This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Parody

Honorable Mention

Favorite Things

By

BCCFafnir <BCCFafnir@aol.com>
 


Long winded lectures, behavior that rankles.
Noses in corners with panties 'round ankles.
F's on report cards mean six with a cane,
When I lose count he starts over again.

Raps on the palm or a crack on the knuckles;
Doubled up belts which are held by the buckles;
Five burning welts plus one barring the gate,
If I'm caught lying I know that's my fate.

When the cane bites,
When the strap stings,
When I'm black and blue.

I simply remember my favorite things,
And hope that he's almost through.

The End

© Copyright BCC, 25 August 2003

Reviews

<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
An amusing little parody and original.

Patricia    <patricia(at)cedar(dot)net>
Cute, very cute.  You managed to pick a song I am very familiar with.  Not only do the lyrics work with the music, they can stand on their own as a poem, which is a good sign.  Nicely Done.

Ladiejj    <Ladiejj(at)msn(dot)com>
Well written stories and parodies with good meter good uses of wording to render the cries of the pleader....  LOL

This parody is cute, the author does a good job of following the meter and tone set by the original.  I like the images used here.  This is a fun little story.  It inspires the reader to sing it as they read it and also for them to add to it.  I also enjoy how this looks at the parts of being spanked that the spankee likes, the things that are here favorite.

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