This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Parental Affection
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
She was furious when she found Spanko magazines in her son's bedroom drawer.
And a cane propped up inside his wardrobe, too!
She'd teach him!
She confronted him, and swished the cane.
"Get your pants down!"
After the beating, he smiled.
"Gee! Thanks, mom. Nice to have you join us."
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 21 August 2003
Reviews
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Ouch! I didn't see that coming from the title.
Of course, the idea here is one toyed with by most of us with grown kids, and the universal reaction has been, "If my kids join this group, I'm out of it!"
Good job.
Sir Hal <janhaltn(at)earthlink(dot)net>
This is a very cute story. I do have one question. The very list line of this story
uses the pronoun «us». Hummmm I wonder who «us»
are. The son and who? Could it be the father? Will the mother be on the
receiving end of that cane in the next story. The writer packed a lot into such a small
number of words. Good job!
Pablo <pablo(dot)stubbs(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A neat practical illustration of the fact that someone who didn't understand the kink might
get things terribly backwards in this looking-glass world. Like some of the best mini-sagas,
this one feels like a strip-cartoon, with the final line as the gag in the final frame.