This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice.  The author would appreciate your comments

Category:  Mini-saga
 

Bend Over

By

Cate Bronte <ouchigirl@hotmail.com>

It was a thunderous blow.  He heard a sickening swish followed by the predictable thud and a great howl.  He squeezed his eyes shut and kicked hard.  When he opened them, there it was: the red card.  He left the field grimacing. Victoria would blister his bum when he got home.

The End

© Copyright Cate Bronte, 04 August 2003

Reviews

Lori    <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
After reading a good mini-saga the reader shouldn't have to ask to have the story explained.

"Could someone explain this mini-saga to me?"

I've asked others to read this story, they didn't understand it either.  A good short story should make sense to all readers.  A great short story should cause some of the readers to feel a special connection to the story.  There should be an emotional connection, it should make you smile, laugh, or think.  And not because of confusion.  This story just blew by me. 

<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
I'm sorry.  I just don't get it!

Ted    <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
OK, sports fans, this one tells a story smartly and trenchantly.  The author helps the reader by naming the antagonist Victoria and by titling the story Bend Over, rather than Bend It.

Huh Chuh   <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I wasn't sure if he was having his tarot card reading done or if he was playing a sport until the end of this story.  I assume that he made a mistake in the game and drew a red card and therefore Victoria is going to whup his ass.  The initial blow in the story caused me to believe that I had walked in at the middle of this spanking.  Thanks!