This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Ageplay
The Cocoa Stain –
By
Rosy B. Goode <RosyB.Goode@newsguy.com>
"No, Auntie! I don't want a spanking!"
"You should have thought of that sooner, Terri. Now tell me why you are about to get spanked."
"I got cocoa on my best dress, but it wasn't my fault! It was because the phone rang!"
"That is not quite the whole story, missy. Now tell the rest!"
"Welllll...ummm...I wanted to wear my best dress for a little while."
"And what did I say to that?"
"Uhhh...well you said snack time wasn't the best time, but I said I would be careful and you said I could."
"And then what happened?"
"You said I should wear an apron, but I said no I would just be real careful, but I didn't know the phone was going to ring right then!"
"Accidents happen, sweetie, but that is exactly why it is good to wear an apron when you are cooking or eating with your best dress on. Now get over my lap."
"No Auntie Rose! Please! I won't do it again, honest!"
"Your future conduct does not affect a spanking you have already earned, young lady. Over my lap! Now! If I have to drag you over my lap, your little bottom is going to get a lot of extra spanks!"
"OK, but I didn't MEAN to get my dress dirty! I didn't! Please don't spank me too hard!"
"That's it, young lady, those panties are coming down right this minute and I am starting with my hairbrush! You know it is not up to you to tell me how to spank you!"
"Nooooooo! Don't take my panties down! Pleeeeaase!"
"That is not up to you either, Terri. Now you are going to take five minutes of this hairbrush, so you had better not say anything else to make it worse for yourself!"
"Oooowwwwiieeee! OWIE! I didn't MEAN to do it! Oh, it HURTS, Auntie! I'll be good!"
"I am glad <smack> to hear it, <smack> since your carelessness may have put a permanent stain <smack> right on the front of your best dress, <smack><smack> and trying to get it out will mean more work for me." <smack><smack><smack>
"I'm sorrrryy! I'm SORRY Auntie! REALLLY! OwieowieowieowieEEEE!"
"That is good <smack> to hear, <smack> but you will still take <smack> the rest of your spanking. <smack><smack>
The spanks went on and on, while little Terri wailed and sobbed and promised and apologized to Auntie Rose, but when Auntie says five minutes, she means five minutes, and Terri's bottom was bright red and very sore when Auntie was finished. Terri sniffled over Auntie's lap.
"I'm sorry Auntie. Next time I will listen to you."
"I am glad to hear it. Now give me your dress wait in the corner in your petticoat while I work on the stain, and you had better hope it comes out!"
Terri stood in the corner, sniffling and hoping hard! Next time she really would listen when Auntie Rose said to wear her apron!
The End
© Copyright Rosy B. Goode, 24 August 2003
Reviews
Mary <Gemladi(at)aol(dot)com>
This was an interesting little story that I really did enjoy, the bantering back and forth was
very real. All in all a well written story, that I would love to see a sequel of.
Redhawk <redhawk(at)screaminet(dot)com>
Excellent Story. No grammar problems. Well written. Has spanking
through and through. I really enjoyed reading this.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
I totally enjoyed this story. I found it to be a well crafted story. It had a
beginning, a middle and a end. The word pictures were very clear and interesting.
This story had a nice flow to it. I totally missed the fact that this was an Age Play
story on first read. With that knowledge pointed out to me, this was even more
enjoyable. The writer captured the inter-play between the spanker and the spankee.
I don't remember reading any other Auntie Rose story. I think the author wanted to
indicate that this was just one of a series of stories that either had already been posted or they
intend to post. I will be looking for more, if the writer does continue to write these
delicious stories in the future. I think how the spanking was presented in this story was
interesting. I would almost hear the spanks. Maybe this story is one that fits neatly
into the limited number of words allowed for an entry in SSC. I thought that the story was
complete as wrote. Most of the time, I wanted to see what the writer could do with an
unlimited number of words. They did fine with an SSC entry but they seemed to lack
something that a larger number of words might have helped. Thanks to the writer for this
one.