This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Archivist's note: This was posted under the additional pen name Velindre <velindre@starmail.com> and also re-posted as edge.
Ow!
By
The cane fell painfully across her bare bottom.
Ow!
"I've told you to avoid hyperbole! No exaggeration! Understand?
Ow!
"It is a weakness in your stories. Understand?"
Ow!
"If you don't drop this bad habit I'll have to thrash you within an inch of your life. Understand?"
The End
© Copyright Ebro, 28 August 2003
Reviews
Trisha Allen <trishaallen(at)mindspring(dot)com>
Great mini-saga! I really enjoy the quick scene. I have to admit I had never heard of a hyperbole, so I was quite interested especially since it had to do with writing. So, I looked the word up, using the Internet. I was really surprise. Now I know to be more careful! Seriously, I enjoyed this mini-saga. It showed the main scope, kept my curiosity up and told so much in only forty-nine words. Amazing! I didn't feel the story was rushing or constrained for words either.
Mary <GemLadi(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a cute little story, and one that I wish I could have at times.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
I found this to be a cute and complete story. It had nice word pictures. I don't know how the writer was able to pack so much into so little. I must admit that I could not do it. I wonder what this writer would capable of doing if they had unlimited words. Thanks for writing this.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Perhaps the caner should be thrashed within an inch of his life. Very nice job.