This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
The following is about a teenager, Katie and her guardian, Gary. It takes place at 3 a.m. on a weekday.
Getting Caught
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Gary saw her come through her bedroom window. He had been sitting in one of her chairs, waiting for her. Naturally, it was dark inside her room, so she had no idea he was there. She climbed in and was about to go to her bed when the light turned on.
"Just what do you think you are doing, young lady? Where have you been?" Gary thundered.
"Gary? I...I didn't see you there." she said meekly.
"Answer me right now. Where were you?" asked Gary.
"I...I was at a friends house." she said.
"You are grounded. I can't believe your audacity at breaking my rule of not leaving the house." Gary seethed through his clenched teeth.
"I'm sorry!" she said
"Not as sorry as you're going to be" Gary threatened. He pulled a straight-backed chair from her vanity and placed it in the center of her room.
"Come here" Gary ordered.
"Why?" she asked.
"How dare you question my authority! You naughty little girl, acting like a child, breaking my rules and now sassing me!! You know you deserve a spanking and you're going to get one! Now, come here!" Gary yelled. He sat down in the chair.
She hung her head down, and slowly went toward him. She started to lay over his knee, but he stopped her.
"No, on the bare. Get up and take your panties off" Gary said.
"No! Not my panties! Please, Gary, no" she pleaded.
"Very well, then, I'll remove them" said Gary. He roughly pulled her panties down to her knees. She felt so ashamed.
"Bend over, NOW!"
And with that, Gary started to spank her. As he spanked her, he lectured: "You should be ashamed of yourself, acting like a little spoiled brat, well now you're going to get a good, hard spanking right on your bare bottom just like you deserve!"
"You're right! I deserve it! Please spank me hard, Gary! It's the only way I'll learn my lesson! I know I've been a bad girl and deserve a spanking on my bare bottom! I'm so ashamed!" she choked out as he continued to spank her.
Gary continued to spank her for a long while, until she was sobbing and begging for his mercy.
"Have you learned your lesson, young lady?" Gary asked as she lay across his lap, limp.
"Oh, Yes, Gary, I have. I know I deserved this. I will be a good girl from now on, I promise" she whimpered.
"Get up" Gary ordered.
She got up from his lap, and pulled her panties back up.
Then she took his hands, turned them palm side up and kissed them, and with tears still fresh on her face, said "Thank you, Gary, for spanking me on my bare bottom. I promise I won't misbehave again!" she cried.
Until next time, she thought.
The End
© Copyright Jade 2300, 25 August 2003
Reviews
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Good job!
This feels like a role play scene of a teenager and Gary spanking together. This doesn't feel like a teenage child being caught by Gary doing something wrong. For me, it feels too top or dom balanced to be a true teenager/adult relationship. This distinction between playing pretend child and playing real child is subtle and very personal and perhaps flawed. I view playing pretend child as an easy way to access age play and to feel like the world can be put together into its right order. I view playing real child as a way of becoming and feeling the emotions of a child or my inner child. As I said, the distinction is subtle and very personal.
I enjoyed exploring ideas of age play by reading this story.
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
This is a basic formula spanking story. It didn't contain anything that set it apart in
terms of interest. The dialog, theme and characters are main stream. There is
nothing wrong with this story, just nothing special either. Same O' Same O'.
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
Good story. Easy read. The right amount of action.