This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
Bend Over
By
Cate Bronte <ouchigirl@hotmail.com>
It was a thunderous blow. He heard a sickening swish followed by the predictable thud and a great howl. He squeezed his eyes shut and kicked hard. When he opened them, there it was: the red card. He left the field grimacing. Victoria would blister his bum when he got home.
The End
© Copyright Cate Bronte, 04 August 2003
Reviews
Lori <peachesicu(at)aol(dot)com>
After reading a good mini-saga the reader shouldn't have to ask to have the story explained.
"Could someone explain this mini-saga to me?"
I've asked others to read this story, they didn't understand it either. A good short story should make sense to all readers. A great short story should cause some of the readers to feel a special connection to the story. There should be an emotional connection, it should make you smile, laugh, or think. And not because of confusion. This story just blew by me.
<justacatfish(at)aol(dot)com>
I'm sorry. I just don't get it!
Ted <quixotoes(at)aol(dot)com>
OK, sports fans, this one tells a story smartly and trenchantly. The author helps the reader by naming the antagonist Victoria and by titling the story Bend Over, rather than Bend It.
Huh Chuh <huhchuh(at)yahoo(dot)com>
I wasn't sure if he was having his tarot card reading done or if he was playing a sport until the end of this story. I assume that he made a mistake in the game and drew a red card and therefore Victoria is going to whup his ass. The initial blow in the story caused me to believe that I had walked in at the middle of this spanking. Thanks!