This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Child
Another fractured fairy tale.
Little Red Riding Hood Comes Visiting
By
Y Lee Coyote <YLeeCoyote@juno.com>
"Stay in the house and NO TV." she snapped. "And do your homework, children. I'll be back in an hour." she concluded leaving Hansel and Gretel alone in the house.
"Right on schedule." said Hansel knowing that she would be gone for at least four hours. He stepped to the window and whistled. A minute later Red came in with her basket of goodies. The girls kissed as Hans investigated what Granny would never taste. After they finished the wine, they decided to play house. A couple of years earlier, Hans would never have agreed but now he had very different ideas about how much fun it was. They all loved playing grownup.
"Red, how is granny?" asked Gretel in her best step-mother voice.
"Just fine, mother. She loved the wonderful goodies you sent." replied the naughty little girl.
"You're lying, child. I had to go past her house today and the doctor was there. I told you what would happen the next time you lied." Hans interjected.
"Yes, daddy." squeaked the chagrined girl. "But please don't spank me. I promise I'll never lie again. Please, daddy. Pretty please." she pleaded.
But it did not do her any good. Authoritarian Hans undid the button of her red hooded cloak letting it fall. Then he pulled the willing girl over his lap. He held her red skirt up with one arm while simultaneously yanking down her red panties down to her ankles with the other. Hans admired her cute butt and his young manhood rose in salute (which she could feel pressing into her tummy). At the same time he began to spank her – hard. He watched how his hand prints formed and then blurred. She kicked, dislodging her panties, as he spanked. All of her squirming afforded him a good view of her sex as he worked to turn her bottom her favorite color.
Gretel was not to be left out of this. She began to use the big, wide, heavy, oak hair brush on Red's already red butt. Red was soon yelling in earnest and totally caught up in her emotions.
"She dripping ready, sis." declared Hans. "She really randy." he continued reacting to the pheromones oozing from her every pore.
The spanking stopped and Gretel laid down on the floor with her legs spread and lifted up her skirt revealing her own wet pussy. Hans shifted Red to her knees with her mouth on Gretel's sex with her fiery red butt jutting up. Hans opened his own britches allowing his hard shaft to spring free. He got behind Red, slipped on a condom and easily drove his anxious tool deep into her dripping hole.
They fucked hard like teens can and do without letup each coming several times. Eventually they stopped and dressed.
"It been almost three hours, Red, you better go for the wardens will be home soon but come again next week." Hans and Red French kissed while he caressed her flaming red butt.
"Bring Big Bad too." added Gretel.
The End
© Copyright A.I.L., 17 August 2003
Reviews
Brad <b_radleym(at)yahoo(dot)com(dot)au>
Naughty version of well-loved bedtime stories. I wish Big Bad Wolf was part of the story though. Or stepmother spanked all the kids involved. LOL.
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
I'm not sure I'd call this a fractured fairy tale – more like shattered completely! I would have felt more comfortable reading the story, though, if the author had revealed that the characters were teens (as opposed to the young children they're generally portrayed as) earlier in the story.
Jessie
I don't think this is correctly labeled child when it involves characters old enough to be involved in sexual situations. There are also problems with punctuation and point of
view. However, the sex is hot and the story is certainly original.
Organizer's Note: According to the rules, the Child category includes any entry with a spankee under eighteen.