This short story is an entry in the 2003 Soc.Sexuality.Spanking Summer Short Story Contest and is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments
Category: Mini-saga
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Hi Honey
There is a big bow wrapped around my melons and one on the back of my panties, a red one, so you can match the color after a lay over your strong thighs, wet from me. Looking forward to a sore jaw too.
So long....
Your careful e-mailer me.
The End
© Copyright Peachesicu, 27 July 2003
Reviews
Reviews
Haron <haron(at)newsguy(dot)com>
A neat little story. It plays very well on what for many readers will be the core of their kinks. The form and the content go very well together, amplifying the effect.
Don A. Landhill <dlandhill(at)aol(dot)com>
A very nice mini-saga, tells a clear story, and leaves me imagining what comes next. But I was puzzled by the "sore jaw" she expected.
Warm Hand Jack
Here's a lovely example of flirting-promising mail -- what guy wouldn't want to rush home after reading that? Not only the hard spanking (red, not bright pink), but also «wet from me»!
There's a swift change from the expected, though, when it suddenly turns edgy (for me, anyway) with the «sore jaw » reference. Of course, it could just mean she's looking forward to a long talk; the interpretation depends on knowing more about their practices than we do. But careful e-mailer suggest to me that she means it literally and physically. Dark! And by the way: very well composed.