This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-Saga
Tradition
By
Valerie Meilong <meilong@excite.com>
"There," he said. "Finished."
I got off my boyfriend's lap.
He pulled me close, kissed me, and gently rubbed the eighteen burning cane-stripes on my bottom. Then he pulled up my knickers.
"Ready to go downstairs now?" he asked.
"Indeed yes," I answered. "I'd like another slice of my birthday cake."
The End
© Copyright Valerie Meilong 09 August 2003
Reviews
Kessily
This was a relatively well written piece but it just seems like a small chunk of a larger story. It doesn't really stand on it's own very well. Being caned across someone's lap is an unusual twist though...it can be done of course but it usually isn't so that did make it a bit more interesting
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
It's not often I'm surprised by a mini-saga, but the ending to this one took me completely unaware. I have to wonder a bit about the effectiveness of an over-the-knee caning, but I suppose it could be a short cane
Pam <PamiMac(at)aol(dot)com>
Not sure what to say here. Instead of a story I felt it was a set up for a punch line...a joke that wasn't all that funny to me. Not offensive, just not very funny.