This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mimi-saga
The Proper Motivation
By
Starship <starship_64@yahoo.com>
"Didn't we agree that spankings would help you do better at work?" I asked my wife.
"Yes sir," she replied quietly.
"Then you've got a serious belt whipping coming young lady."
She nodded, then padded off toward the bedroom to prepare, leaving me holding her Employee of the Month certificate.
The End
© Copyright Starship, 09 August 2003
Reviews
Ted <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
There is a Twilight Zone, or O. Henry, twist to this almost New Yorker quality cartoon
Jon <mrheadmstr(at)aol(dot)com>
This tiny little shorty has everything that could possibly be shoehorned into fifty words, and feels just perfectly filling. Love the twist at the end
Kent Stoneking <kentls01(at)msn(dot)com>
Neat use of the mini-saga format to explore the carrot disguised as a stick theme. I like the way that, apparently, the wife didn't get the spanking until after she'd won Employee of the Month.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
Initially, I felt surprised by the ending, because she was being spanked for doing so well, but then I realized that she was being spanked for doing so well which made me feel all warm and happy for her. She did a good job earning her spanking.