination.
© Copyright Plierla Fesserla, 29 August 2003
Reviews
Pablo <pablo.stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
What's wonderful about this piece is the complete lack of any (apparent) restraint or self-consciousness. That's really how it ought to be in this category. It more than makes up for the slightly underwritten quality of the prose – it's a synopsis for a story, rather than the story itself.
The fantasy presented here is fabulously fresh and nicely twisted. Much credit to the author for laying themselves so bare.
Patricia <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
This is definitely edge and edge is not easy to write. The story is clearly written, moves along at a good pace, and follows the guidelines of the contest. To those whom stories of this nature appeal, it should be well received. My only question, is what is a «WS DVD»? However, not knowing this, did not detract from the story, which is a plus. I'm sure we can all relate to erotic dreams and the waking results.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
The edge of water-sports is the only edgy part of this story. The story is more of an instructional monolog, "Let's have a party." We have firefighters, I'm not sure of their gender, water-babies in different dress-up modes, girls here, and Andrew about to miss breakfast. For me, edge should feel more stressful. I found this story cute. Very good but cute. Now, please excuse me I have to go tinkle.